Date: 08/23/2009 - 09:51 am Title: Chapter Twelve
It just cracked me up when Buffy said, "I don't think either one of us is in a position to point fingers where that's concerned (when Spike said that Cordelia was supposed to be dead) . As if coming back to life is a faux paux!
But I'm scared - why did Angel call Soike Will? Is he Angelus again? But no, he couldn't fool Cordy - could he?
Date: 01/23/2006 - 02:56 am Title: Chapter Twelve
howy crow. she just blurted it out like that. . wow
Date: 10/07/2005 - 11:23 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Very nice. I knew that it would be worth the wait.
Date: 10/06/2005 - 08:03 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Glad Cordy gets to stay...and glad I was wrong about Angelous. lol silly me. Awesome job. And loved Buffy admitting she really loves Spike.
Date: 06/23/2005 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Yeah-- an update! I've really been enjoying this story. I love Spike's insecurity, Buffy's inablity to be honest with herself, and Angel's jealousy. I loved the mental picture from the last chapter of Giles and Spike playing "Crash Bandicoot". Honestly, I think the only rational character in this saga is Cordelia! *sigh* I miss my show!
Date: 06/01/2005 - 03:25 am Title: Chapter Twelve
The story's progressing great. I love your style of writing, as I've said, and also your choice of words. I'm really enjoying it so far, and I honestly hope you continue to write more and that you get the next chapters up as soon as you can. Keep it up! :)
Date: 05/30/2005 - 01:18 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
More... more.. more, plz update soon, i can't wait...
Date: 05/30/2005 - 09:59 am Title: Chapter Twelve
I say we pin you to a fence using railroad spikes through your ears and let ya stay there till you finish this entire fic :P Loves it great fic.
Date: 05/30/2005 - 02:37 am Title: Chapter Twelve
That was yet another absolutely wonderful chapter! Describing Spike as un-undead... love that too. And I do appreciate a bit of my uncertainty about Cordy coming back being cleared up. And poor Spike so resigned to his unlovability... just about made me cry. Update soon, but I promise you no matter how long it takes it's well worth the wait.
Date: 05/29/2005 - 08:27 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Loved it! For a second I thought Angelus was back. Buffy confessed! They definitely need to talk, but you are evil with Cordy's interruption. Great smackdown of Angel by Cordy and completely deserved. More, please. :)
Date: 05/29/2005 - 04:32 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
All I can say is I LOVE this story and your writing. I don't know what stuff people have been saying, but the story line is great, the build up shows so much, and I can see it happening just as you write it, it leaves me with a perfect picture. I used to love Angel, ( before Spike ) but what you demonstrate in this story is what I have always felt after the appearance of Spike, how he loved without a soul, and always gave, and that Angel didn't know what Buffy really needed it. What I think you really have here is the terrific making of a movie showing what happens, if we could only get Joss to see this and get working on it. Anyway, PLEASE keep writing, I am waiting with bated breath for more chapters. thanks
Date: 05/29/2005 - 02:37 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Yeah - you're correct. Mean place to leave - because right know I'll read on *smile* Loved the chapter. I hope Spike believes now that Buffy loves him and loved him in the past. And Angel? *sigh* yeah - jealous every time, so jealous he forgot Cordelia. Looking forward to what Cordelia has to say about the shansu. And looking forward to read about Spike and Buffy talking. :)
Date: 05/29/2005 - 02:07 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
WOW that was intense. Loved the whole "potion" incident that cracked me up. Spike telling Giles he did not want him to fly all the way there to "have goo pour on his hand"...Spike and Buffy and the hyperion. I am wishing Cordi would of like blown angel up or something. that would of been GREAT!!!!!. I hope he blows this last chance and gets sent into dust for good. He doesn't even deserve the this chance. Asshole that he is. Ok Yeah you are a total meanie head for that bit of a cliffhanger. Naughty girl, I will just have to get Mona after you *laughs*. Excellent job on this chapter, NOW go write more.
Date: 05/29/2005 - 07:20 am Title: Chapter Twelve
suspens suspens..... !! cool chap, bravo !
Date: 05/29/2005 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Wow. Progression made. Glad that some things are now out in the open.
Date: 05/29/2005 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Oh my god. She said it again. She said it again. Wow. She did. Wow.
Date: 05/29/2005 - 02:10 am Title: Chapter Twelve
It IS a mean place to leave it at so don't wait too long to update. Your writing style is excellent.
Date: 05/29/2005 - 01:49 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Yes, very mean place to leave it. {Chuckles} Excellent chapter update though. I can just picture Giles doing the goo check to prove taht Willow's potion worked. LOL. I wonder what would happen if they put the goo on Buffy? Would it turn the same murky grey? Hmmmm ... just a little thought. I loved her declaration. Sometimes the best way to get Buffy to admit anything is to get her to a point where it blurts out. Touching scene with Angel and Cordy. {Smiles} Look forward to the next update.