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Reviewer: PaganBaby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2013 - 06:39 am Title: Chapter 12

Wow, Xander's a total psycho asshole! We're used to him being mean to and insulting Spike, but his inner-ugliness is really starting to show now. I feel so bad for Anya :( She deserves better than a guy who considers her a consolation prize.

I very much enjoyed Spike's taunts at Xander, but I had a bad feeling about what Xander intended to do. And Spike making him madder wasn't helping! lol But that's our Spike - he said whatever he wanted to, never worrying about consequences. I'd laugh at what Spike said and then get nervous again about how Xander would react :O lol

I was so relieved when Dawn, Tara and Willow came in *phew!* lol If they hadn't come in when they did, I didn't see that scene ending well for Spike!

Loved the ending! I can't wait until Dawn plays the tape back :D That ain't gonna be good for Xander! heehee

Author's Response: Hi ya, PB! Well, what can I say that hasn't been said already? Thanks so much for stopping by, PB and sharing your thoughts. I love hearing what you and others have to say, but since you inspired me to have a go, it's really quite rewarding to know that you're enjoying where I'm going and what I'm doing. *HUGS* Right, well, glad that you liked the chapter, and yep, Xander is an asshole! Always thought so, so I couldn't exactly leave that out now, could I? And yes, Anya does deserve better, but you'll have to wait to find out what's gonna happen, and who's gonna find out about the tape! Heehee. I liked writing Spike taunting Xander, it was just s easy, y'know? But I also couldn't help putting in the fact that even with Xander's hate and contempt, Spike still stood up for Buffy, Joyce and Dawn, and showed that he really loved them, no matter what Xander said. At least, that was what I was hoping for! :-) Hopefully people will pick up on it. Right, well, once again, thanks for stopping by, PB and sharing your thoughts with me. I really do appreciate it, and love hearing from you, after all, you're the inspiration behind it. :-) Take care, PB. *BIG HUGS* X

Reviewer: valerie21601 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2013 - 07:26 am Title: Chapter 12

Poor Xander.

Even in the tv series Xander did so little to earn Buffy's love, rarely truly fought by her side on the battlefield.

I really cared about his character during the early seasons of BtVS(outside of S1, Ep. 6).  He was so sweet during those years.   It was awful, watching him devolve into a one note character by the end of the series.  It was painful to watch him on the series, for me.

Anya would be so much better off with Giles, in my opinion.   She has a thousand plus years worth of demon knowledge, actually been at so many places in the world during piviotal moments.    Giles would love to learn it and appreciate it totally.  

 

I really enjoy your story I hope more will be posted real soon.

 

BTW  I never could figure out why the show writers and producers gave Xander a free pass on trying to rape Buffy in Season 1 in the Pack and Giles let him get away with it.    Then years later when the incident happen with Spike they were so totally unforgiving.



Author's Response: Hi, Valerie. Thanks very much for dropping in and telling me what you thought. I truly appreciate it. I'm happy to hear that you like my story, and I promise to try and update soon, real life has an awful habit of interfering in my writing and such! As for Xander... hhmmm, the less I say about the guy, I think the better. I just never really liked his character, always thought about his double standards, which were exacerbated when Spike came along, and his prejudicial outlook. All in all, not a fan, and don't get me started on the rape thing! GGGRRRRRRR!! Anyway, once again, thanks for your review and thoughts, Valerie, I appreciate them very much. Take care. X

Reviewer: Jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2013 - 07:20 am Title: Chapter 12

Super update, Who would have thought Spike could slap Xander around without raising a hand. Brilliant.

Author's Response: Hello, Jane. Gotta love Spike kicking Xander's ass, and making Xander do the hard work for him! Heehee. Glad you liked the chapter, and thanks for stopping by and telling me what you thought, I appreciate it very much. Take care. X

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2013 - 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 12

Oh my goodness! Xander, Xander, Xander! He is in soooo much shit now! I can't wait to see what happens when Buffy sees that! I do feel bad for Anya, but it would be better to find out now than while standing at the altar in her wedding dress! Of course, Spike didn't egg him on at all, did he!? :D Loved the chappie, DH! Keep them coming! Can't wait for more! {hugs}

Author's Response: Hey, P4S! Glad you liked the chapter! Yep, Xander is gonna be in trouble, eventually. I think it's probably fairly safe to say that both Buffy and Anya are not gonna be pleased! And yeah, the sooner everyone finds out about Xander being a !@%? the better! Anyway, happy to hear that you enjoyed it, and I'll try to update soon. Take care, P4S, and thanks once again for the review. X

Reviewer: ginar369 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2013 - 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 12

Hot diggity damn!!! That was great!!! I cannot wait until everyone watches that!!! In my opinion Xander always did have a thing for Buffy. That's why no one was ever good enough for her. And why he hated Spike so very much. Jealously is not pretty on Alexander LaVelle Harris.

Anya is going to boil Xander's fun parts in oil, eviserate him, chop his balls off then feed them to him before she kills him. But only if she gets to him before Buffy and Joyce!!!!!!

Hopefully they get to watch it before Xander does something to Spike. Or worse before he convinces Buffy, Dawn and Joyce to hate Spike. I could see the little shit setting Spike up for something like a dead girl. Just to get him tossed out of the Summers life. And possibly staked by Buffy.



Author's Response: Hi Ginar! Thanks for your review, I really enjoyed reading what you thought! I'm glad you liked the chapter, and seem to like where I'm going with this. As for Xander... ... I don't want to give anything away, so I think it would be best for me to keep quiet, don't you? >;-) Rest assured, even though I've been limited in my time recently, I am still writing, or trying to, and I'm not giving up, so don't worry about that. I'll try and update soon. Thanks for sticking with me, Ginar, and leaving me comments, thoughts and reviews, they really do mean a lot. Take care. X

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2013 - 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 12

Can't wait for everyone to sit down and watch that recording....

Author's Response: Hi A4S, thanks for your comments. I take it by your impatience, the chapter came out alright, and you liked it? :-) Thank you for stopping by and leaving me all your comments, A4S, it means a lot, especially to a first timer like me. I'm sorry for the delay, but I've just been pressed for time recently. I am trying my best to keep up with the writing, and responding to reviews, hence, here I am! Thanks again, A4S, and take care. X

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2013 - 06:58 am Title: Chapter 12

As soon as Xander arrived I was sure that the camcorder must be recording. Anya will be so sad when she hears about this, but in the end it will be good for her.

Author's Response: Hey, Magnus, Sorry for the delay in responding, real life has reared it's ugly head and kept me occupied. I do apologise. Glad you liked the chapter, and well done on the prediction! Yes, I think Anya will be sad, but, like you said, it's something that she needs to know, if and when she finds out, that is... ... Thanks for the review, Magnus, and take care.

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