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Reviewer: letitia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2014 - 04:54 pm Title: Gut Instinct

I SO did not see the Darla twist coming.  That just goes to prove that Buffy is a tad special.  She has been friends with a vampire for YEARS and did not know it.  I am glad that Darla came to visit.  I think that might give her some additional perspective on Spike and the vampire life.  But I am so happy that they are unknowingly working on their relationship.  They have been getting to know each other and have started to actually TALK.  Just an overall great chapter.



Author's Response: Thank you so much, this review really made my night! I'm so happy you like the story so far, I hope you continue to enjoy!! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review! :)

Reviewer: tigerlilee84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2014 - 01:49 am Title: Gut Instinct

Their relationship is progressing quite nicely.  Loved the introduction to Darla but it makes me wonder just who turned her since she has the ability to control her impulses.  Wonderful chapter, as always! :)



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it, and as for Darla, she is kind of affected like Harmony was after being turned into a vamp. Harmony was evil, sure, and couldn't be trusted, but she also did still sort of carry human feelings, and she didn't want to kill Cordelia, but the demon in her did. I'm trying to write Darla in a way where she acts towards those she cared about as a human, the way she treated Angelus. I do believe that she kind of loved Angelus, even as an evil vampire, and so I just made her a little bit more unique than other vampires by letting her care about people she loved when she was human. She is a lot like Spike in that sense, but whether she has more or less of a conscious than him has yet to be revealed. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing, can't wait to see if you enjoy the next chapter!

Reviewer: Naomi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2014 - 03:09 pm Title: Gut Instinct

I was sure that the tshirt Buffy was wearing would be black. B/c until you introduced Darla, I was convinced that this was a universe that Willow had conjured up to 'fix' Buffy (and remove Spike), post-resurrection.



Author's Response: No, nothing as complicated as that. Though it sounds like a very interesting storyline, this fic is a little more simple, and everyone is aware of what's going on and the universe wasn't created by any magick-happy friend. Thank you for reviewing! And I hope the story will still be interesting for you. :)

Reviewer: Petra Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2014 - 04:10 pm Title: Gut Instinct

Don't worry about the lag, we all get that way! This chapter was great! I'm excited to see how Darla fits in!

Author's Response: Thank you for your patience, and for reviewing! I'm happy to know you like the addition of Darla!! :)

Reviewer: VickyT2010 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2014 - 07:44 pm Title: Gut Instinct

Love this chapter!!! Emotions are running high! And the Darla storyline is fantastic! Can't wait to see what happens next :) :)

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad to hear you like it, thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: fyreburned Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2014 - 05:34 pm Title: Gut Instinct

Was so happy & thankful for an update! I'm enjoying it, and hope you'll have time to write more soon! Very interesting to add Darla into the mix, both as Buffy's former friend AND a vampire, and as a pretty young one that has managed to be able to have self control within one year or so post-turning. Any reason, in particular, for choosing to write Darla into this role?



Author's Response: I love Darla's character on both BtVS and Angel, and I have wanted to see what it might be like if her and Buffy were friends. I thought "what a better way to see it then to write it" and it just happens to help keep the story going here, so that is why I chose to add her in. I'm glad her presence had caught your interest, I'm having fun writing her. Thank you for reading, I will update again as soon as I can. And also thank you for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2014 - 12:59 pm Title: Gut Instinct

Wonderful, they are talking and getting to know each other. This thing with Darla was a good surprise, I really like it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter, thanks for telling me and for reading! :)

Reviewer: ILoveLamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2014 - 01:31 am Title: Gut Instinct

That was an awesome chapter. Such an amazing Darla intro there, and I dug the sorta time goes by summation.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed, thanks for reading and for reviewing!!

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