I am enjoying your story, especially the build up to Spike and Buffy's relatinship. Also Cordelia and Buffy are suhc fun to read. The only I have so far is that this prison seems a bit soft compared to real life. Besides that really enjoying reading your story. I also like your other story Sexiest Video Tapes at BSDaries. Keep up the good worK!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm happy that you like the fic. I like writing Cordelia, she's a fun character. I know the prison is a bit soft, but I write it this way on purpose. I couldn't make it realistic because the story would have never happened. Think more movie prison. Like--I don't know--Did you see The Longest Yard with Adam Sandler? That kind of prison where the warden can get away with crazy stuff and the prisoners have a little more freedom (I know, ironic choice of word) than they do in a real prison.

I love that Snyder was still a priniciple. I have to say though, Spike writing down his feelings doesn't seem to smart considering something could happen to his journal and the kiss could be exposed.

oh, i get it now.... you make a lot of emphasis in that thing that "nobody will find out about them". Now that Spike wrote in his diary, snyder or someone will read it and tell everybody his little secret.... arrghhh :( I loved the chapter btw!!!