Date: 11/06/2004 - 03:16 pm Title: Ch. 1
I'm susper intrigued. I can't wait for more.
Date: 10/14/2004 - 06:33 am Title: Ch. 1
I've read this chapter before and tried to find the completed vic on many sites. I hope you're going to complete it this time. It's too good to remain unfinished.
Date: 10/14/2004 - 05:30 am Title: Ch. 1
Now this is an intriguing story...I must say I am hooked
Date: 10/13/2004 - 01:00 am Title: Ch. 1
on the edge of my seat wanting more
Date: 10/12/2004 - 07:06 pm Title: Ch. 1
Would love to read more ... :)
Date: 10/12/2004 - 05:41 pm Title: Ch. 1
Well this looks like its shaping up to be interesting..keep up the good work!
Date: 10/12/2004 - 07:58 am Title: Ch. 1
Hmmmm....very interesting & intriguing first chapter...which just left me wishing there were more chapters. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing your story...
Date: 10/12/2004 - 05:40 am Title: Ch. 1
Excellent idea really wanna read more.
Date: 10/12/2004 - 03:46 am Title: Ch. 1
I am totally and completely hooked!!!!! More please! :)
Date: 10/12/2004 - 01:56 am Title: Ch. 1
I really, really...really love this. :) It's not like most of them out there, and I can't wait for your next update!
Date: 10/12/2004 - 01:51 am Title: Ch. 1
much awesomeness which is my way of saying it was good. keep it up. this could be interesting