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Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2013 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Romance of Train Travel part I

Ooooo, I did have the thought that Buffy was dead wherever Alex was from, because of the way she reacted and interacted with Buffy and Spike. What I didn't guess was that Spike was dead also. Or is he... I'm not sure, and it has nothing to do with the story. I just got excited.

Anyway, it was a fleeting thought that was buried by the story that was happening already.

Awesome job, I dug the chapter.

Reviewer: Lambean Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2013 - 04:05 am Title: Chapter 11 - The Romance of Train Travel part I

It was nice to get to know more about Alex. You seriously brought out some tears when she was talking about seeing her dad for the first time and Buffy's death. I love this story. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2013 - 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Romance of Train Travel part I

Love the way this is developing...

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2013 - 08:36 am Title: Chapter 11 - The Romance of Train Travel part I

Good information and much of it was expected.

Reviewer: mike13z50 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/24/2013 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter 11 - The Romance of Train Travel part I

Spuffy child from the future, didn't see that coming. Enjoying your story.

Reviewer: ginar369 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2013 - 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Romance of Train Travel part I

I don't know how I missed it. I mean it's in the chapter title! I was confused when I was reading everything because the dates didn't make sense. But then I noticed the time travel bit and now I'm not confused anymore! So Spike and Buffy did the naughty that last night and she got pregnant. She never knew he came back and she died. But the evil jerks got a hold of Alex, did she travel back or did they do it? They need to start killing people. Dara's backers might not like it if bodies start dropping it would bring too much attention by the authorities. Besides they need to die anyway.

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