Reviews For Prize Fighters
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Londonian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2010 - 02:00 am Title: Chapter 6

Hello, small request to all Buffy fanfic authors...........lets drop the damnable "resolve face" thing, it abruptly sucker punched me out of the story flow. It was something funny mentioned 1 or 2 times......now with it's over use i imagine poor willow out of the blue slapping some mask on her face on que.

Author's Response: Sorry Londonian, in all the stories I have written that was the first time that I referred to the 'resolve face'. Hopefully, you were able to continue on and enjoy the rest of the story.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2010 - 03:47 am Title: Chapter 6

Guess we have to take into account what is going on outside the world of the fight. Seems that they are working to find our Slayer. Even if Cordy isn't passing the message to Angel. :) And Maggie and Riley are crossing all kinds of lines. Very interesting. Looking forward to more. Gotta see how our girl kicked random demon ass! Update soon.

Author's Response: TY Buffyrat. Yeah, I couldn't just keep going without taking a peek on the world outside of Buffy and Spike. Keep reading, major ass kicking coming up!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2010 - 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 6

Good that at last someone noticed Buffy missing. Too bad Cordelia (a bit jealous, huh?) didn't give the message to Angel. Could be Angel stumbles upon the prize fight....
(Maggie + Riley? Ewww - how could he.)
Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Well, for maggie and riley, he called her mother, she watched them with a camera and when Buffy and Riley tried to get groiny she called to stop them. Plus, Maggie trying to kill Buffy, why? Cuz a deep seeded lust, that's why!!!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2010 - 09:26 am Title: Chapter 6

the Scoobies have a lot of work to do.... but that's what they're good at. i'm only concerned about Willow finding Riley and Maggie..(Riley and Maggie??!! eeewwwww...and with whip..)! now i reeeealy need some spuffy in the next chappie to forget that little bit of information ;)
Cordy wants to save Angel from his broodiness... i wonder if her plans would work...or if Angel would soon find out..
thanx for the update! can't wait for another...seriously... XD

Author's Response: Thanks Shard *blushing* I know, everyone is saying ewwww on that! I just felt that it was a side of the Initiative never explored. I felt there relationship was a little too creepy for my taste, so hense exploiting that!

Reviewer: victoria2 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2010 - 06:32 am Title: Chapter 6

Such a good story.......but the bit with Riley and Maggie? Totally gross. LOL. That's gonna squick me for awhile.

update soon?

Author's Response: Update soon!

Reviewer: westwingwolf Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2010 - 01:26 am Title: Chapter 6

Now that I've got the image of Maggie and Riley in my head, I'm going to need Naked Spike to get rid of it. And I'm going to need it now!

Author's Response: Sorry west! had to be done!!!

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2010 - 12:47 am Title: Chapter 6

I keep trying to like Cordelia but--nope, she really is just a self-absorbed brat. I certainly hope she gets it from all concerned. In the meanwhile--I'm loving this story!

Author's Response: Thanks Sibb! Cordelia is just being Cordelia. I loved writing her, never did before.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2010 - 11:23 am Title: Chapter 6

Glad Willow's noticed Buffy's missing. Maggie & Riley? eeww...

Author's Response: Maggie and Riley...I know but my reasons are explained on PamS' review...he he

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2010 - 11:23 am Title: Chapter 6

Not good Cordelia.. a little jealousy there. And yuck on Maggie and Riley.

Author's Response: Cordelia is just being cordelia. Maggie and Riley...I've always thought there was strange tension there. He called her mother, she spied on them with a camera and during the episode The I in Team (not my world, but Joss') she called to stop them from getting groiny again and tried to kill Buffy. I just took it one yucky step further!

You must login (register) to review.