Date: 02/28/2005 - 03:17 am Title: The girl from all those songs
i love this story. whatever you want to do split it into parts or keep going is fine with me. Just please finish it. it's great.
Date: 02/27/2005 - 06:24 pm Title: The girl from all those songs
The Dawn and Spike interaction was funny and well choreographed, tying her hair and exiting to patrol before she discovered it made me laugh. Angel immediately blaming Spike for the resurrection was excellent and in character. Thanks for rubbing his nose in Spike and Buffy's relationship. I'm looking forward to his reaction.
Date: 02/27/2005 - 05:39 am Title: The girl from all those songs
well i personly love origin story niamh.and hope you continue to keep writeing great chapter's after another.cause it only make's your story great
Date: 02/27/2005 - 05:12 am Title: The girl from all those songs
Love this story! Enjoyed this update; feeling a little sorry for Angel though. The web and mail-order expansion seems like a potentially interesting idea; it would be a great place for Buffy and/ or Spike to work. Less customer interaction. I like bringing in Jonathan too; are you going to use him more? Could be interesting! I'm happy with you either breaking the story up or keeping it long. You might get more readers if you break it up; less intimidating to read a smaller story.
Date: 02/27/2005 - 03:21 am Title: The girl from all those songs
You are EVIL to end the chapter at that point! :) I like the detail of having Angel stand in the entry of The Magic Shop so as to appear more intimidating -- he is a barely restrained Angelus. Wonderful S/B interaction as always (alone and with Dawn) and great Anya. She is smart and sympathetic. Can't wait to read the next one!
Date: 02/26/2005 - 10:58 pm Title: The girl from all those songs
*stands with AmyB* i second that!!!!!!
Date: 02/26/2005 - 10:27 pm Title: The girl from all those songs
Balula, I'm not exactly certain why you seem to think that this fic is far too long; to my eyes it has evolved in the most natural, fluid progression as possible, a progression that should be the envy of many other authors. Niamh has managed to take us from the period just following Buffy's death to now, through all of the changes and upheavals faced by the verse characters in both Sunndydale and LA, and all without it once seeming forced or rushed. The story is organic and credible, remarkable for its nuance and sensitive characterizations, and I for one hope that it continues far into the future. But then again, I also have the common decency to admire, or at the very least respect, the author's artistic vision. There are no shortage of ficlets here at the Realm...perhaps one of those would be a better use of your time than the pointless and uneducated flaming of gifted authors generous enough to share their visions with the rest of us.
Date: 02/26/2005 - 06:51 pm Title: The girl from all those songs
lol - yes, Anya is very creative when it is about money *smile*. And Angel did come. He could never do what been told, and always blame Spike. Well, at last he's speechless by now :-D
Date: 02/26/2005 - 04:29 pm Title: The girl from all those songs
this fiction it way too long.
Date: 02/26/2005 - 01:47 pm Title: The girl from all those songs
Great Chapter. Please write more. Please update soon and often. Hopefully Angel will stop being a ponce. I just love this story
Date: 02/26/2005 - 01:39 pm Title: The girl from all those songs
jane I dont mind how you sub divide this story as long as you keep it coming. I find it utterly satsifying. That ending was cruel. The phrase 'miles to go before we sleep' keeps ringng though my head. Update soon please.
Date: 02/26/2005 - 09:55 am Title: The girl from all those songs
Yay!! Angel is a poo poo head! Glad that he is witnessing the Spuffy love.
Date: 02/26/2005 - 06:55 am Title: The girl from all those songs
Tam~Spikeslovebite ahhhh another glorious update...so loving the Angel pain LOL
Date: 02/26/2005 - 06:46 am Title: The girl from all those songs
Oh yeah! Angel misconception smackdown time has commenced!!! Oh please oh please make it hurt! GREAT chap!!!
Date: 02/26/2005 - 06:45 am Title: The girl from all those songs
Oh yeah! Angel misconception smackdown time has commenced!!! Oh please oh please make it hurt! GREAT chap!!!
Date: 02/26/2005 - 05:30 am Title: The girl from all those songs
The previous entry was mine, Rana I'm just a different one and I wanted to say that I loved the way that buffy reacted to spikes news and I just REALLY liked the dinner scene made them seem like a family.
Date: 02/26/2005 - 05:29 am Title: The girl from all those songs
love the kiss at the end sorry angel buffy not interested in you anymore.love the end she so falling for our spike,looking forward to the next chapter.loved it
Date: 02/26/2005 - 05:11 am Title: The girl from all those songs
I think that with every chapter this story just keeps getting better and better and I think you should continue this the way you have been.
Date: 02/26/2005 - 03:40 am Title: The girl from all those songs
Dude! By the way, that previous review was from me. *snort*
Date: 02/26/2005 - 03:38 am Title: The girl from all those songs
Omg! Spike tying Dawn's hair up in knots had me roaring out loud with laughter! *snorts* Spike's sense of honeriness is just precious. I loved the family scene between Spike, Buffy, and Dawn while they were eating dinner. It's so nice to see both girls, and Spike, happy again. Earlier, Spike's reaction to Buffy's smile, regarding Angel's baby theories, was priceless. He seemed genuinely gobsmacked. I loved, loved, loved Spike's chocolate-rich voice saying Buffy's name in reverence after seeing her reaction to the prophecy news. *sigh* Such a beautiful moment. Giles' opinion of Anya seems quite high these days. Hmmmmm.... I wonder if cupid could be making a stop in that direction someday. She is quite an intelligent, observant person, and Xander never has appreciated her. Not thrilled that Angel showed up at the Magic Box so soon, but it was inevitable. I just hope Giles (Ripper) is able to diffuse the situation some. Great cliffhanger Nia. Best ever! "Kissing Spike." *snicker* All the chapters should end that way!
Date: 02/26/2005 - 02:56 am Title: The girl from all those songs
Angel's a moron with a one-track mind...what else is new? lol Loved the part with Dawn and Spike...the chicken wings and him tying her hair in a knot. Great. Looking forward to the Buffy and Angel confrontation you've had me wondering about for weeks. :)
Date: 02/26/2005 - 02:41 am Title: The girl from all those songs
Okay, Angel should just mind his own business and Xander should just get a life. I hope Buffy AND Spike tell Angel off in the next chapter!!! Oh and PLEASE continue this story!!!! Don't stop writing it! I think it's really good and it's how things should have gone on the show. (Not to say that the show wasn't good too but I enjoyed this one better) Great job
Date: 02/26/2005 - 01:36 am Title: The girl from all those songs
Oh sweet gods of chocolate that was delish...Absolutely loved the that the baby making is going to go into play here...yeahhhhh....How damn cute Dawn stealing his chicken wings...i mean so damn cute...*laughs* he knotted her hair too...that was awesome...Now that god awful poor excuse for a pissyass vampire comes to town...that igotistical asshole...Gods I loved that Buffy was all cozy with Spike...BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!...ohhhhhh give him what for and kick his ass back to LA....or just stake him either way if fine with me...LOVE Anya being all "dance of capitalism girl" Giles seeing her for more than just a goof who says what she feels..hmmmmmmm they would make a good pair...either way Nia you make the stars shine even during the brightest full moon with your chapters and this was everything all wrapped up in a sweet package...
Date: 02/26/2005 - 01:34 am Title: The girl from all those songs
YES YES YES.....go buffy. i loved how she didn't move from spike or get up but held him close. i love the family that is growing between buffy spike and dawn. glad tara could get some rest...she needs it great chapter and i soooo can't wait for angel to get told off...more please and soon...:)
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