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Reviewer: Isabel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2005 - 07:25 pm Title: Part Eight

I so want Spike and Dawn to be friends again. I loved the scene with them talking. It was sweet. And it's great the Dawn didn't freak out about the lack of soul. Good chapter

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2005 - 12:49 am Title: Part Seven

Another excellent chapter. This story is like a book you just can't put down until you see "THE END". Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2005 - 12:21 am Title: Part Five

Excellent chapter. The more I read of this story, the more enthralled I become with it. Please update soon!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2005 - 09:33 pm Title: Part Seven

Bah - Angel - couldn't he just say it on the phoen? But that would have shorten the story ;-)

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2005 - 03:08 am Title: Part Seven

loved the updates

Reviewer: songgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2005 - 02:43 am Title: Part Seven

oh angel move on with cordy and leave Buffy alone!

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2005 - 08:31 pm Title: Part Seven

GILES IS AN ASSHOLE. I CAN'T BELIEVE HE'S ACTING LIKE THAT. ANYWAY, I LOVE THIS STORY. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. IT'S REALLY GOOD. U ARE AMAZING.

Reviewer: Rana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2005 - 07:31 pm Title: Part Seven

Great angst and suspense! I just love the twist of missing information regarding the amulet. I didn't see that coming. Is it in relationship to the amulet not being used to it's fulfillment (i.e. Buffy pulling off of Spike), or Angel's agreement with the Senior Partners for the mind sweep about Connor, or both? It just seems too coincidental to not have anything to do with the terms Angel's agreement. I'm beginning to wonder how many other major events will be affected by Buffy saving Spike. You story really makes me think! I just love how you write the characters too. So close to canon. Can't wait for the roadtrip!

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2005 - 06:36 pm Title: Part Seven

Silly Angel...he's going to help and like it, that evil punk! And Spike better trust Buffy...:)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 09:46 pm Title: Part Six

It’s too late now when I write this. Will post it tomorrow. Thanks for the update – had to love hard about your mouthwash :-D

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 01:10 am Title: Part Six

GILES IS STILL A GIT. HOPE U POST SOON. I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2005 - 12:15 am Title: Part Six

Great story, I 'm really enjoying reading it.

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2005 - 10:52 pm Title: Part Six

Very nice chapter- I love sweet Spike and shower Spuffyness, and the thing about mouthwash was a cute detail:) I can't wait to see more!

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2005 - 10:25 pm Title: Part Six

Water...cleansing....cleansing them from the past? Great chapter!

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2005 - 12:39 am Title: Part Five

i'm loving this story!!! you've made it so believable and everyone is so into character congratulations hope you update soon thanx

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2005 - 04:10 pm Title: Part Five

Update! Yeah :-D I enjoy this story very much. Just hope Buffy will leave denial land. I was almost ROFL when I read Giles’ words: “You do look as thought you’ve recovered from your injury. Even your coloring has improved,”

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2005 - 03:09 am Title: Part Five

thank you for the updates

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2005 - 03:02 pm Title: Part Three

Wow – that’s the big secret. I wonder if the soul got burned or if it is still somewhere around – or in the amulet. Glad that Buffy isn’t retreating from Spike, that she trust him.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2005 - 03:02 pm Title: Part Four

Loved the chapter – no worries about. Looking forward to find out what will happen next.

Reviewer: theladyofspike Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2005 - 04:17 am Title: Part One

great chapter!!! please keep sending ;)

Reviewer: songgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2005 - 03:57 am Title: Part Five

can't wait to see Xander's reaction to souless spike!

Reviewer: peanut Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2005 - 01:11 am Title: Part Five

BlondieBear, I think it's EXACTLY how Giles would have acted on the show. Giles was as pompus about Buffy's choices as Xander. Every one thought that THEY knew what was best for Buffy. Giles would have freaked out if Spike was soulless again. You have to remember that he's also chipless now and technically there is NO conscience to reign him in.

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2005 - 12:57 am Title: Part Five

GILES IS A BIG FAT JERK!!!!!! I DON'T THINK GILES WOULDN HAVE ACTED LIKE THAT IN THE SHOW BUT THAT'S THE BEAUTY OF FANFICTION. I ALSO THINK THAT BUFFY IS READING TOO MUCH INTO THIS SOUL THING. SPIKE NEVER NEEDED A SOUL TO BE GOOD. KEEPU UP THE GOOD WORK. IT'S REALLY GOOD.

Reviewer: Allison Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2005 - 12:54 am Title: Part Five

great chapter! i love seeing conflicts between Giles and Spike, just as long as Spike always prevails:)

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2005 - 02:53 am Title: Part Four

Excellent chapters. Love this story so far.

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