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Reviewer: Angela Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2010 - 08:28 am Title: Chapter 4 - A face from the past

How can I not dislike that Spike has a baby with another? This is what I would want for him and Buffy. It´s sad and in a way, I don´t recognize this Spike.

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Date: 05/15/2010 - 06:53 am Title: Chapter 4 - A face from the past

Good chapter

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Date: 05/10/2010 - 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Perchance to dream..

It was good that Buffy had started to think. It seems like Lily will be pregnant with Spikes child, interesting.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2010 - 11:10 am Title: Chapter 3 - Perchance to dream..

Oh crap! Lily is with child and that child will be from Spike I bet. Love the OC you created here of the woman with the white hair. She sounds a great deal like The Guardian from the End of Days episode. Nice to see this version of Spike meeting this woman and she telling him he has a destiny.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2010 - 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Blood of Seven

A good chapter.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2010 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Blood of Seven

So Buffy still doesn't know about Spike? Everyone concealing his return from her 'for her own good', no doubt. It's not going to be pretty when she discovers the deception. I was suspicious of Lily because she seemed to good to be true. Lorne's appearance has largely dispelled that suspicion. So glad to see Spike with the gem, looking forward to his discovery of the daylight world.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2010 - 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Blood of Seven

Lily has given Spike quite a lot of support. Now Lorne has joined the story and trusts Lily. I'm still wondering if Lily has her own agenda.

Wouldn't be surprised if Spike decides to stay with Lily even once he meets Buffy face to face. Spike might think that Buffy has moved on and hold back from her. He might be loyal to Lily since she does treat him with more respect. Well, Lily does now. Who knows what is really going on with Lily.

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2010 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Blood of Seven

Methinks I know what happened to Wesley's father.

I like Lily. I don't want her hurt either. When Buffy shows up I don't think he'll leave Lily. Spike knows something about loyalty

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2010 - 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Lily the vampire slayer

Sorry, I think I'll sit this one out till I now more about it (or how it ends). I don't want to read Spike/Lily not sure if I can stand more of it, I need to know it will be spuffy and for now I'm not sure about it.
BTW your chapter still refuses me to make the font bigger. I'll asked Pari if she knows what is causing this. Maybe she'll be able to help, maybe not.

Author's Response: Fair enough. There will be spuffy (of course!) and there won't be any more Spike/Lily sex scenes - when I wrote her, I had in mind all the women I know who'd like to have a chance with Spike - but there's no way I'm giving out spoilers for the ending! Sorry. Oh and I really hope we can resolve the sizing issues.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2010 - 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Lily the vampire slayer

I like it, this story feels different than many others.

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2010 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Lily the vampire slayer

This is a very unusual story. I like how different it seems to be. I do think that Lily will have her heart broken, but at least she gets to have Spike for awhile.

Reviewer: Dar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2010 - 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Lily the vampire slayer

She sounds like she works for wolframhart

Reviewer: masrowan Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2010 - 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Lily the vampire slayer

Another suspicious reader. She's made long-range plans involving Spike ahead of time and clearly discussed them with her father, though not with Spike. That alone would bother me. Also, Spike seems very casually accepting of this. I'm enjoying the story and ready for darkness, but hoping for a happy ending. Hmmmmmm?

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2010 - 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1 - Lily the vampire slayer

I can't decide whether I'm supposed to like Lily or not. At first I was suspicious, then I liked her, now I'm suspicious again. I'm a bit upset with Spike for how easily he allowed her to seduce him... I hope their liaison is brief or you'll lose me...

Author's Response: Ooh, that's really interesting, what's made you suspicious of Lily? I love to get another perspective.

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