[Report This]Date: 06/23/2005 - 05:20 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
really enjoyed the chapter. i can't wait til they talk about their relationship
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2005 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Yeah-- an update! I've really been enjoying this story. I love Spike's insecurity, Buffy's inablity to be honest with herself, and Angel's jealousy. I loved the mental picture from the last chapter of Giles and Spike playing "Crash Bandicoot". Honestly, I think the only rational character in this saga is Cordelia! *sigh* I miss my show!
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2005 - 04:40 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Loved this chapter update. Cordy telling them that this was ordained and sanctioned by the PTB is a big help for Buffy and Spike. Those two not running away from each other right now is a big thing too. I really hope that they keep moving in the right direction. Kick the Immortal out on his ass ... Spuffy all the way. {Smiles} Look forward to the next update.
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2005 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
OOhhh updatey goodness!! Really nice update. Nice Spuffy interaction, nice moment there with Cordy and Buffy. Oh! And Giles, all with the askfing for forgiveness -- bout bloody time. And Willow -- isn't she on the bandwagon now. Wonder what's gonna happen with the two blondes now that they are all alone. . .
Date: 06/01/2005 - 03:25 am Title: Chapter Twelve
The story's progressing great. I love your style of writing, as I've said, and also your choice of words. I'm really enjoying it so far, and I honestly hope you continue to write more and that you get the next chapters up as soon as you can. Keep it up! :)
Date: 05/30/2005 - 01:18 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
More... more.. more, plz update soon, i can't wait...
Date: 05/30/2005 - 09:59 am Title: Chapter Twelve
I say we pin you to a fence using railroad spikes through your ears and let ya stay there till you finish this entire fic :P Loves it great fic.
Date: 05/30/2005 - 02:37 am Title: Chapter Twelve
That was yet another absolutely wonderful chapter! Describing Spike as un-undead... love that too. And I do appreciate a bit of my uncertainty about Cordy coming back being cleared up. And poor Spike so resigned to his unlovability... just about made me cry. Update soon, but I promise you no matter how long it takes it's well worth the wait.
Date: 05/29/2005 - 08:27 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Loved it! For a second I thought Angelus was back. Buffy confessed! They definitely need to talk, but you are evil with Cordy's interruption. Great smackdown of Angel by Cordy and completely deserved. More, please. :)
Date: 05/29/2005 - 04:32 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
All I can say is I LOVE this story and your writing. I don't know what stuff people have been saying, but the story line is great, the build up shows so much, and I can see it happening just as you write it, it leaves me with a perfect picture. I used to love Angel, ( before Spike ) but what you demonstrate in this story is what I have always felt after the appearance of Spike, how he loved without a soul, and always gave, and that Angel didn't know what Buffy really needed it. What I think you really have here is the terrific making of a movie showing what happens, if we could only get Joss to see this and get working on it. Anyway, PLEASE keep writing, I am waiting with bated breath for more chapters. thanks
Date: 05/29/2005 - 02:37 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Yeah - you're correct. Mean place to leave - because right know I'll read on *smile* Loved the chapter. I hope Spike believes now that Buffy loves him and loved him in the past. And Angel? *sigh* yeah - jealous every time, so jealous he forgot Cordelia. Looking forward to what Cordelia has to say about the shansu. And looking forward to read about Spike and Buffy talking. :)
Date: 05/29/2005 - 02:07 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
WOW that was intense. Loved the whole "potion" incident that cracked me up. Spike telling Giles he did not want him to fly all the way there to "have goo pour on his hand"...Spike and Buffy and the hyperion. I am wishing Cordi would of like blown angel up or something. that would of been GREAT!!!!!. I hope he blows this last chance and gets sent into dust for good. He doesn't even deserve the this chance. Asshole that he is. Ok Yeah you are a total meanie head for that bit of a cliffhanger. Naughty girl, I will just have to get Mona after you *laughs*. Excellent job on this chapter, NOW go write more.
Date: 05/29/2005 - 07:20 am Title: Chapter Twelve
suspens suspens..... !! cool chap, bravo !
Date: 05/29/2005 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Wow. Progression made. Glad that some things are now out in the open.
Date: 05/29/2005 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Oh my god. She said it again. She said it again. Wow. She did. Wow.
Date: 05/29/2005 - 02:10 am Title: Chapter Twelve
It IS a mean place to leave it at so don't wait too long to update. Your writing style is excellent.
Date: 05/29/2005 - 01:49 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Yes, very mean place to leave it. {Chuckles} Excellent chapter update though. I can just picture Giles doing the goo check to prove taht Willow's potion worked. LOL. I wonder what would happen if they put the goo on Buffy? Would it turn the same murky grey? Hmmmm ... just a little thought. I loved her declaration. Sometimes the best way to get Buffy to admit anything is to get her to a point where it blurts out. Touching scene with Angel and Cordy. {Smiles} Look forward to the next update.
Date: 05/22/2005 - 11:09 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
I loved the chapter. You had a bit of Spuffiness in there - I like any spuffy, from a simple thougth to a full on sex-fest! It's all good for me. I loved the bit with Spike and Giles playing video games when Buff & Wills got back from shopping. I'm also glad Cordy gets to stay this time, but wondering if that is a good thing or a double edged sword (I'll guess you'll tell us as the story progresses). I just hope none of the "tests" on Spike go all wonky and end up causing more troubles for our blonde duo. Thanks for sharing, your story, your way and I'm sure I'll love it. More please.
Date: 05/22/2005 - 05:12 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Love the update!!! Giles and Spike playing XBOX--funny!!! Can't wait for more!!! ~Lily
Date: 05/21/2005 - 01:58 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Well, I really loved how you treated Spike and Buffy. The way that they act like they're ina relationship but insist that they aren't... and then each wonder silently why it feels like they're in a relationship... Quite brilliant. Though I wonder what Spike is... Right now, I'm not sure if Cordelia is sounding evil or not. Release him from his curse... are taling about setting his soul loose or about letting him very happily screw his brains out? And the fact that I can't tell makes me love this all the more. Predictability makes everything so boring. Update soon!
Date: 05/20/2005 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Good plot points for these characters that were involved in the chapter. Storylines need to be moved around. I can understand that not every chapter will be Spuffy happy. Always glad to see it though. Frustrating when it is Angsty, but this wasn't angsty either. You gave us tidbits of hope with the handholding and peace with Giles. I liked the Angel/Cordy plot as well. I just hope that isn't some trick. Angel making with the happy if the curse is still in place is not a good thing. Look forward to the next update.
Date: 05/20/2005 - 03:59 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Yay! An update. I'm very happy with the pace of things, and there's always some small progress or development. I loved Giles playing video games with Spike and the subtle touches you're painting for us between B&S. Very curious about Cordelia. Good chapter.
Date: 05/20/2005 - 03:41 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
excellent chapter! I thought it was perfect! I loved spike and Giles playing video games!!!
Date: 05/20/2005 - 02:10 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Ok so we all want to have Spuffy 24/7 but you are writing a story here. You did a great job with furthering the plot. LMAO at Spike and Giles playing video games, that is something I would love to see. Too bad Connor did not just stake his dad and go through therapy for the next bizillion years would of made it all much better *grins*
Date: 05/20/2005 - 12:48 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
I'm sorry to hear that you are having to deal with stupid reviews/reviewers. As I think you said in a previous author's note there are plenty of stories out their where Spike and Buffy get together 5 minutes after they meet. I don't bother reading those stories; and I'm glad this isn't one of them! I 've really been enjoying this story and the way you are developing the various characters. In this chapter i found Spike remembering not only Buffy's favorite donut but Willow's as well poignant and very much in character. I also snickered at the thought of Giles and Spike playing X-box! Hee! Finally I'm enjying the Angel/ Cordelia/ Connor storyline; and look forward to seeing how you resolve that one. Looking eagery forward to more!
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