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Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2012 - 03:00 am Title: Chapter 12

I love how each room embodies a different profligate culture that crumbled under the weight of its own decadence. The worms were amazing, making me think either vampires or Buffy has gone mad.

Author's Response: You've captured beautifully exactly what I'm trying to accomplish. The worms had major significance. Why, I can't say. Sorry to be a tease!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2012 - 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 12

All is not what it seems, huh?... These rooms kind of reminds me of 7 sins (gluttony, lust...etc..).. or the different rooms in The Masque of the Red Death... I don't know... but I like it!

Author's Response: Very perceptive, C. (though this is not the case). I'm so glad you are enjoying this, it means a lot to me.

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2012 - 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 12

I loved this story so much. I dread the day when you stop writing. This chapter was so sexy and hot. The sexual buildup is just crazy. They haven't even shagged yet! That is going to be incredible, I'm sure of it.

Congratulations to your daughter! Have fun in Florida. Will you be taken next week of from posting because of Thanksgiving?

Author's Response: You miss, are the biggest sweetheart! I absolutely love writing so I won't be stopping anytime soon. I'm excited you liked the chapter, even without the shagging. Thanks for the congrats, and yes, I will be posting the week of Turkey Day. Love to read what you think of this chapter as well! Big huggers

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2012 - 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 12

Whoo mama...so good, you're just teasing us with all this hotness and still no sex for W/B. :)

Creepy with the worms and the woman's gaping maw...Buffy can't believe it's real. Can't wait to see as things are revealed.

Good luck to your daughter's squad in Orlando. Yay!!

I'm from Fl. and I love going to Orlando...y'all are gonna have so much fun!

Can't wait for more next Wed. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm just a big ol' tease! But, no fear, it's leading up to something big, I assure you. I'm glad you liked the worms and the lady, creepy was exactly what I was going for. Thanks for your congrats! Yeah, we are so excited to go!

Reviewer: spikesgurl1 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2012 - 07:55 am Title: Chapter 12

EEEPPP!!! I cant wait for more... (: im sssooo excited!!! Loveee it!

Author's Response: Thanks, spikesgurl1! I'm so glad you are enjoying my story! Hopefully I can keep you eeeppping!!!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2012 - 04:39 am Title: Chapter 12

So many mysteries out there and William to boot. Seems to be some strange rules in this universe, and neither Buffy or I are ready for them. Hope we are soon. Good luck with the cheerleading and enjoy Florida. :)

Author's Response: Strange rules indeed, BR. Well, I can't say much about Buffy being ready, but I hope you are!!! Thanks for the good luck for my daughter and believe me, we will have a blast in Florida!!

Reviewer: crazylife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2012 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 12

Wednesday is my Favorite day!! Love the tidbits...waiting (sort of) patiently for the main course. :-) Good luck to your daugther's squad. Take a lot of hard work to make it that far!

Author's Response: *squee* Strangely, I love Wednesday too. Not only posting but getting to watch a new episode of American Horror! If you live in the US and haven't see it, it is totally a MUST SEE! The show is in it's second season, but the show is written as an anthology, so each season stands alone. I absolutely love this show! Brilliant! Ahem...Okay, enough about AH, and more about my story...I don't know if your references to "tidbits" are in sexual nature or about the story as a whole, but either way both will be fully explored. Don't you worry. Hopefully I won't keep you waiting too long. Big thanks on congrats to my daughter. Yeah the girls have been working their little butts off since August! Hope to hear from you again next Wednesday, crazylife!! Thanks for stopping by!

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2012 - 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 12

This was good. A decadent feast and then she saw the worms as a sign of the corruption. Where they and the woman what was really there or just a warning, interesting.

Author's Response: Thanks, magnus. Interesting perspective. Not to give anything away, can't say if it's correct or not, but I can say very interesting perspective. As for the woman and the worms, again can't give much away. Sorry. Don't worry in due time all will be revealed. Thanks for continuing to follow my story.

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