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Date: 11/06/2012 - 03:19 am Title: Chapter Seven

I don't know if you still read these reviews but I have to tell you that I LOVE your stories & I think this one may be my favorite!! :-)

Reviewer: SixStringBaby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2006 - 07:29 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Love that you pointed out the fact that strange as she is, Anya's almost always right. Mucho clever. And the land sharks bit was pretty much the best thing ever. I didn't know anyone else under the age of 55 knew what that was!

Reviewer: Lulu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2006 - 04:22 pm Title: Chapter Seven

i like the way you write. its really easy to read and i get the pictures of what you're trying to say. nice image of Spike an dBuffy lost on the beach and funny bit about the land sharks.

Reviewer: Wikka Tara Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2005 - 06:32 pm Title: Chapter Seven

I'm loving it!!! ; )

Reviewer: WolfSpider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2005 - 04:56 pm Title: Chapter Seven

omg this is to great..breasts heaving, swords fights, swimming to the deserted island. ok i need to keep reading i can't take it

Reviewer: FaintlyRememberBreathing Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2005 - 02:25 pm Title: Chapter Seven

"What the hell are we saying? And my god, are my breasts actually heaving?" Spike glanced down. "Uh, yeah. They are a little." "Stop staring at my boobs, Spike." I laughed so hard I almost woke up my sister. I love the romance novel aspects that are trying to force their way into the story and the way Buffy and Spike try to fight it. Absolutely hilarious.

Reviewer: me Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2005 - 04:41 pm Title: Chapter Seven

:-) more pleze

Reviewer: rockerbaby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2005 - 03:49 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Loved the chapter. Very funny. Please update soon

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2005 - 05:25 am Title: Chapter Seven

"Anya crossed her arms over her chest. She really hated it when no one would listen to her."-- Sounds like Anya really knows something. I just love the way the romance novel personas just keep weaving their way into Buffy and Spike's awareness. Superbly well done. And them alone on an island, trapped in a romance novel. How wonderful. And boy oh boy... loving Buffy kicking Angelus' ass. Always a pleasure.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 08:41 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Love it! Wonderful chapter - I'm so glad you didn't let Angelus have his evil way with Buffy - nice that she was the heroine and saved Spike so he could turn around and save her - very mutual. Love the back & forth from real people to characters from the book they are in. Now, the two of them together on an island? I'm hoping Spuffiness will ensue. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 06:11 pm Title: Chapter Seven

yay u updated im so happy. i really love this story and always love reading it. its really well written and so creative, i havent read or seen a story like it. i cant wait to read more and to see wat happens next please make it soon thanx

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter Seven

I am glad that they got away from Angelus. How will they get off the island. I am thinking that somehow they will not return to the Buffyverse without them encountering stupid Riley.

Reviewer: Niamh Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 04:24 pm Title: Chapter Seven

I cheered when she gave Angelus what for, but really laughed while he was talking. *laughs* Irish my arse. Oh! William! You saved me! *laughs* I kept waiting for a breathless Scarlet O'Hara -- and her, with the "are my breasts heaving?" And him being all distracted by that. . . and not afraid to admit it. Snuggling before a roaring fire -- can't get much better than that. When are the scoobies gonna learn to listen to demon-girl? She's got hundreds of years on all of them -- combined. Girl should KNOW something. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 03:38 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Tee! Candygram! Great story--love how they keep popping back into their literary characters. Actally, their reactions to it is even funnier. Great job, and hope you had a happy b-day :)

Reviewer: Kate Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 02:27 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Loving it- especially when they get confused between their romance novel personalities and who they actually are- one of the funniest stories I've read in a long time!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 01:28 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Loved Buffy getting a bit of her old self back and beating Angel and freeing her and Spike. And poor scoobies - it had been better if they heard what Anya had to say *smile* - I think she knows!

Reviewer: Bloodshedbaby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 06:58 am Title: Chapter Seven

Heaving breasts....*snickers* Classic. Really!! I love this story!! I just can't wait for them to get back to sunnydale now that their 'status' has changed. Impatient? Oh yes.

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 06:18 am Title: Chapter Seven

YESSSS! I love this story very well written my dear keep it up!

Reviewer: Allison Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 05:28 am Title: Chapter Seven

Well, they got away from Angelus- that's a plus. And now they're on an island together- doesn't get much more romantic than that! People should've listened to Anya for once LOL Great update:)

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 05:26 am Title: Chapter Seven

Great... now they are on an island. At least no more whining Giles. And I love the part about heaving breasts.

Reviewer: songgal1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 03:37 am Title: Chapter Seven

I like her comment reg. her heaving breasts! lol on the chapter!

Reviewer: Demonica Mills Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 03:26 am Title: Chapter Seven

Go Buffy! Way to work that womanly instinct of kicking Angelus directly in the balls! I love that Buffy and Spike are slipping into the cheesy romance dialouge. "heaving breasts" I was cracking up at that. Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 03:17 am Title: Chapter Seven

great update i loved it

Reviewer: Rana Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 03:15 am Title: Chapter Seven

ROFLMAO!!! "...are my breasts actually heaving?" Oh my goddess, that has got to be the best line evah!!! I just about busted a gut laughing so hard. Thank you so much. That's the best laugh I've had in a long time. Buffy's repeated switch into Elizabeth's persona has me wondering what may happen between those two when they are half asleep and not in their "right" minds. Hmmmm... *snickers* Loving the turn of events! So glad that Buffy snapped out of her "Elizabeth" snivelling to knock Angelus out. Bravo Spike for gettting them to shore, as well. I can't wait to see how the island ups the UST, what with the sun, sand, surf, and... lack of clothing. *giggles* Great chapter!

Reviewer: stace Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2005 - 03:11 am Title: Chapter Seven

ahaha. them actually commenting on her 'heaving breasts' was quite cute ;) glad they're getting a wee bit closer to eachother.. and hey.. will someone listen to anya? haha

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