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Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2005 - 06:25 pm Title: ch 4

That was really wonderful. Poor Spike, poor Buffy, poor Joyce. I wonder how Riley will react. Just really makes you wonder how they will be able to defeat Glory. Looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I do want to clarify that I had Riley die, though. Maybe you should check out chapter one again.

Reviewer: glassgoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2005 - 03:58 am Title: ch 4

This is coming along beautifully. :-) More please?

Reviewer: songgal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2005 - 04:44 am Title: ch 4

spuffiness to be resumed again I presume?

Reviewer: Rain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2005 - 03:36 am Title: ch 4

Normally I'm not huge on baby stories, they come off false. But I really really like this. Very believable.

Reviewer: Kate Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2005 - 01:40 am Title: ch 4

You should be proud of how it turned out. This was a wonderful chapter. I love how you dealt with Buffy's range of emotions and reworked the events of FFL for this piece, using the stake stabbing as the catalyst for Buffy to connect to her baby. And the Spike moments were equally well developed and compelling. Then adding on top of Buffy's situation with a) being pregnant and b) it being a non-tradition, slayer related pregrancy, she has to deal with her mother's disappointment. Reminds me of the times pre Joyce knowing Buffy was the slayer and Joyce being disappointed in Buffy for her supposed bad behavior. More soon!!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2005 - 09:56 pm Title: ch 4

Yes, it's a good chapter!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2005 - 07:42 pm Title: ch 4

please tell me how much longer until she tells him that the child is his and not rileys

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2005 - 06:29 am Title: ch 4

i would be proud too!!! it was a beautiful piece poor buffy she really carries the weight of the world on her shoulders and nobody helps her nor understands her please more soon thanx

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2005 - 04:00 am Title: ch 4

I really like the story so far, but I hope Joyce mellows out a bit.

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2005 - 01:31 am Title: ch 4

Update soo

Reviewer: Jem Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2005 - 01:21 am Title: ch 4

Update!

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