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Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2012 - 02:54 am Title: Chapter 11

This chapter is fascinating. It unfolds like an exotic dream. Flashing forward to the next day right after she climaxes makes the whole situation seem suspect, like it was simply her fevered fantasy. It feels like an opium dream, which makes me wonder if this is really happening and if William is real.

Author's Response: Not disclosing too much, this isn't a dream and William is VERY real. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. To be honest, I flashed forward because I've written so many times after the climax I was out of ideas. I hope doing so didn't make it a difficult read.

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2012 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 11

Steaming chapter indeed! :) Love the way you describe everything in beautiful details...

Author's Response: Thanks, C! In my personal opinion anticipation can be just as steamy as the deed itself!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2012 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 11

Buffy is getting in deeper. There is still a lot of mystery and like that hate it at the same time. I can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Yes, far deeper! There will be much more mystery to come, but I assure you, all will be revealed in due time. Hopefully your like will far outweigh the hate and you'll continue to read. ;)

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2012 - 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 11

That was just so hot and he didn't even touch her. She will not be solving a case tonight, she will be meeting William and instantly forget her mission. Can't wait!

Author's Response: *blushing* In my mind, erotic comes in so many different ways, some far beyond sex and are everyday occurances like washing or brushing someone's hair etc. Will be posting tomorrow. Love to read whatcha think.

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2012 - 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 11

OMG this was so good, so erotic and hot. I love this Spuffy world. And I can just picture William's face when he told her to "Come" :)

Love it, MORE, MORE ,MORE !

Author's Response: *big smiles* Thanks ever so, AMI. I'm glad you're loving this world. I tried to be original, which is very difficult with so many stories out there. I'm glad this is working for you. Yeah, I was picturing his face too when I was writing it. Stern but naughty! More will be coming next Wednesday. Love to read whatcha think!

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2012 - 11:55 am Title: Chapter 11

The feeling of this story is great, a dreamy feeling of a different land and magic. Also a very erotic chapter.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you decided to follow my story here, magnus! I'm glad you're enjoying the feeling of this story. FYI--there will be many erotic chapters to come! Thanks so much for reading, enjoying, and reviewing my story!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2012 - 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 11

What?!!! YOU are the devil. Another week?! Actually that "massage" might have chilled me out for that whole length of time. "Please, Sir, I want some more." ;-) Hey, I said "might." Cheers.

Author's Response: Welcome, B to my little corner of the fanfiction world. Yeah, the massage was very relaxing, all those inhibitions just melted away! More will be up next Wednesday!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2012 - 03:53 am Title: Chapter 11

The devil you know indeed. A very interesting universe, and though she may be becoming a part of it, who really has any idea what it is. Very intrigued. Update soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you are intrigued, BR. I'm hoping you will continue to find out what is really going on. I promise, eventually, all will be revealed!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2012 - 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 11

Holy Crap. I love you BBE. You are so brilliant. Sorry this isn't detailed..I've been drinking :-P I'll come back tomorrow to give you a more detailed review; let you know my favorite parts. :-)

Author's Response: Love you too, sally! Hope you had a drink for me!!!

Reviewer: spikesgurl1 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2012 - 10:42 am Title: Chapter 11

holy hot damn, its getting so good! Cant wait to see how he continues to dominate her body! (:
Ready for more!

Author's Response: *big smile* Thanks ever so, spikesgurl1!!! I'm glad you enjoyed my smuttyness! More will be coming next week. (in more ways than one!)

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