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Reviewer: smartervin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2020 - 07:11 am Title: Chapter 1: 'Did Their Will'

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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2017 - 09:24 am Title: Chapter 1: 'Did Their Will'

Poor tortured Buffy and Spike!

Reviewer: Connie_3D Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2015 - 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 1: 'Did Their Will'

You are an excellent writer, but you break the third wall to often to be taken seriously as when you do that, you drag the reader away from the story and put yourself in the middle.  It is frustrating and annoying.  Quite frankly, if it was not for that spark of something unique about your style, I would have stopped reading after the third chapter.  Instead, I forced myself to re-engage after each interruption.

You characterizations where good with Xander, Rayne, Gunn, Lynsay, and Joyce.  Althought Joyce was more potty mouth that she normally is.  Buffy came across whiny and childish, Spike was not slick enough, Angel was too accepting, Willow to eager to bow to Gile and Xander, Giles would not have called in Rayne as he would already know that breaing the claim was impossible.  Rayne might have volunteered, but I think he would have been working in the background on the down low, as that was always his mo.  In general, Riley was just a piece of shit and correctly portray. 

I'll be reading your more recent work, if any, for signs of growth.  You have talent, you just need to mold it and learn your craft.

Reviewer: Sharon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2007 - 01:23 am Title: Chapter 1: 'Did Their Will'

It looks like this will be another great story, but you do know that Sunnydale had more cemetaries than three, and that Spike's crypt was in RestField, right?

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2007 - 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 1: 'Did Their Will'

Oh I love it.

Reviewer: Ashlee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2005 - 02:48 am Title: Chapter 1: 'Did Their Will'

I'm so glad you're still planning on continuing this story, because I think it's so sweet!

Author's Response: Thank you, yes, I am re-editing and finishing this fic here. Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2005 - 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: 'Did Their Will'

I've seen it on BC, but I don't now if I reviewed. I would love to read more. :-D

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, it was on BC, but I am revamping it and re-editing it for this site. I intend on finishing it here. Thanks, again, Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2005 - 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 1: 'Did Their Will'

This is actually quite funny........ LOve the two different POVs cant wait for more.... :-)

Author's Response: Thank you. I started this fic in a 'tongue-in-cheek' manner. It will get angstsy because we know that the Scoobies, Giles and Riley are not going to enjoy watching the Spuffy dance! Luv, Spuf

Reviewer: Jenna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2005 - 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1: 'Did Their Will'

I think that this is a good start. I want you to update asap. I wanna know what happens.

Author's Response: Thank you. I was going to start another vampire/slayer WIP here after I finished submitting SYC, however... I got an E mail asking me why I never finished this story (on another site) and I can't really figure out why I didn't??? Anyway, there are already 7 or 8 chapters of 'Dance' finished and I will probably submit Chapter 2, here, tonight. Thanks, again, Luv, Spuf

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