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Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2012 - 06:12 am Title: Chapter 24

oh wow. so he didn't shoot her, he killed himself and is going to let her drown. holy fucking crap! i can't even believe he found them! i did he even find them?! also giles was right, destiny is like water it will always find a way. i have a feeling this prophecy is about to become fulfilled in the next few chapters :)

Author's Response: He killed himself and let her drown-literally and metaphorically. I didn't explain how he found them really well. He just followed concentrations of demon disappearances. Basically, his people in the underground noticed a lot of vampires dusting. Old fashioned detective work.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2011 - 09:35 am Title: Chapter 24

A strong chapter. Good work with Wesley how all the bad things he's done were wearing him down and how he couldnt live whit this final thing.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad Wesley was a more complicated villain.

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2011 - 01:58 am Title: Chapter 24

Aaaah, you're killing me here! I can't believe what happened and now I gotta go read more asap.

Author's Response: Thanks! I was going for tense, glad it hit the mark.

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2011 - 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 24

Oh...My! I literally had a physical reaction from this chapter! Goosebumps and everything! Your portrayal of Wesley was creepy and throughout the chapter I was on the edge of my seat reading what he was doing to everyone, and then he goes and shoots himself in the tub--completely unexpected. Brava, lady!

Author's Response: That is amazing praise. Thank you! I came up with the tub thing first and rewrote the lead up to it a dozen times in my head before I came up with that scene. Glad it kept you in suspense.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2011 - 06:42 am Title: Chapter 24

Creepy, wicked Wesley. Bastard still seems to have some way off kilter emotional compass, but I can only hope he has underestimated Buffy. Thank god he didn't actually assault her. Bastard. Hope Tara may have a trick or two up her sleeve as well. Update soon.

Author's Response: He does have a weird moral code. The scary thing about Wesley was that he felt bad about what happened to Spike not because it was a tragedy, but because of why he did it. I thought it was more effective for him not to attack her; also, I hate writing or reading that sort of thing. You get the idea of the depth of his betrayal without it, I think. Anyway, thank you for the comment!

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2011 - 04:12 am Title: Chapter 24

Wasn't expecting that! More please!

Author's Response: Thank You for commenting!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 24

Yikes! Eeep! Boo! Wesley sucks! Wow, he deserves way more than just a quick exit. I'll be checking for updates like every hour because this cliffhanger is filling me up with anxiety! Your evil. ;-)

Author's Response: Don't mean to be evil, but you know, vampire. I will not be posting a new chapter until at least the end of the week, I haven't even started on this one yet. Sorry, don't be anxious. Also, thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 24

Wow.. heartbreaking.
If Buffy drowns even for just a minute another Slayer is born, right? But in the hands of such Council I don't like the idea very much.
Beautifully written chapter..

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, another slayer would be called if she died for even a minute.

Reviewer: nerfherder Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 24

WHAT!!?? I was totally not expecting that!! Wesley's a bit touched, isn't he?? Can't wait to find out what happens next!

Author's Response: Wesley is touched. Glad I could throw in another twist, hope it isn't getting too out there. Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 24

Oh, this was riveting! You managed to make it horrifying and grotesque. I felt so horrible for all of them with the exception of Wesley, but you maybe even made me feel a bit sorry for him in some twisted way. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you, I really wanted this to be creepy and suspenseful. Wesley really does love Buffy in his own deranged way, and he can't bear to watch her die, so he concocted this way of killing her while acting out some wish fulfillment on his part. Thank you for the comment and for reading this!

Reviewer: cammi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 24

like it

Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thanks for reading and commenting!

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