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Reviewer: Miz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2016 - 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 9

Woah nelly! Saw it coming but was still hoping it wasn't so. Great dialogue: loved the last line. Glad you went with heartwrenching rather than porny. Dark and twisty Spuffy just took on new meaning: I'm reading the way I watch horror movies - through the gaps in my fingers with my feet tucked up under me. Onwards...with definite trepidation but onwards none the less... am I going to need my axe-murderer-proof fluffy blankie? I kind of hope so... 



Author's Response: I really appreciate your comments. It means the world to me. I wrote this so long ago!

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2012 - 02:42 am Title: Chapter 9

this event was definitely surprising. i did not expect that to happen. clearly from my last review where i thought angel nabbed tara. wow. so the girl turned spike? holy crap that's just huge! what now? is he gonna get a soul? is he gonna help buffy/toy? all interesting questions. god i love this story :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you didn't see Spike getting turned. The tattoos come into play with his soul.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2011 - 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 9

Well since Buffy is the Slayer does it make sense that Spike would become a vampire. I wonder if it was Amy that turned him? it didn't feel like Cordelia. He seems able to control himself well, but he could do that on the show too.

Author's Response: The creature that turned him was an original character named Lacy. He can control himself because of the soul spell. Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: Miss M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2011 - 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 9

Wow! Surprising, was so not expecting that. Loved the last line x

Author's Response: That line was the first idea I had for this story, everything took shape around it. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: evelynferguson Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2011 - 06:16 am Title: Chapter 9

I didn't see it coming...I thought he would join Toy's fight, being a boxer. Good move.

Author's Response: This was my attempt to write a thriller glad the twists are genuinely twisty! Thanks so much for commenting!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2011 - 07:14 am Title: Chapter 9

Clearly a simple explanation is best. Fewer words seem to make it stand out more. And the scene of his turning was chilling. Especially when we are all so used to Spike being so able to fight back and hold his own. It's just hard to see him be not so strong. Wonder what Toy will do now? What kind of vamp Billy will be. Pretty awesome.

Author's Response: Glad you like it! He really is very vulnerable in this story until he figures out what and who he is. I rewrote the turning scene many times, and I'm pleased it worked for you. Film noir is all about a man going up a world that overwhelms him, and that's what I was going for in that moment.

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2011 - 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter! With all the lengths Spike tries to go to protect Tara, he isn't able to protect himself.

Author's Response: It's like that with a lot of people, especially men, I notice. They go crazy trying to help their family or friends and don't take care of themselves.

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2011 - 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 9

I like the result, if you rewrote it so many times.
Good thing Spike saw through all the bull the vampiress showed him. not that it helped much in saving his life, but still, it didn't weaken him in spirit.
I like the way this all is going. I kinda hoped Spike would become a vampire. even in series, he seemed more human-like when he was turned. his mother needed to be saved, and what we knew he did was how he saw it as the only way. Now that Tara is in the game and not mortally sick - i wonder how things will end up. he will probably need to feed. soon.
Loved the update!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Tara's going to be o.k.--for the next few chapters at least.

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