Date: 12/23/2004 - 11:35 pm Title: Just Peachy Fucking Keen
loved the updates
Date: 12/23/2004 - 10:56 pm Title: Just Peachy Fucking Keen
OOOOOOOOOOO i loved it. All of it. Amnesia...poor buffy poor spikey.......can't wait for more.
Date: 12/23/2004 - 09:52 pm Title: Just Peachy Fucking Keen
Good twist. keep ot up.
Date: 12/23/2004 - 09:51 pm Title: Just Peachy Fucking Keen
Oh god oh god oh god! WHAT?? Is the baby born?? How far along was she? SHE HAS AMNESIA??? AGHHH!!! Next chapter please!!!
Date: 12/23/2004 - 08:58 pm Title: Just Peachy Fucking Keen
I don't like to leave negative reviews, and I am going to keep reading to see if there is an explanation, but the timing is really off on this, or at least it seems so. You have her in an abortion clinic, and from what I can tell, it is only a few days later and she gives birth due to an auto accident. You made it seem like Buffy was still in her first trimester getting ready to have an abortion, but then a week later this fetus can survive on its own. If anything, maybe you can clarify the timing or something. And again, it is possible I still missed something even though I re-read the last few chapters.
Date: 12/23/2004 - 08:48 pm Title: Just Peachy Fucking Keen
Wait a minute, how far along was she that this baby girl is alright? Maybe I missed something. I'll have to go back and check, but babies before 26 weeks usually don't make it, and babies under 32 weeks generally are not alright when they're born. They may live, but it's usually more complicated than them being alright.
Date: 12/23/2004 - 08:42 pm Title: Just Peachy Fucking Keen
You tease! Ugh!
Date: 12/23/2004 - 08:13 pm Title: Just Peachy Fucking Keen
Nice twist, but I'm predicting more angst in the future. I hope you update soon, because I am definitely getting hooked on this story. And yes, I agree with you about the cliffhangers, although I prefer writing them, not reading them LOL! Great job and if you don't update for a few days have a wonderful Christmas!
Date: 12/23/2004 - 08:07 pm Title: Just Peachy Fucking Keen
wait did the baby come out or is she still pregnant ? but other than that this story rocks and i really hope you finish it soon please because i wanna know who the daddy is ( preferibly Spike)
Date: 12/23/2004 - 07:59 pm Title: Just Peachy Fucking Keen
hehe
Date: 12/23/2004 - 01:42 pm Title: Weather To Fit My Mood
OMGOMGOMGOMG!! *panting* NOOO! You HAVE to get up the next chapter... like today!!! PLEASE!
Date: 12/23/2004 - 01:38 pm Title: Weather To Fit My Mood
OH!!!!! ur a big MEANIE!!!!!!!!!! really big MEANIE!!!!!! now we have no choice but to wait!!!!!
Date: 12/23/2004 - 08:38 am Title: Weather To Fit My Mood
Oh my god!! Major cliffhanger there. Now I am really looking forward to the nex chapter soon please.
Date: 12/23/2004 - 07:47 am Title: Weather To Fit My Mood
LOL! If I weren't worried about them both surviving the next chapter, I would wish that she would've punched him. Have a few names worse than "trailer park mum" and "slut" for Spike, but seeing as how it's Christmas time, I'll be nice and not use any of them. *Trying to upgrade my status on the naughty list*
Date: 12/23/2004 - 06:36 am Title: Weather To Fit My Mood
OMG!!! PLEASE POST SOON!!! SPIKE IS AN ASS BUT HE AND BUFFY DESERVE TO BE HAPPY!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
Date: 12/23/2004 - 05:23 am Title: Weather To Fit My Mood
okay when are you going to make spike into the good guy here...?
Date: 12/23/2004 - 04:45 am Title: Weather To Fit My Mood
See, there's that third option nobody wanted to talk about. She might just lose the baby and now it's gonna be SPIKE'S fault cause he was driving. Now that's a twist!
Date: 12/23/2004 - 04:35 am Title: Weather To Fit My Mood
OMG!!! PLEASE POST SOON!!! SPIKE IS AN ASS BUT HE AND BUFFY DESERVE TO BE HAPPY!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
Date: 12/23/2004 - 04:14 am Title: Weather To Fit My Mood
Yes, short chapters are better than none. For a brief moment I thought they were actually going to see eye to eye, but I should have known better :-) Please update soon- that was a mean cliffhanger :-) Hey, an update can be your Christmas present to your reviewers LOL!
Date: 12/23/2004 - 03:59 am Title: Weather To Fit My Mood
OMFG! You cannot leave it like that! Eeeek! Update quick! PLEASE!
Date: 12/21/2004 - 03:45 pm Title: Punk Rock Princess
you can shove your song up your ass! thats funny! i'll never have an opportunity to use it. maybe i should date someone in a band just so i could use it... cuz its so funny!
Date: 12/19/2004 - 11:59 am Title: Just Hold Me
Hey, I have a friend named Matthew who is kinda skater-boyish and I think he looks a little like your description of Ryan. I have a pic of him in my pictures @ mademoisellekat2009.yafro.com. If you'd like to make a graphic or anything or just take a look you can use that pic. I don't think Matt would mind.
Date: 12/19/2004 - 11:35 am Title: The Gossip Column Knows All
I like Ryan, he seems sweet. Might have to borrow him one day if I ever write stories...but I'm still big Spuffy person.. so oh well. Just be nice to Ryan when the Spuffy comes and I'll be nice to you... Great job so far!
Date: 12/18/2004 - 02:33 am Title: Punk Rock Princess
great chapter, but it's rather sad about not making Ryan out to be an ass! I wanted him not to want the child...not the other way around!
Date: 12/17/2004 - 10:22 am Title: Punk Rock Princess
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