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Reviewer: lilpuff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2011 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 4

Okay, I am hooked. The suspense is killing me, when will she find out it's Spike? How did he get so burned? Who brought him back? I know, too many questions. I told you I was hooked.

Author's Response: LOL All in good time... :)

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2011 - 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm falling for this story, can't wait to see what will happen next.

Author's Response: Awww. More soon. I promise.

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2011 - 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 4

Okay I'm hooked and I hate the fact that there was no more to read at this point. I hate having to wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I'm sorry? lol Another chapter later tonight, I think. :)

Reviewer: charisse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2011 - 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 4

What a wonderful story! I like the way you've set up several Cheap Plot Twists, only to let them go unused. EG1, Xander helps Buffy; when Buffy talks to Dawn, their talk *starts* to sound like a Buffy/Xander set-up--til Buffy heads it off at the pass. EG2, we know the vamp is Spike, and you keep delaying the moment when Buffy sees him. But when she finally does, she doesn't recognize him. Instead of , we get caution, ambivalence.

The lack of recognition also indicates just how badly damaged Spike is (which creates some plot tension--what happened to him?). AND, it continues the work of the first few chapters in unfolding Buffy's character to us--this isn't the punch-first-ask-later Buffy of seasons 6/7; her experiences have changed her. This Buffy acknowledges shades of grey. Come to think of it, her reaction to Dawn's prodding re: Xander indicates her current maturity, too.

In other words, you've got some real characterization going on here. Any Spuffy is good Spuffy, but I just love reading an author who knows what she's doing!

Sorry to natter on like this. I'm really looking forward to the next installment, though. Thanks for posting!

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely, detailed feedback. I certainly hope the rest of the story can live up to it! :)

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2011 - 10:56 am Title: Chapter 4

I do like this more compasionate Buffy. She's had time to grow and mature. I can't wait for her to find out that her amnesiac 'pet' vampire is Spike - and to find out how and why he's there.

Author's Response: It could take a while. He doesn't know who he is, and she can't tell yet. :)

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2011 - 07:37 am Title: Chapter 4

This story has a wonderful feeling over it. I suppose the vampire is Spike, but where has he been and why hasn't he heald from tha dragon fire? Mayby he was transported from the LA fight to this future? Anyway it will be fun to findout.

Author's Response: I presume we'll find out eventually...

Reviewer: laura Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2011 - 07:30 am Title: Chapter 4

Enjoying your story

Author's Response: Thank you! That makes me happy. :)

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2011 - 05:30 am Title: Chapter 4

"The vampire opened one golden eye far enough to make sure she could see him glaring at her, then shut it again and went back to being dead." I love that line: went back to being dead. LOL

Thanks for posting. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

Reviewer: no_promises Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2011 - 03:02 am Title: Chapter 4

After reading the first chapter here I went and read the next two on LJ, but I am glad it is all here now.
...so exciting. I am really enjoying where this story seems to be going.
If I were to hazard a guess I think that maybe, right after Spike burned up in the Hellmouth he was transported to his "home" with no memories but all the physical damage from the burning.
I wonder if this vamp really is Spike and the burns are just so bad that Buffy can't recognize him - ouch - I'm glad she didn't stake him
-looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. I hope you continue to do so. :)

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