Date: 09/28/2012 - 06:37 am Title: Introductions
So far I'm enjoying this story, but it needs a beta... grammar/spelling issues, and missing some words (the sex scene in this chapter in particular is missing som verbs!).
Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:27 pm Title: Introductions
Why did he have to screw Anya?!
Date: 05/02/2005 - 12:01 pm Title: Introductions
Kinda wondering if this is going to be a Spuffy fic or and Spanya lol I like that word..
Date: 01/18/2005 - 09:52 pm Title: Introductions
i like it..but i hate the idé of spike screwing someotherthen buffy..but like i said i like it so far
Date: 01/13/2005 - 02:08 pm Title: Introductions
Fine sex scene, just the thought of spike and anya is a little disturbing.......... keep up the good work:)
Date: 01/13/2005 - 06:01 am Title: Introductions
Hey great story so far but i don't really like that seen no you wrote it well for how you wanted to write but im not the kind for spike and other people will read on though good job so far
Date: 01/12/2005 - 06:46 am Title: Introductions
great job on the sex scene. I'm going to say something and please don't take it as negative feedback, just something to think about. I am a beta reader and one of the things I warn my authors about is redundancy in plot. By that I mean you put Spike and Buffy in a AU situation have then have hot monkey sex and fall in love. Yes, the sex scenes are great but the plot is done Way TOO MUCH. aND IT IS GETTING OLD. Which is why I suggested the Anya thing. For a new twist. For some flavor. So this isn't a critiscism but you asked for feedback and I wanted to give you what I thought. Now that you have it maybe you can add some flavor.
Date: 01/12/2005 - 02:25 am Title: Introductions
Just ignore all the people who are yelling at your for the Spike/Anya-ness. It's part of the story, and if they want no spike/anya they can go off and write their own story. I like it so far! Keep it up.
Date: 01/11/2005 - 10:09 pm Title: Introductions
evil! I hate reading about other ppl with buffy or spike. too bad thought this would be a good spuffy.
Date: 01/11/2005 - 10:07 pm Title: Introductions
I'm liking it alot so far and cudos to your first sex scene. They're really hard to write the first time but you'll get the hang of it . :D can't wait for more!!!
Date: 01/11/2005 - 09:34 pm Title: Introductions
Really didn't like to have to read about Spike screwing Anya. Hope this is only a one-time thing. Remember spuffy sensitive here.
Date: 01/11/2005 - 09:01 pm Title: Introductions
I DIDN'T EXSPECT THE ANYA AND SPIKE THING. NICE!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY
Date: 01/11/2005 - 06:24 pm Title: Introductions
I say keep it in- I'm assuming Anya and Spike are going to hook up whilst living with Buffy above the bar, and of course Buffy will get upset about that...sorry, I'm babbling, but great job:)
Date: 01/11/2005 - 06:06 pm Title: Introductions
Spike/anya isn't excatly my favorite pairing, but if it's part of the plot it is okay. There might be a little ewww factor of having to read the smut between them, althought it gives a good picture to reader that it is just sex between them, not something... uh... gentle. I'd say keep it there. Your doing great job.
Date: 01/11/2005 - 09:53 am Title: Introductions
Yes.Please continue.Can't wait to find out a little more background info on the gang.Sure hope Faith's not a bitch in this fic.Your doing a great job so far.Although the Anya and Spike scene just made my skin crawl(and not in a good way).
Date: 01/11/2005 - 09:37 am Title: Introductions
Have to say , the Spike/Anya encounter really,really made me cringe.But I have a pretty good idea where you might be going with the fic.Hope you update soon.