This was a fun read, a good adventure. Spike is lovely, and his dialogue absolutely sounds like him. I like that Buffy is still physically tough (as in the Riley episode), and that impresses at least one man (even if it is the evil Angel).

Some typos and other grammar/word issues a good beta could fix.

Wonderful story. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for writing.

Awww!

I've also been meaning to say that I love all the Willow-related references -- resolve face, caffeine issues, etc.

Hee, love the ending. Angel's such a loser. I only just found this story and spent the whole day in front of the computer reading it. It was fantastic!! So well written, (as are all you';re other stories). I loved it. Well done!

OH I loved the end.

i think your story was great sorry it was my first time reading it but i was wondering what happen to spike's prison buddy it seemed like he liked faith just a loose end i guess sorry i'm just a freak about endings but it was very good sorry i counldn't review when you first wrote it. :)

Loved your story. One complaint. Did Spike drop his friend Gunn like a hot rock after being freed? That's just not right.

This was a great story. I was glad you stuck to your guns and didn't bend to the pressures to make this pwp - the plot was important and well done. There were some moments when Buffy and Spike were in her office and he was supposedly handcuffed that the story was confusing. He would have arms around her with his cuffed hands behind her back and then there would be a statement about how he was touching her face. It seemed sometimes in your descriptions didn't make total sense if he was still cuffed.
I tend to get frustrated when I read fan fics where Buffy and all the characters seem so adamantly pro-life when those issues are raised. Not just saying that that choice isn't the right one for her , but basically making sweeping statements that imply that it is offensive for anyone to consider such a thing. Indeed it is a controversial subject and you have the right to write about it as you choose, but in my head Buffy is a little more open minded.
You did a particularly great job capturing the characters of Buffy, Spike and Dawn with your dialogue. The story was creative and I love it when people are able to write an AU story and still incorporate some of Buffy's slayer qualities.

more please

loved this story :)

LOVED IT!!!! I wish you would have shown them further down the road like when they finally get to have their baby.

So glad you finished it the way you did. Excellent story.

OMG I CANT BELIEVE ITS OVER!!!!! im so sad, yet happy becuase it ended beautifully. i loved this story so much and am so glad that i read it. i really enjoyed reading this fic, it was amzing and so unque. youre an amazing writer and i love reading your work. im so sad that everything ended so well and that everyone ended up happy, well except angel, but that bastard deserved it. thank u so much for writing this fis, i loved reading it.