Good work on how the characters could have moved on with their lifes. Buffy suddenly having several loves seems a lot out of characther though, but that's just a minor thing.

Author's Response: I'm not completely sure what you meant about Buffy having several loves. If you meant the part where I wrote she had had different lovers since the destruction of the Hellmouth... Well, it has been a few years since then and while I get where you're coming from (if that is what you meant), I thought it fitted into where I went with the character. The Buffy in my story is a very lonely, isolated person because she can't seem to let anybody get close to her. Plus, seeing as I haven't seen whom they made her hook up with on 'Angel', I went with what I read in fanfictions about The Immortal and added to it the fact that he wasn't special and that neither he nor anyone else could fill the void Spike had left. You're right, Buffy isn't one to sleep around, but that's not what I meant with it. Call it loneliness, call it trying to move on, call it failed beginnings of relationships. (Btw those are all post-your-review-thoughts; you really got me thinking! I didn't think much when I first wrote it, but taking a closer look, I'm still satisfied this is the setup I need for the Buffy in this story.) Thank you for your review and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. :)