Date: 01/11/2020 - 07:07 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
I enjoyed this totally Its been years since Ive read spuffy and Ive been missing Spike fiercely for a while now So, thanks so much!
Date: 02/03/2016 - 05:16 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
This is a really beautiful story, I loved the way these carachters come alive and the excellent way with words that LadyWenham has. It doesn't matter that it was written so long ago, it deserves the warmer praise!
Date: 06/06/2014 - 11:46 am Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Dear David's Mrs.
Now I know it' nearly a decade since you've been out of this fandom - I can't, for love or money remember what I was into that long ago - but I thought it'd be nice to let you know I loved this. I'm glad you wrote the little note at the end because it felt like you put a little of yourself into it. It was gentle and kind. It was generous in characterisation even with it's villians - if you can call Giles and Angel villians.
I loved the open ending. I loved your Buffy. It goes without saying I loved your Spike (let's face it, those of us who read this are always partial to William).
So......anyway........... well done 9 years, 3 months later.
(Praise never gets old :-)
Date: 10/19/2009 - 07:43 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Very nice, tightly written, and with good character voices. I also agree: it makes good sense to leave Spike's decision unknown at the end, because it really doesn't matter. All that matters has already taken place, and has found its conclusion.
If you need a future beta for a non-all-human, look me up. ;)
Date: 08/28/2009 - 11:56 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Thanks for a wonderful story. Its friday and my brain is fried so I can't really review well, but I enjoyed it, especially since they weren't crazy in the sack the whole time (makes it really hard to skip parts and still find the plot). I also like leaving it up the read whichever he decided. Me, I'm actually ok with it either way.
Thanks again.
Date: 06/08/2009 - 08:47 am Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
great story. i liked how you showed the similarities between angel and angelus in terms of playing with peoples heads.
Date: 10/22/2008 - 07:17 am Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
I just came across your story looking for some 'post chosen' fic, and I'm stunned. This story is great! It was more believable than the most in the characters of Buffy and Spike. I liked that you showed the struggle it it for Buffy to finally accept Spike, cause lots of fics just sort of jump to this sudden realization out of nowhere. And I liked the fine line you draw between souled and soulless Spike, cause there obviously is one. I don''t always like Dawn but you wrote her great and funny as a Brat that DOESN'T whine all the time. All of the banter was just really and Spike's snarks where just really genius.
I have seldomly read a fic thought through this well and written this great, without lengthening it with endless repetition of philosophy. Of reading your others and hoping maybe you might write more one day? That's really a talent you've got there!
Date: 09/29/2008 - 12:01 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
I loved this story! I appreciate the open ending, but of course, he does NOT need the soul ;). I'm off to check your stories to see if you ever did do a sequel. If not, please!
Date: 03/23/2008 - 01:34 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Just finished this story, and I loved it. I like the fact that you left it open ended. And yes, you're right -- they only thing that matters is that Buffy realized that she loved him with or without the soul.
Date: 09/12/2007 - 02:23 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Oh I love it, but wish you would have said if he chose the soul or not,
Date: 06/10/2007 - 03:07 am Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
I really liked this story. I don't know how old it is, I found it by "random" selection.
Date: 04/24/2007 - 11:17 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Oh I love this. I agree that the premise of Buffy ripping the amulet from Spike is unlikely, but I love what you've done with it, particularly the conclusion that Buffy should be able to love him whether he has the soul or not, and that it has to be his decision whether he gets it back again. I like the jealous and resentful Angel too, so true to character.
Date: 01/20/2007 - 05:43 am Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Beautiful story. I like the open ending and most of all I loved to read about Buffy finally realizing she was in love with Spike regardless of the soul. I like to think that he'll remain soulless. Even though it was an amazing gesture he did on the show to get his soul back, I liked his not-ensouled version way better and I honestly believe he proved himself enough... he doesn't need a soul to be a good guy. I really hope there'll be a sequel to this story, it was truly a pleasure to read. Keep up the great work.
Date: 10/02/2006 - 07:58 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Very well done !
Date: 03/26/2006 - 01:07 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed your story. Great job with staying with the characters. Very believable.
Date: 08/25/2005 - 10:34 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
ahhh i loved it!! it was soo cute!! u should do a sequel!!! hehe
Date: 07/02/2005 - 11:43 am Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Very satisfying working through with all the characters of what to do about Spike's missing soul. This was a good read.
Date: 06/02/2005 - 05:14 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Enjoyed the story. Glad you left it open. I prefer _____.
Date: 05/30/2005 - 05:41 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
loved the story, I've been following it from the beginning and constantly checking for updates:) You write them well(spike and buffy)I don't know;there's just something about them together isn't there? It's really nice to read a story with a good plot,good characterization,action and romance;and your story has it all; so thank you very much for entertaining me with every word and please, keep writing.............Don't forget about the Big Easy either eh'......I like that one too.::))
Date: 05/30/2005 - 05:34 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
err hate that she didnt except him at first without the soul and only wanted to be with him if he had one, its so stupid every one could tell that he changed but there all stuck up bastards . i love this story and am happy i read it. thanks for writing it i enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of your stories in the future thanx again
Date: 05/30/2005 - 12:03 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Excellent open ended finish. You're right, the journey was not about Spike getting his soul restored. Having Buffy accept that she is in love with Spike with or without the soul is more dramatic. I enjoyed the entire story, your handle on the characters was excellent.
Date: 05/29/2005 - 09:58 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Magnificant ending! I love that you left up to your readers to decide for themselves what Spike chose. Personally, I think he chose to get it back, not because Buffy needed it, but because it is HIS and he wanted it to help HIM in any future choices he might make in his life (unlife). I'm so glad that Buffy finally decided that the soul wasn't what allowed love, just the man! Great tale, great ending, great author! Thank you so much for sharing your talent.
Date: 05/29/2005 - 03:54 pm Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
No problem for me with that open end - because they are together. Soul or not soul - Spike was good without it - and loved Buffy before he had the soul. TNX for writing!
Date: 05/28/2005 - 07:33 am Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Love the way you left it open. It really works to get your point across that she truly loves whether he has the soul or not. Thanks for sharing your story. Of all the post-Season 7 fics I've read thus far, I've enjoyed this one the most.
Date: 05/28/2005 - 07:02 am Title: Part Thirteen and Fourteen
Briliant. Super story with great characterisation and that all important issue of trust. Loved the ending - you were so right to do it that way. Looking forward to more from your pen soon. Yeah, I'm one of them lurkers! LOL. Many thanks.