Date: 06/13/2005 - 12:13 pm Title: Separation Anxiety
He finally said the big "L" word and they both chose to ignore it?? *Sigh* silly people. lol! Awesome chapter!
Date: 05/04/2005 - 09:37 pm Title: Separation Anxiety
Mmm reunion sex... It's really weird to read an argument without actual dialogue, lol. But I love this story anyway. I hope Buffy figures out what she wants soon. =)
Author's Response: I know ain't it the best..lol. You're the thrid person who has said that about the who being told the dialogue. It was something that I wanted to explore with the story but I'm glad it hasn't turned you off from reading it. Buffy knows what she wants she's just being Buffy, Queen of Denial as someone put it. Thanks for the review
Date: 05/04/2005 - 05:59 pm Title: Separation Anxiety
It's strange to read when they argue, because that is no real conversation (I don't know how to say it right = no direct speech? ... , everything is told.) I hope Buffy will decide whom she wants: Spike or Giles. She's married to Giles and sleeps with him, but when Spike has a girl in his house, she gets jealous. Maybe they have to drive to Buffy's home - in case Giles is calling.. And I wonder how long he'll stay away. It seems to me he's suspicious. .... That could be an awful surprise ahead. Loved how the chapter ended.
Author's Response: You said it right Cordy. Everything is told to you. I took a risk writing this entire story that way. It seems people like it but I want do it again. Its a challenge and kinda limits me. Any how, Rupert has a lot to be suspicious of if he can keep has face out of a book long enough. There will be some interesting things ahead some good, some bad. Thanks for the review.
Date: 05/04/2005 - 06:20 am Title: Separation Anxiety
Me thinks a Rupert might be back sooner.........me thinks Buffy needs to reeval her wants and needs....Spike, oh poor Spikey, oh so much Love's bitch..........Lovely hot chapter
Author's Response: You are so right. Glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for the review.
Date: 05/04/2005 - 03:18 am Title: Separation Anxiety
I loved this chapter and you definitely did NOT go too far with the smut. I will say that not using any " marks makes it a little harder to follow to me. But that may just be me. And this was the only chapter I noticed it in. Anyway, great chapter and I can't wait to see where this goes.
Author's Response: Thanks I'll keep that in mind. Hopefully the next three chapters will be easier to read. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Keep reading there's more smutty fun to come and thanks for the review
Date: 05/04/2005 - 01:54 am Title: Separation Anxiety
Bless you!
Okay, maybe that's a bit naughty of me to say 'bless' you since this is an affair, but...
I'm glad that Cecily turned out to be a bitch! Yay!
Great job and yes, Buffy needs a wakeup call, but so does William.
After all, he's playing with a married woman and she never hid that.
Okay, thay being said!
Yeah! They're still together. I hope, really that Rupert is having an affair of his own and will let Buffy go, gracefully.
Luv, Spuf
Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome feedback. Not that I approve of the affair, its just Spike and Buffy and you want them to be together no matter what. We'll see what happens in the last three chapters. When the cats away the mice will play but there is always a trap or two lying around...;) wink
Date: 05/04/2005 - 01:53 am Title: Separation Anxiety
God that is probably the hottest sex scene I have ever read, You are in my opinon the Master of smut lol. Can' wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyedt the smut. I think I do okay. I would love to hold that title but I think Nautibitz, Paganbaby, Sluggie Pattyanne and countless others have that honor. They are some of my favorites and have inspired me. They make what I write seem very tamed...lol
Thanks for the review
Date: 05/04/2005 - 01:41 am Title: Separation Anxiety
Amazing chapter. So passionate. Have a feeling that after this two weeks is up, Buffy won't be able to say she doesn't love Spike...but who knows with the Queen of Denial. Looking forward to the next few chapters.
Author's Response: A lot of things are going to happen in the next few chapters. I'm almost positive there is going to be at least three more. She loves him but she wouldn't be Buffy is she didn't deny herself. Thanks for the review.
Date: 05/04/2005 - 01:11 am Title: Separation Anxiety
great update
Author's Response: I just love how your reviews are straight to the point...Thanks
Date: 05/04/2005 - 12:52 am Title: Separation Anxiety
Wow, I don't even know where to begin! First, I'm so happy that Buffy went over to his apartment when Cecily was there, and I was even happier to see that Cecily left- that was lovely! I was a little frightened by how rough William seemed to be for a moment there, but his sweetness definitely compensated for that. Incredibly hot sex scene, by the way:) You've always written the hottest smut! I'm glad William told her he loves her, and it's awesome that Rupert will be gone for a while. I can't wait to read what's to come!
Author's Response: Allison I had to get rid of Cecily. I refuse and I repeat refuse to let her have William. I do like my sadistic William. Note through out the chapters he does tend to throw things, smash things, and manhandle Elizabeth but I also make sure to balance it out with his tender and sensitive side. Besides, Elizabeth likes it because he's like that in bed. Although William gets off on it more...lol. I love the smut thats why the chapter is so damn long. I don't know when to stop..lol. I just want you to know its reviews like this that brought such a quick update and for once I don't dread writing the next couple of chapters. A lot of stuff is going to go down some good, some bad. Thanks for your review
Date: 05/04/2005 - 12:22 am Title: Separation Anxiety
That was very hot. Buffy realized she wasn't in love with Rupert last chapter, now she needs to figure out that she is in love with WIlliam. Hopefully, William will use the next two weeks to get her to figure it out.
Author's Response: She loves William she's just scared to admit it. Oh boy the next two weeks are going to fun and smutty. Thanks for the review.
Date: 05/03/2005 - 11:53 pm Title: Separation Anxiety
I have been enjoying this story quite a bit, so please don't take this the wrong way, but I don't think this chapter is as well done as the previous chapters. I felt like I was reading a summary of conversation instead of the conversation itself. There was too much Elizaeth said and William said, but there was no actual conersation. The entire chapter felt a bit like a run on sentence. There was too much telling and not enough showing. This just doesn't seem up to the standards of the prevous chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the feedback. I knew this story would be a challenge to write when I chose this structure of writing it. You are correct about reading a summary of the conversation because I am offering you only a glimpse into their relationship. It would have been a hell of alot easier to write the entire story the other way and believe me there are times I wished I did...lol Maybe it is too much, I do find writing arguments with this structure a little difficult. I hope this chapter didn't turn you off the story. Again, thanks for the feedback.
Date: 05/03/2005 - 11:52 pm Title: Separation Anxiety
That was a really sweet ending. I laughed at the part where you called it 'do-it' juice, that was funny. She really needs to leave Giles and go for the hot, sexy, bleach-blonde brit.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the ending. When I heard the term 'do-it' juice, I thought it was hilarious and had to put it in the story. Unfortunately, I wasn't creative enough to think of that on my own. No question Spike is the man she needs to be with. Who knows maybe Giles will leave her. Thanks for the review
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