Oh wow I cant believe I missed this updates Great work I loved the scene where William effectively becomes Spike Xanders having fun at the moment but he may regret it
You have great fics shame your shite at updating
I like it its good. But please finish it with a spuffy ending that's happy. ;-)
Oh my God. Thanks for sending me that chapter of Buffy and Xander's night together. That was freaking hot.
I'm just dying to know what exactly happened that fateful night between Xander & Buffy. I mean, all the dirty deeds.
Author's Response: Well, i did write a chapter about that which I junked, out of sensitivity for spuffy lovers. If anyone wants to read it, i can mail them a copy. Just drop me a mail at firstname.lastname@example.org or contact me at TSR
Faith is such a cool friend. And I wish spike would kill him!
and us there magic in this story?
Author's Response: No. There isn't any magic in this story. And yes, Faith is a cool friend.
Hiya-- I was just checking back to see if this had been updated yet... Any chance of an update any time soon? I do hope you're going to continue ahead on this--- sometime's Xander's sweet, but then ya think about the Hyena thing & what all it entailed, and definitely his anti-anything-Spike 'tude, especially if it involved Buffy AND Spike in the same county, even, so there are just sometimes ya just wanna see Xander get his ASS handed to him by somebody.
Hope you are going to finish this, and write some more soon! I'll be on the look-out for it!
Author's Response: Yeah, i'm gonna work on it. Thanks for reviewing. I'd love to hear more about what you think about the story.
This story is distinctly uncomfortable in a really cool way. Xander is a sociopath and she is lucky she's not locked in his basement in a french maid costume
Author's Response: Haha. Distinctly uncomfortable in a cool way. That's a great review. Thanks. And yes, Xander is a sociopath. Xander's new fantasy doesn't bode well for Buffy. For some people winning isn't enough. They need everyone to know that they've won.
This chapter was fantastic.
Usually I am not very keen on Faith but as I read the last words of this chapter my first thought was ' Oh I love Faith'
Really looking forward to more, it feels like you're really starting to get into the heart of the story and I cannot wait for more juicyness - especially evil Faith payback.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Faith is certainly going to be well positioned to orchestrate xander's downfall :)
Oh man, i know this is wrong, but that was do damn hot!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. I also wrote an interlude on Buffy and Xander's night together that I junked. If anyone's interested in reading that write to me email@example.com
Loved it! Xander is a little messed up in the head to even think that Buffy really liked sleeping with him but he's so sexy. Poor buffy she's having to do this not because she likes it but because she has too. Anyone can clearly see that buffy did not like sleeping with xander but she did what she had to do. Love this fic and I cant wait for the next chapter
So wrong....so hot......
About time blondie got serious about dealing with evil xanman. Therapy is much needed, will be interesting.
more more more please?
Hello! Will you add to the story soon?
Author's Response: Yeah, i'll be updating it soon. The next chapter is nearly ready. :0
Whew! You have painted quite a lust scene and I have read several erotic books over the years! (It helps that I'll be turning fifty this Spring!) Nice work and looking forward to the conclusion:)
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks. What did you think of the way Buffy reacted though?
Great story! Will you continue it? Thanks!
Author's Response: Of course. There's a bit to go. What do you like about it?
This is a difficult story to read. I hope you are not implying that Buffy enjoyed having sex with Xander. There is no way to paint this other than rape. Even though she agreed he forced her because she was protecting her husband.. I really don't know how you can make this turn out all right. Buffy did the wrong thing and I suppose she believes she did it for the right reasons and Xander is a pig. His character is not likeable and the reason behind the blackmail appears to be Anya's infatuation with Spike.. He is pathetic.
Author's Response: I think it's pretty clear she didn't enjoy sex with Xander. At no point was she even close to orgasm. And the memory of it made her puke. I think it's pretty clear that she was raped. There's no denying it. Forcible sex is rape. No two ways about it. I think Xander's always had a thing for Buffy (as referenced in their backstory), but Anya's infatuation with Spike certainly didn't help, but that's a reason he dislikes Spike, not why he's infatuated with Buffy.
You never used the name xander so I played pretend . :-) very angsty chapter. Buffy is gonna get herself in trouble with thoughts like that.
Author's Response: Well she's clearly traumatised by the whole thing. Who wouldn't be?
Hello! Will you continue the story?
Author's Response: Yup. There's quite a bit to go...
She wants to sleep in the guest room because she's filled with guilt! I hope she washed those sheets for poor Spikey. Xander is very two faced-love his character in this story. Looking forward to more. Sounds like you hinted for more bander smut. I'm hoping for some guilt sex soon by Buffy. I think she needs to ride Spike good and proper to attempt to ger rid of some guilt.....please? :-)
Author's Response: Yeah, she is filled with guilt. Xander seems like a sociopath, doesn't he? As for the rest, you'll have to wait and watch. :)
i enjoyed seeing Xander as the bad guy! Will you add more to the story?
Author's Response: There's a lot more left.
Could you describe their night together in this chapter?
Author's Response: Well, perhaps through flashbacks....perhaps....
Author's Response: Do you mean the one that already happened?
Liked the story a lot! Any chance there could be a huge fight scene between Spike and Xander?
Author's Response: If Spike finds out, there will be hell to pay. I think Buffy won't ever want Spike to know. On the other hand Xander would enjoy torturing Spike with the knowledge that he bedded Buffy.
Author's Response: If you could elaborate about what you enjoyed about this, then i'd really appreciate it. Thanks
I give the author points for originality! I would never have imagined Xander acting in such a way. Looking for ward to the conclusion.
Author's Response: Well, this is an AU. This isn't your father's Xander Harris.