Reviews For Stop. rewind. Play
Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/10/2012 - 12:56 pm Title: Not in Kansas Anymore
Date: 11/10/2012 - 12:56 pm Title: Not in Kansas Anymore
Awesome plot twist! Buffy was in hell and not heaven. What could this mean for the story.
I think it would help break up the chaptr and be less confusing if you seperated scenes. Maybe some dash marks or something. Just a suggestion.
Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2012 - 12:05 pm Title: Not in Kansas Anymore
Date: 11/09/2012 - 12:05 pm Title: Not in Kansas Anymore
A big difference, a Buffy that was in hell. That's what makes her softer, she wasn't taken from a good place. But this Spike seems a bit darker, what could have changed him?