Date: 01/29/2005 - 01:28 am Title: Stripteases and Admissions
Oh WOW! I love it MORE NOW please its so good ur a great writer!
Date: 01/28/2005 - 11:44 pm Title: Stripteases and Admissions
incredible chapter
Date: 01/28/2005 - 10:55 pm Title: Stripteases and Admissions
O.K. I love this chapter, let me say that first, but I think it would have been more believable if they hadn't both been virgins. It can take YEARS of experience for a man to be able to locate a woman's clitoris, so I just don't buy Spike being such a remarkable lover naturally (even if he hung out at 3rd base for awhile). And Buffy has an amazing amount of self-assurance for a virgin - a sexy striptease and the whole pizza thing. Plus, I know from personal experience that the scenerio of 2 people losing their virginity together sounds more like getting driving directions than romance (Up, no, left, now over...) But that is real life and this is fantasy. And although I've just bitched about the lack of reality, don't mistake that for dislike. I like REALLY... I guess I'm just jealous. Losing my virginity would have been so much cooler if it had been Spike and it had been like that. Damn, I'm depressed now!
Date: 01/28/2005 - 10:09 pm Title: Stripteases and Admissions
loved it!!!!
Date: 01/28/2005 - 09:51 pm Title: Stripteases and Admissions
LOVED this chapter! Very sexy with a hint of sweetness to it. And yet again, good choice of songs!:)
Date: 01/28/2005 - 09:46 pm Title: Stripteases and Admissions
i love this tsory and im always happy to review. i find readinfg this story so interesting and just enjoy it a lot. thanx for updating quikly i always love that. this story is so good and i cant wait to read more. pleas update soon thanx
Date: 01/28/2005 - 09:29 pm Title: Stripteases and Admissions
Absolutely love the fact that they were both virgins and that the scene was romantic.
Date: 01/28/2005 - 09:16 pm Title: Stripteases and Admissions
Wow! They were both virgins? Damn.
Date: 01/28/2005 - 08:58 pm Title: Stripteases and Admissions
wow that was hot. i loved it. good choice of songs as well i loved the movie as well. keep up with the spuffy goodness too :) can't wait to find out whats gonna happend next.
Date: 01/28/2005 - 07:17 pm Title: Lust and Emotions
That was just Awe!
for the italic - did you try html-tags? that should do it. But I only try it with the reviews - that works. I never sent a fic in.
Date: 01/28/2005 - 02:52 pm Title: Lust and Emotions
damn it didnt show up... ok once again put < then i then > at the begining, then put < then / then i then > just dont put the "then"'s
Date: 01/28/2005 - 02:50 pm Title: Lust and Emotions
Great story. for the italics make sure you put before what you want in italics then after wards . Just deleted the * thats < then / then i then > at the end.
Date: 01/27/2005 - 08:11 pm Title: Lust and Emotions
Not soppy at all! Can't wait for the nautiness!
Date: 01/27/2005 - 05:22 am Title: Lust and Emotions
Great chapter I didn't think it was too sappy at all. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 01/27/2005 - 03:43 am Title: Lust and Emotions
Not too soppy, just really HOT. More please.
Date: 01/27/2005 - 03:31 am Title: Lust and Emotions
wat u cant leave it like that. i love this story and i want to no wat hapens next. please please update soon i cant wait to read the next chapter. please ake the update soon thanx
Date: 01/27/2005 - 03:21 am Title: Lust and Emotions
wonderful job! Can you copy and paste using a document type the words, italisize them and then copy them onto the format?
Date: 01/27/2005 - 02:39 am Title: Lust and Emotions
FANTASTIC - the description of them dancing!! WOW! I need a cold shower! Please please write more of that soon! I'm all twitterpated in anticipation of your next installation. Thanks for sharing your talent!
Date: 01/27/2005 - 01:54 am Title: Lust and Emotions
WOnderful chapter!!!! cant wait for more!!
Date: 01/26/2005 - 09:38 pm Title: Lust and Emotions
thank you for this story i loved it
Date: 01/26/2005 - 09:25 pm Title: Lust and Emotions
this is a really great story!!! I think spike and buffy's instant attraction to eachother is sweet and intense. i wish i could find someone like that.
Date: 01/26/2005 - 09:01 pm Title: Lust and Emotions
Hey, dear! Inspired choice of music- I love both of those songs! And the italics thing is something I couldn't get to work either, but no fear! You have to do these two things to make it work- Hope that helps! And by the way, smut is always a nice reward LOL :)
Date: 01/26/2005 - 08:28 pm Title: Lust and Emotions
i loved it. that was so good. i loved the emoitions that they were going through and i love the songs you picked for this chapter as well. keep up the good work.
Date: 01/26/2005 - 08:18 pm Title: Lust and Emotions
I think it's and then the text here but take * away. Great ´chapter, and I'm really waiting for the smut. :D
Date: 01/26/2005 - 08:09 pm Title: Lust and Emotions
WOW! that was an amazing chapter! oo la la... update soon!
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