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Reviewer: Angels_heart1 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2013 - 09:58 am Title: Chapter 4

Great story! I'm loving it! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Hi, Angels_heart1, I'm happy to know you like the story. I'm in the process of writing more but RL kinda reared its head to intervene and slow me down.There will be more coming, I promise! Thanks for the kind words and taking the time to review. x

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2013 - 06:41 am Title: Chapter 4

I like the interaction, and poor Buffy, this in front of her mother and sister, really awkward :-)

Author's Response: glad you liked it. awkward? yes, although she might have got away with it in regards to Dawn...didn't really think she should have been present for the whole 'amazing orgasm thing.' That could have been a bit icky! Thanks for taking the time to review. : )

Reviewer: PaganBaby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2013 - 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wooot! Omg, that was yummy! Are you absolutely sure this was your first smut scene? Cos, honey, that was awesome :D If that's how her body reacts to just having him drink her blood, Buffy better have paramedics standing by if (when!) gets groiny with a conscious, fully participating Spike lol

You're so sweet to say what you did in the End Notes *HUGS* I'm extremely proud to have inspired such delicious smut :D *happy sniffles*

Author's Response: heehee, glad you liked it. I have to say, it's quite scary writing something like that for the first time. You hope people wont laugh and go 'omg that was pathetic, don't try that again' which so far, touch wood, (taps head) nobody has. As for when Spike is recovered...I'm not gonna say! (Evil grin) My end notes? well, now every-one who reads the chapter will know what a great inspiration and source of support you've been to me, so unless I'm embarrassing you by saying that, I'd like to leave them. *big hug for happy sniffles* x-x-x-x

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2013 - 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 4

That sounded like a whole lot of fun!!

Author's Response: Thanks Lou, It was meant to be! heehee. x

Reviewer: xXEMProductionsXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2013 - 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 4

Love it xx just what the doctor ordered xxx more please xx

Author's Response: Thank you very much. You must have a good doctor if they prescribe that! There will be more coming, I promise, just backing off a bit to get some wider perspective on the story as a whole. Thanks for the review. x

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2013 - 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 4

Props for dawn & Joyce for thinking of slayer blood.
Phew! I think I'll just go have that cold shower now...

Author's Response: heehee, Hi A4S glad you liked it. Goes to show how a different point of view could have changed the show, If they'd kept Joyce around. 'Cos really, who out of the scoobies would have thought of that? Maybe Tara...maybe. Thanks for the review. x

Reviewer: ginar369 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2013 - 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 4

Oh holy ..... Warn a girl next time! Good thing it's cold outside!

Author's Response: uuhhmm...sorry?

Author's Response: 5 minutes outside...you'll be fine : ) x-x

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2013 - 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 4

oh, and watch your hands there under my wing! Ticklish! ;-)

Author's Response: No promises! >: )

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2013 - 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 4

**gah** Are you *sure* you haven't done this before, Dark Heart? Not like any virgin I've ever ... oh ... uh ... never mind. Just to make sure everyone is clear - DARK HEART wrote all that lovely smutty goodness. I just fixed the commas and added in some extra paragraph breaks so I could breathe! Awesome job, DH! And I loved the scene with Joyce and Buffy at the end. Love it when Buffy laughs.

Now can't wait to see what happens if Spike is actually *awake* and participating in the Buffy lovin'. Oh my, that will rock! Great job!! {hugs}

Author's Response: Thanks P4S. Now, YOU may think it was just some commas and paragraph breaks, but as people said of my first chapter, paragraph breaks can make all the difference in reading a story. So big smooch for you for that. As for being a smut virgin... It's the scariest thing I've done so far, seeing how people will take it and hoping everyone won't turn round and say 'OMG that was terrible! never do that again' etc... And I blame you and PB for my foray into smut entirely! Anyone who reads this...they corrupted me, I swear! : ) Seriously though, P4S thanks for all your help on the little grammatical things that I will still probably get wrong and will rely on you to point out! ' comma here, new para here, period here' etc. x-x-x

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