Date: 01/08/2005 - 11:44 pm Title: Help
Glad to see an update! Looking forward to find out more about the prophecy.
Date: 01/08/2005 - 04:20 pm Title: Waking up
Wow – a bit confusing at the begin but I think you did it on purpose. So it were Vamps involved. And a something blue story :-D
Date: 01/08/2005 - 04:19 pm Title: The Spell
Wow – Angelus was with Willow (or Angel?)?
Date: 01/08/2005 - 04:18 pm Title: Understanding
Well – that went well… where are the honeys? ;-)
Date: 01/08/2005 - 04:18 pm Title: The Notes
Oh my, they went to L.A.? What is the saying … Absence will make the heart go fond? Or something like that .. maybe the girls will follow to L.A….
Date: 01/08/2005 - 04:17 pm Title: Getting through it
Nope, they’ll stay …
Date: 01/08/2005 - 04:15 pm Title: Christmas Gifts
Wow – hadn’t thought of that! It’s getting more and more interesting.
Date: 01/08/2005 - 06:28 am Title: Help
can't wait for the next one! lol on the chapter!
Date: 01/07/2005 - 10:14 pm Title: Christmas Gifts
I guess the boys will be back soon.
Date: 01/07/2005 - 01:20 pm Title: Christmas Gifts
Great Chapter. Hopefully Angel and Spike will be told and they will be together. Please update soon and often.
Date: 01/06/2005 - 11:37 pm Title: The Notes
i liked Spike's letter the best. I hope he returns soon or they go after him.
Date: 01/06/2005 - 09:38 pm Title: The Notes
wonder how long it will take before spike comes back?
Date: 01/06/2005 - 01:10 pm Title: The Notes
Awww...so sad!! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 01/06/2005 - 09:53 am Title: Understanding
well it was off to a good start, but seeing as this is your first story i'd say your doing a pretty good job... its just that, and pelase dont think im mean, i just want to give some constructive critisism to help you!... but anyway, its just that the plot seems really rushed so far, adn because of that i feel that it's not as realistic as it could be (i know, i know- you're writting about vampires and magic and im telling you to be realistic! lol) anyway, i think if you take your time and pad out the story a little bit, maybe with characters thoughts and more descriptions so everything doesnt seem so abrupt, then i reckon your first foray into writing will turn out to be great!!! sorry if this was mean, and please dont let what i, or anyone else says, discourage you! cant wait to read more :)
Author's Response: I am glad that you gave me some critisism. I need that to get better and write stories that people want to read. I hope you continue to read and review my story.
Date: 01/06/2005 - 09:11 am Title: Waking up
that is such a clever start! one chapter in and im hooked on your writting!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01/06/2005 - 01:58 am Title: The Spell
its good so far but kinda confusing
Date: 01/05/2005 - 10:49 pm Title: The Spell
Okay, I am so confused right now. How did Angelus get into the picture? And it's hard for me to picture him with Willow. Gross much! Anyway, making things a little more clear would be of the good.
Date: 01/05/2005 - 08:31 pm Title: Waking up
Lovely premise but could you identify who's speaking as it is a little confusing.
Date: 01/05/2005 - 07:07 pm Title: The Spell
yea!! no more confusion!!! thanks!! I really like!!
Date: 01/05/2005 - 06:53 pm Title: The Spell
willow/angel and buffy/spike...gotta love those pairings...you are doing a great job for a first timer!
Date: 01/05/2005 - 06:51 pm Title: Waking up
so did they go a lot further than they did in the series/
Date: 01/05/2005 - 05:17 pm Title: Waking up
I'm confused...more please and make with the splainy!!
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