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Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2012 - 02:53 am Title: Chapter 10

the plot is definitely thickening into paste, but wow this is a whole lot on stuff going on in one chappie. i cannot believe all spike has to deal with after waking up. yeesh. i don't envy him. i fear what will happen now that buffy's there

Author's Response: Hope you like what happens! Thanks for reviewing every chapter like this.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2011 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 10

He kept his soul because of Tara, magic can do a lot.

Author's Response: Yes, I hope that part made sense in the story, it was new mythology I invented.

Reviewer: evelynferguson Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2011 - 06:23 am Title: Chapter 10

This is a great story, stop doubting yourself. Love Odin's ravens.

Author's Response: Odin's ravens were a lucky find on the internet. Thanks so much for the comments and for reading the story.

Reviewer: Puddinhead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2011 - 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 10

I picked up this story late, Minx, and I'm sorry for that. I actually became interested in it because you were as enthusiastic about Kitty Karnivore as I was :D Anyway, I'm up to chapter 10 right now and so impressed with your writing ability and your story-telling. Very cool stuff. You were rightfully nominated for that award girl! Look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response: That's incredibly sweet of you, and how awesome was Kitty Karnivore's story? Thank you for commenting and for reading.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2011 - 07:24 am Title: Chapter 10

Love Spike's two faced aide. She may have her own reasons and riddles, but it sure makes things interesting. And I love the whole tattoo being the reason for him keeping his soul. And the fact that he never bought any of that mumbo jumbo to begin with. Good thing he always played along with his sister. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I was trying to do exposition in a comic way, glad you liked it! This story is going to have tons and tons of exposition, so my goal is to do it in an engaging way. If I could have Giles singing it the whole time, I would!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2011 - 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 10

Nope, didn't dump to much in the chapter. Just the right amount of dumpage! HEHE. Love how the tattoos anchor Spike's soul in Tara. And look, another self-less vamp, Lacy! Enjoyed!

Author's Response: Thank you for the comment! I'm glad the tattoos work; I wanted to make Tara integral to the story. On the series she was often marginalized because there were so many characters. She was usually more of an aspect of Willow's development as a character. It was't until season six that she got to be more assertive, and we all know how that ended.

Reviewer: wilcorules Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2011 - 05:43 am Title: Chapter 10

I'm still liking the story. Still very original. The only thing is that sometimes I'm getting confused about who's saying what.

For instance:

He wanted to get away from there before Toy showed up to kill him. He didn’t want her to know how completely he’d failed her. Spike stood up with unnatural grace and then helped Tara to her feet.

“Your girlfriend is coming, yeah?”

“Probably.”

“Does t,t,t,that mean he’s watching us?”

A man in a black suit and long, cashmere coat appeared in front of them; he literally seemed to materialize out of nothing. His black hair was gelled in very specific spikes and his mouth was twisted into a chilling smile.

I thought Spike was talking about Penny, because of the 'yeah?', but realize that Tara was talking to Spike. Then, I'm not sure how Tara is fully up to speed, although I know that Spike filled her in, but it is briefly mentioned, maybe too briefly.

I think the transitions between scenes are coming pretty quickly with not enough info, maybe? Like I'm not quite ready for what's coming next, and then I get confused, if that makes any sense.

I think the first 8 chapters were perfect. 9 and 10 have thrown me off a bit. But I still love this story. I think there were a lot of hints in this chapter about other potential Big Bads, but the Lacy character is confusing me completely. I feel like I need to know a little more about her, so I can understand what is going on.

On to the next chapter!

Author's Response: You're right about the exchange, I should have been more specific in that exchange, especially because there's no stutter in the first line to indicate it's Tara. It was briefly mentioned that he filled her in, I extended that scene, but it was really breezy/quick shoved in between some information packed, lightning quick chapters. I will fix that exchange. My husband was also confused by the Lacy character, she appears and disappears quickly, but there's more explanation coming soon.Thank you for the insightful comment, it's super-helpful.

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2011 - 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 10

Huginn and Muginn is acceptable, since you mentioned the tattooes in previous chapters. this is all from Spike's POW and he made it clear even in the earlier chapters that he wasn't really a believer in all that - hence, you hadn't had to make it all the big deal, cause Spike didn't think of it that way.
Now, that he is 'believer' its different. You did good with all of the info :) I like it :)
now i'm off to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Glad the info dump wasn't boring. Hope it was at least a little funny.

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