Date: 03/01/2005 - 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow, that was a really good chapter. The s**t is really hitting the fan now. poor Buffy, poor Spike...now a baby and crazy Fred could be pregnant to. She wanted that from the beginning. It was so obvious Spike was being mind f**ked. I'm so glad everyone thought that from the start and not ver a long period of time. I really can't wait for the next chapter. Again it was really good but I don't look forward to the Riley stuff but I'll deal. Thanks for the update
Date: 03/01/2005 - 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 7
I don't think I've ever been so glad to see Doyle in a story. lol. I absolutely *love* how Tara and Angel and Cordelia and Anya and Oz are so faithful to Buffy. I think that's my favorite part of the story (the friends)....well it will be my favorite part until Spike comes to his senses and Fred gets her comeuppance (I love that word lol). And Riley seems really sweet also. Thanks for the update! =)
Date: 03/01/2005 - 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 7
i really like this story.... okay i really want to kill fred and spike for what they are doing but i know it will all turn out great in the end.... i cant get enough of this story.... -waiting for an update, Amanda
Date: 03/01/2005 - 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 7
I've read! Hug me now, I need it know. I'll hug you back ('cause this was hard to read)
Author's Response: One big hug heading your way....I know it hurts it is killing me to write it.....
Date: 03/01/2005 - 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 7
I had problems with Spike cheating, because I know how that feels. Now that he broke up I can truly enjoy this because I really love angst. And you write it good =D
Date: 02/28/2005 - 11:41 pm Title: 6
OMG! can that be anymore freaking slit wristing chapter I have ever read in awhile!!!!!! I sat here and cried and screamed dude that was so freaking depressing, That hurts so much! why would he do such a thing like that! that peice of shit@! i hate him! I hate him I hate him I hate him!!!!!!!!!! Yay I hate him! Hope he dies! ANyways great depressing chapter! you gotta love the drama hope for more soon hope someone catches that batard! and that whorea!
Date: 02/28/2005 - 09:56 pm Title: 6
Hard to read? Yes, because it's Fred, and not Buffy. But God, it is very hot. I thihk you've tapped into the secret fantasy of everyone who watched the show, and thought Buffy wasn't good enough for spike. Not to mention any tiny little dominatrix fantasies with Spike as my sex slave. I don't like that I like it, but god help me, I do. That being said, I'm very very glad it will be Spuffy in the end.
Date: 02/28/2005 - 11:46 am Title: 6
Please stopt this!!! I love the history but if I were Buffy I could never forgive him. Spike knows what is happening and like it anyway. I really dont know how can you fix this.Maybe this story is not going to have a happy ending
Date: 02/28/2005 - 05:42 am Title: 6
What in the world? This b**ch (Fred) is really crazy and horny...lol Spike and his poor penis. God and Buffy, this is going to cause some serious devastation even when they find out Fred is a looney. I feel really sad for them. You know it is a little hard to read but I'll deal. Also, there is some serious smut going on...I like it. Can't wait for the next gut wrenching chapter. This is very good and very disturbing. I may need some therapy...lol
Date: 02/28/2005 - 02:05 am Title: 6
I know you said that fred and spike's little 'fling' will help move the story along but i hate that he's doing this to buffy!!!!!!! he's gonna feel like shit in a little while and i hope buffy makes him pay!!!!!!! keep up the great work though!!
Date: 02/28/2005 - 01:55 am Title: 4
no no NOOOOOOOO!!!! fred is supposed to be the good gal.!!! this is gonna go downhill isn't it!!! keep up the great work.
Date: 02/27/2005 - 10:51 pm Title: 6
good update but i cant wait for buffy and spike to be together
Date: 02/27/2005 - 04:10 pm Title: 6
arg, please make it better! Fred is a conniving bitca in this story - and though spike is doped up and feeling crappy, he has no right cheating on buffy - he knows what he's doing and he's still going behind her back. Poor Buffy - trying to be the supportive girlfriend and not having a clue what's really going on. Hopefully someone fires Fred and Spike has some major redeeming to do!!!! anyway, great story, very well written and I cant wait for the next chapter :)
Date: 02/27/2005 - 01:48 pm Title: 6
I can't believe all the drugs Fred is giving Spike. And all the brainwashing! That's so sad. And so illegal. Poor Buffy, I'm really worried about what's going to happen in 2 weeks when she surprise visits him, assuming Fred doesn't make him break up with her before then.
Date: 02/24/2005 - 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
Fred's a dirty whore..........Really like the story........great plot!
Date: 02/24/2005 - 04:29 am Title: Chapter 5
too bad we have to hate Fred in this....kind of hard to see her in a bad guy position...much easier to see Lilah doing this or Justine than Fred....
Date: 02/23/2005 - 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
just read it for the first time and i am loving it so far but i really dont like fred helping him and screwing him when he needs help...please tell me that she wont be in the picture much longer ?
Date: 02/23/2005 - 09:46 pm Title: Chapter One
So glad you decided to post the chapter and that everyone seems to be accepting of it. This is a wonderful story and you should be very proud. Don't be nervous about the next few updates- you have lots of support!
Date: 02/23/2005 - 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
Well, I think you know I don't like the Spike / Fred. So I will only skip the chapter, and maybe not review. I'm not sure yet.
Date: 02/23/2005 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow Fred's bad n evil in this story!! She better not screw everything up for them! I really hope spike can kick his addiction and realize what fred's been trying to do! Please update soon - I can't wait to read more!
Date: 02/23/2005 - 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 5
Well I really hope Spike kicks his nasty drug addiction for good and proves he's worthy of Buffy. Great story! Can't wait to read more :)
Date: 02/23/2005 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aw you shouldn't have been reluctant to post! That was a really good chapter -- super scary! How can Fred do that? Does Lilah know that Fred is psycho? Is she even a doctor? OMG she better go to jail for that! I loved how Spike said Buffy's name while sleeping, but I guess that's that last time he will, Fred seemed to take care of that. Don't wait so long to post again! lol =)
Date: 02/23/2005 - 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
Excellent chapter. I don't know what you're worried about. It didn't make me want to stop reading it. i like nutty Fred. I love it when the characters are tottally opposite the characters they play on TV. I hope she isn't pregnant. That would be the worst. Buffy's getting hit on left and right. I'm sorry no ones good enough for her but Spike...Spuffy forever in my book. I must admit from your author note. I can only imagine the f**ked stuff thats about to happen but I'm also looking forward to it. This story is really good. Kepp up the good work. Don't be afraid to post your chapters...Do your thing girl. I'll read it...lol
Date: 02/23/2005 - 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 5
Well, my dear, I read this with trepidation. I am glad that it was non-consensual on Spike's part. I hope he doesn't give in to the bitch, Fred on his own doing. I have to admit, I never liked Fred on Angel, (I know don't anyone kill me for that confession) and so i don't mind you using her at the skank. But, it's hard for me to read even chapters where Spike cheats on Buffy or visa versa, especially spike because he was always so devoted to the women he truly loved. Anyway, good story. Luv, spuf
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