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Reviewer: ariadne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 10:58 pm Title: The girl from all those songs

*stands with AmyB* i second that!!!!!!

Reviewer: AmyB Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 10:27 pm Title: The girl from all those songs

Balula, I'm not exactly certain why you seem to think that this fic is far too long; to my eyes it has evolved in the most natural, fluid progression as possible, a progression that should be the envy of many other authors. Niamh has managed to take us from the period just following Buffy's death to now, through all of the changes and upheavals faced by the verse characters in both Sunndydale and LA, and all without it once seeming forced or rushed. The story is organic and credible, remarkable for its nuance and sensitive characterizations, and I for one hope that it continues far into the future. But then again, I also have the common decency to admire, or at the very least respect, the author's artistic vision. There are no shortage of ficlets here at the Realm...perhaps one of those would be a better use of your time than the pointless and uneducated flaming of gifted authors generous enough to share their visions with the rest of us.

Reviewer: Niamh Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 10:08 pm Title: prologue

You know Balula, I might actually be willing to lisen to your point of view if you could actually write proper English.; as it stands I'm not even going to comment. This story is as long as its going to be, as many words as it needs to be and as many chapters as it takes to get the story told the way I want it told. If you have a problem with that, perhaps you shouldn't be reading it. If that's your only criticism, that the story is too long, then I'd say I'm doing exactly what I set out to do. To tell a story at my own pace. I'm really sorry if that doesn't fit with your schedule and/or life. Perhaps a different story and/or author would better suit your requirements. Niamh

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 06:51 pm Title: The girl from all those songs

lol - yes, Anya is very creative when it is about money *smile*. And Angel did come. He could never do what been told, and always blame Spike. Well, at last he's speechless by now :-D

Reviewer: balula Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 04:29 pm Title: The girl from all those songs

this fiction it way too long.

Reviewer: Bernardette Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 01:47 pm Title: The girl from all those songs

Great Chapter. Please write more. Please update soon and often. Hopefully Angel will stop being a ponce. I just love this story

Reviewer: 1204917152 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 01:39 pm Title: The girl from all those songs

jane I dont mind how you sub divide this story as long as you keep it coming. I find it utterly satsifying. That ending was cruel. The phrase 'miles to go before we sleep' keeps ringng though my head. Update soon please.

Reviewer: 559882194 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 09:55 am Title: The girl from all those songs

Yay!! Angel is a poo poo head! Glad that he is witnessing the Spuffy love.

Reviewer: 926881322 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 06:55 am Title: The girl from all those songs

Tam~Spikeslovebite ahhhh another glorious update...so loving the Angel pain LOL

Reviewer: AmyB Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 06:46 am Title: The girl from all those songs

Oh yeah! Angel misconception smackdown time has commenced!!! Oh please oh please make it hurt! GREAT chap!!!

Reviewer: AmyB Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 06:45 am Title: The girl from all those songs

Oh yeah! Angel misconception smackdown time has commenced!!! Oh please oh please make it hurt! GREAT chap!!!

Reviewer: AmyB Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 06:38 am Title: Never break the chain

Um...that would be Fleetwood Mac, correct? And I love this chap...thank God Giles is beating Xander over the head with the dunce stick, with Anya's assistance. Now, if only he'd save a few lashes with that stick for Angel...

Reviewer: 1044115704 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 05:30 am Title: The girl from all those songs

The previous entry was mine, Rana I'm just a different one and I wanted to say that I loved the way that buffy reacted to spikes news and I just REALLY liked the dinner scene made them seem like a family.

Reviewer: 1244929321 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 05:29 am Title: The girl from all those songs

love the kiss at the end sorry angel buffy not interested in you anymore.love the end she so falling for our spike,looking forward to the next chapter.loved it

Reviewer: 3046429 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 05:11 am Title: The girl from all those songs

I think that with every chapter this story just keeps getting better and better and I think you should continue this the way you have been.

Reviewer: Rana Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 03:40 am Title: The girl from all those songs

Dude! By the way, that previous review was from me. *snort*

Reviewer: 1553822726 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 03:38 am Title: The girl from all those songs

Omg! Spike tying Dawn's hair up in knots had me roaring out loud with laughter! *snorts* Spike's sense of honeriness is just precious. I loved the family scene between Spike, Buffy, and Dawn while they were eating dinner. It's so nice to see both girls, and Spike, happy again. Earlier, Spike's reaction to Buffy's smile, regarding Angel's baby theories, was priceless. He seemed genuinely gobsmacked. I loved, loved, loved Spike's chocolate-rich voice saying Buffy's name in reverence after seeing her reaction to the prophecy news. *sigh* Such a beautiful moment. Giles' opinion of Anya seems quite high these days. Hmmmmm.... I wonder if cupid could be making a stop in that direction someday. She is quite an intelligent, observant person, and Xander never has appreciated her. Not thrilled that Angel showed up at the Magic Box so soon, but it was inevitable. I just hope Giles (Ripper) is able to diffuse the situation some. Great cliffhanger Nia. Best ever! "Kissing Spike." *snicker* All the chapters should end that way!

Reviewer: Addie Logan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 02:56 am Title: The girl from all those songs

Angel's a moron with a one-track mind...what else is new? lol Loved the part with Dawn and Spike...the chicken wings and him tying her hair in a knot. Great. Looking forward to the Buffy and Angel confrontation you've had me wondering about for weeks. :)

Reviewer: 1635484916 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 02:41 am Title: The girl from all those songs

Okay, Angel should just mind his own business and Xander should just get a life. I hope Buffy AND Spike tell Angel off in the next chapter!!! Oh and PLEASE continue this story!!!! Don't stop writing it! I think it's really good and it's how things should have gone on the show. (Not to say that the show wasn't good too but I enjoyed this one better) Great job

Reviewer: Wolfspider Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 01:36 am Title: The girl from all those songs

Oh sweet gods of chocolate that was delish...Absolutely loved the that the baby making is going to go into play here...yeahhhhh....How damn cute Dawn stealing his chicken wings...i mean so damn cute...*laughs* he knotted her hair too...that was awesome...Now that god awful poor excuse for a pissyass vampire comes to town...that igotistical asshole...Gods I loved that Buffy was all cozy with Spike...BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!...ohhhhhh give him what for and kick his ass back to LA....or just stake him either way if fine with me...LOVE Anya being all "dance of capitalism girl" Giles seeing her for more than just a goof who says what she feels..hmmmmmmm they would make a good pair...either way Nia you make the stars shine even during the brightest full moon with your chapters and this was everything all wrapped up in a sweet package...

Reviewer: ariadne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2005 - 01:34 am Title: The girl from all those songs

YES YES YES.....go buffy. i loved how she didn't move from spike or get up but held him close. i love the family that is growing between buffy spike and dawn. glad tara could get some rest...she needs it great chapter and i soooo can't wait for angel to get told off...more please and soon...:)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 07:15 pm Title: Never break the chain

The conversation between Tara and Buffy was lovely. Angel rushing off to Sunnydale to protect everyone from Spike? He's in for a wacky visit! Why doesn't Giles just smack Xander? I loved Buffy's non-reaction to Darla's pregnancy, and she didn't seem displeased with the notion of getting pregnant herself. I can just imagine Angel and Xander arriving at Revello Drive together! I love the twists and turns of this.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 05:17 pm Title: Never break the chain

And again - Angel isn't able to do what he's told and is heading to Sunnydale.. And Xander ist the same old self "blame Spike". I wonder if that'll ever change.But I think Buffy would love to get pregnant with Spike's Child :-D Looking fordward to the conclusion in the next chapter.

Reviewer: shippy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 12:22 pm Title: Never break the chain

How do you make it so that ii gets better all the time? Talent, I'm telling you. I hope there will be a spuffy baby i love those! Anya is quite brave to endure Xander, are you thinking of pairing her up with Giles they would go so well together.

Reviewer: TheBear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2005 - 08:54 am Title: Never break the chain

Love the anti-climax of Buffys reaction to Darla being pregnant. I like that shes got so much going on in her own life she can just let it slide. And theyre both not freaked out by possible fertility. Sweet. I like your obtuse Xander too, very in character.

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