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Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2013 - 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 9 - The Girl in Question

I am a touch confused about this chapter. Not about Alex, I knew that was a strong possibility.

What confuses me is, does Spike know Alex is his or not? He says he knows she is his, but later he says something like: The Slayer named her little girl after me?

It was a confusing bit of your story for me.

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm working on the typos but I'm trying to balance that out with uploading as fast as possible to keep people engaged. As for Alex, yes He knows, he's figured it out and after his little sister Alexis. I'm going to go into his backstory a little more in the later chapters.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2013 - 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 9 - The Girl in Question

A lot of good information, I like it.

Reviewer: Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2013 - 06:37 am Title: Chapter 9 - The Girl in Question

Love it, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2013 - 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 9 - The Girl in Question

Outstanding!

Reviewer: ginar369 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2013 - 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 9 - The Girl in Question

Spike has a daughter with another kid on the way? I love it! Although I'm not sure how Buffy is going to react.

Reviewer: TCunnings Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2013 - 03:43 am Title: Chapter 9 - The Girl in Question

Loved it, maybe now Buffy snd Spike will be able to make some semblance of the situation they were in and start the healing process.
Excited for more.

Reviewer: dm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2013 - 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 9 - The Girl in Question

would love to review your chapter but its not there only title ,authors note and review

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2013 - 06:23 am Title: Chapter 9 - The Girl in Question

I can't find a chapter here.

Reviewer: TCunnings Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2013 - 06:02 am Title: Chapter 9 - The Girl in Question

No chapter came up after title

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