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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 10:06 pm Title: 23

Oh I missed some chapters! Spike's lines were fun *gg*. And I was right hehe: Riley met Harmony at the party. And fell for her ;-) That was fun too

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 04:41 am Title: 23

Love Spike patrolling with a baby sling. Gotta believe that a baby adopting the characteristics of her vampire father and Slayer mother is going to be a good bit tougher than your average infant. And I do enjoy Riley and Harmony together. Those two would be a very good couple. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Schehrezade Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2006 - 10:21 am Title: 23

Okay classic stuff the Baby on Patrol and Spike fretting over coolness LOL and then Shudder the Harmony/Riley ahhhhh

But kinda funny he the big arsed demon hunter had no clue what she was LOL - good stuff babes

Reviewer: cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 08:59 pm Title: 23

sara, the entire story has been a parody of epic proportions, and you are hung up on a single chapter's occurrences? i have yet to find a character in this story written even remotely near canon, but you find riley ooc. dude, lighten up! and please stop reading, because you are obviously clueless and don't need to review any more chapters...

a fruit-loop of a paring, but shallow riley and airhead harmony deserve each other. harmony needs someone to appreciate her boobies.

Reviewer: slinkyPK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 02:21 pm Title: 23

Oh, Holly! I bow before you! There is no way I could have rebutted Sara's argument in so eloquent a manner. I agree. Not that I'm bashing someone for disliking a fic or voicing a complaint about something that has been written. Folks have a right or dislike what they choose. But, seriously! This chapter was a RIOT! I loved it! And, c'mon, Sara was fine with everything up until this? With all the controversy from the beginning of this story, she chose now to bitch? That just shows a complete lack of both intelligence and sense of humor.

But, hey, to each his or her own, right?

Reviewer: Athenewolfe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 02:20 pm Title: 23

This story rocks... Harmony and Riley rock... i love this pairing and of course... you rock
*hugs*

Reviewer: HollyDB Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 05:03 am Title: 23

Sara, sweetie, you need to lighten up.

Harmony would NOT turn Riley, at least not at first. Are you kidding me? She is the most inept vampire ever.

And honestly, if you can't understand the hilarity that is Riley/Harmony, you need to stop reading fanfic. It wasn't like Raven had Spike with Harmony, or Buffy with Riley...or any characters that people would care about (on a Spuffy site, at least) with other people, in which case, at this point in the fic, I would understand your protest. Pairing two minor characters together and - GASP - writing about it is hardly grounds to bitch. And definitely not reason to storm off of a fic so close to its finale.

Though, since I haven't seen your name on the review pages, I suppose Raven can afford to lose you as a reader. If you're only going to turn up to complain about something trivial, it's better to leave this territory for the big kids.

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 04:56 am Title: 23

Eeee, just thinking of Spike in that baby contraption had me giggling...and then the bumper sticker idea....hehe, that's great!!! Oh man, 'let me be your wild Bronco, baby!' I almost spewed my soda on my computer. That's classic!!! Hehe, loved it all, and I seriously can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2006 - 01:55 am Title: 23

eww, that was disgusting. i really didn't need to read that. i don't even know how you can write that. riley was way out of character. he wouldn't act like that and definitely not with harmony. she'll probably end up turning him. sorry, that was just gross and disturbing. that is enough to make me quit this story.

Reviewer: ComedyofErrors Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2006 - 10:15 pm Title: 23

Fun patrolling, stupid Riley.

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2006 - 06:45 pm Title: 23

This story kicks ass. You rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: just sue Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2006 - 06:26 pm Title: 23

What a hoot! You were so right about the Rarmony and am longing to see where you go with it. And the line about getting a 'Baby on Board' sticker for Spike's car - had me in fit of giggles! Nope, you definitely can't write amusing stuff! *snorts*

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2006 - 06:04 pm Title: 23

riley and harmony are a perfect match. great chapter :D

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2006 - 01:30 pm Title: 23

Wow didn't expect that but wow!

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2006 - 01:14 pm Title: 23

Great ,New chapter! I hope the scene with Harmony and Riley was meant to for laughs because it certainly made me laugh.

Reviewer: Delicia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2006 - 09:29 am Title: 23

Loved the baby sling! I am a little frightened to have Harmony and Riley together. That can just lead to trouble! Though,can't wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2006 - 09:23 am Title: 23

I just love this story and how fun it is to read, it's like a porn comedy and that is really good.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2006 - 07:38 am Title: 23

didnt really care for the riley/harmony part but loved the spuffy part

Author's Response: The Rarmony is essential to the plot, otherwise I would never have gone there...it is pretty funny though, LOL. Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: bloodshedbaby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2006 - 07:33 am Title: 23

Hee! Love this chapter. So harmony and Riley? Perfect couple, actually.

Author's Response: *snorts* It did seem like a pairing that was a no brainer!!

Reviewer: Allison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2006 - 04:26 am Title: 23

Absolutely loved the imagery of Spike wearing a baby sling and fighting with Lia- adorable and very Spike-like! And Riley and Harmony is icky, but it keeps them away from Buffy and Spike, so more power to them. Great update! :)

Reviewer: Rae Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2006 - 04:25 am Title: 23

LOL Riley and Harmony! That is just great. I enjoyed the whole chp. Spike with the baby sling trying to be the big bad was fantastic. Two thumbs up!

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