Date: 08/22/2009 - 10:05 pm Title: Chapter Four
I can't BELIEVE people actually had complaints about your earlier chapters! One, two and three were ALL better than four. Not that four was bad, as literature. I'm just not as big with the angst as some people are.
Date: 01/04/2009 - 07:10 am Title: Chapter Four
Great Story! I have read it before, but not for a long time!
Date: 02/20/2007 - 01:14 pm Title: Chapter Four
I dont care about Spuffy interaction but i wish The Immortal wasn't Buffy's love interest. I know i know it's canon but to have that thing that stole Dru from him and humilated him being the one to be boinking Buffy is jsut horrible.
Date: 01/23/2006 - 01:53 am Title: Chapter Four
you do what you have to do to tell the story. dont listen to tother people telling you how to tell your sroty. and damn, its a good story.
Date: 11/07/2005 - 04:45 am Title: Chapter Four
I for one am willing to wait for the action, I prefer a little plot to my reading. I think you are doing a good job on this one.
Date: 10/06/2005 - 02:15 pm Title: Chapter Four
Great chapter! It was so emotional.
Date: 10/06/2005 - 04:02 am Title: Chapter Four
The pace is great for this story. Spike is sucha tease. lol Awesome job. Cant wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 05/11/2005 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter Four
YOu are doing great i am hooked
Date: 02/14/2005 - 05:29 pm Title: Chapter Four
I'm patient - don't worry.
It's sad to read that Spike doesn't won't to go back together wirh Buffy. Well; I'll read on (hoping Spike will change his mind)
Date: 02/14/2005 - 05:29 am Title: Chapter Four
Poor them. I do hope they get to have that perfect day.
Date: 02/12/2005 - 07:06 pm Title: Chapter Four
How can spike not want to get back together with Buffy??!!! Hopefully the two of them enjoy their day out together and realize that they are meant for one another. keep up the good work.
Date: 02/12/2005 - 05:44 pm Title: Chapter Four
I've read enough of your stories to know that this will eventually make everyone tingle with happy Spuffy moments so NO WORRIES. As alway, WONDERFUL TALE and WONDERFUL WRITER! keep the chappies coming please. Thanks.
Date: 02/12/2005 - 03:23 am Title: Chapter Four
don't let complaints from people bother you....the spuffy thing is neat, but it's the other characters that make it worth the read; honestly it would be boring if every story was just spike loves buffy, buffy hates spike, eventually tolerates him and falls in love.....been done too many times before!
Date: 02/11/2005 - 04:48 pm Title: Chapter Four
Beautiful moments between them. And her fears? Good. I hope she realizes soon exactly what she has in Spike, with Spike. His fears . . . I hate that he's always so unsure of how she feels about him. I hope there's some resolution in a good way soon. And Morty -- should be kicked to the curb. Just so you know, I loved the interaction about the car. Priceless. Keep up the very very good work.
Date: 02/11/2005 - 03:24 pm Title: Chapter Four
Oh dear, people are being impatient? Well, I know you'll deliver and I'm looking forward to reading it. At your own pace of course, because well, you're the author. Glad Niamh was able to talk you into writing this!
Date: 02/11/2005 - 02:36 pm Title: Chapter Four
I think the pacing is perfect. You just stick to your plan and what the story is telling your do. I love the fact that they aren't jumping back into one another's arms, but realizing there are real world issues a mile deep between them that need to be dealt with befor (or if) anything more can happend between them. This chapter pointed out all those issues perfectly. Life isn't perfect and it certainly hasn't been for the two of them so I think it fits that their reunion isn't going that way either. This chapter demonstrated perfectly the chemistry and connection they have always had while juxtaposing it agains the problems that are between them too. Looking forward to their day in the sun.
Date: 02/11/2005 - 01:40 pm Title: Chapter Four
Still loving this story. And a slow buildup to Spuffy makes us appreciate it all the more. Pity they can't have a real conversation and just lay their feelings bare... sigh... those two are so hard-headed :)
Date: 02/11/2005 - 12:04 pm Title: Chapter Four
I'm enjoying this story and I like the pace with which you are developing it. I think that their ambivalence makes sense, given the amount of time and all of the events that have happened since they were last together. I think the Buffy avoidance is in character - although always frustrating! I also think that the Angel angle is going to present some difficulties, since he seems to think it's 'all about him'. It's your story and you should develop it as you like. I'm looking forward to seeing how they spend their day.