[Report This]Date: 05/04/2010 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
love this story already. their banter is so funny! :D
and Spike's really pissed if anyone else hurts Buffy that isn't him... i wonder why?... *wink*
hope you update soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks Shard! Of course he would be! Only he has the right to hurt her! Update is realllll soon!
[Report This]Date: 05/04/2010 - 04:20 am Title: Chapter 5
aww! nice build up of camaraderie between the two.
Author's Response: thanks quirks. I know it won't happen right away, but these two really need each other, despite the past
[Report This]Date: 05/02/2010 - 01:37 am Title: Chapter 5
Is Buffy at full slayer strength? I hope so since she has to go out to fight. Is Spike forced to stay there and worry (I hope he'll worry) about what is happening to her? Also, Jack can go on my shit list with Maggie and Riley. I'm guessing since Spike is all alone now he can relieve the tension that seeing Buffy in her outfit did.
Author's Response: Yeah west, she's full slayer strength. Yeah, jack is an ass isn't he? keep reading to find out Spike's reaction!
[Report This]Date: 05/01/2010 - 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
Great the way they're beginning the slow progress towards becoming a team. Love the flirty banter. Wondering how those on the 'outside' are reacting to Buffy's disappearance.
Author's Response: I love writing their banter, so much fun. Keep reading, to answer you're question *rubbing hands together evilly*
[Report This]Date: 05/01/2010 - 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
I really hope these commandos get what they deserve...
Loved Buffy's and Spike's snark / banter.
Author's Response: Thanks cordy, it's really fun to write!
[Report This]Date: 05/01/2010 - 02:42 am Title: Chapter 5
Their camaraderie is breath taking. Such a trying position allowing them to bond. Hope they can cross that line in their room at some point. Gotta suck to be soo very close to tenderness and not get it. Great chapter. Update soon.
Author's Response: *I blush* I'm really enjoying writing this story and I'm glad that you're enjoying reading it. I will update soon.
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2010 - 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Love this....please keep her classy and him possessive. We love jealous Spike! The humor in your dialogue is very good too. Thanks for a great read!!
Author's Response: My plans are numerous for these two. Hopefully you will be pleased. Your reviews help with this...hint...hint!!! Thanks for enjoying!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2010 - 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
Love the manip of Buffy in Calipso or Xena wear. The teasing and camaraderie between Buffy and Spike is very entertaining. The chapter ended with the reminder that they are nothing but mere commodities to be used, abused and discarded. Seems like Buffy's mistreatment was a bit harsh considering that she may be the main attraction, would serve well to have Jack punished for touching the money making warrior slayer. Look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Didn't Pixiecorn do a wonderful job!!!!! FYI it's Calipso. I enjoy writing the teasing and the underlying camaraderie between them. I'm glad that my thoughts are coming through in the writing. Don't you worry, Jack will get his!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2010 - 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter, can't wait to find out how Buffy's match goes. Hopefully Spike and Buffy can come up with some way to escape and make anyone who was involved in their kidnapping pay.
Author's Response: More will be coming, I promise!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2010 - 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm really enjoying this story and looking forward to the journey you'll be taken us on towards the 21st fight. I just love Buffy and Spike when they start working and supporting each other!
Author's Response: Thanks Sonja! I'm glad that you have chosen to take the trip with me!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2010 - 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is such a great story. And thank you for so faithfully updating. It really makes it nice when authors regularly update their stories--what a treat!
Author's Response: *huggles Sibb* I would like to say, thanks for faithfully reading and for your review. My readers are what keeps the creative juices flowing. The reviews are my own personal drug. Thanks for being one of my suppliers!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2010 - 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
Seeing a little enemies becoming conrads.. And the old Buffy turns Spike on .. of course. Waiting for the fights..
Author's Response: Fights will be coming soon...keep reading!
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