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Reviewer: Jenx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/10/2006 - 02:48 pm Title: Named and Ashamed

I'm sorry, but, ugh. I can't read on anymore.

If I have to be nasty, the story just sucks. If I have to be encouraging, you need to work on the storyline, your grammer, your characters' emotional control and to pan out each chapter more carefully. It moved simply too fast and most scenes simply DON'T connect to the next.

Maybe you can do better with a beta.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2005 - 08:38 pm Title: Named and Ashamed

I wonder how the meeting with her (Buffy's) mum will went ...

Reviewer: songgal1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2005 - 03:30 am Title: Named and Ashamed

what a nice guy spike is!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2005 - 03:24 am Title: Named and Ashamed

great update

Reviewer: Bint Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2005 - 02:00 am Title: Named and Ashamed

more!

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2005 - 07:17 pm Title: Named and Ashamed

Wow! Cordy's sucha beeyatch, eh? I can't believe that she'd just go tell the whole school! Anyways, loving the Spuffy lovey-dovey-ness, so keep it up! Great fic, I can hardly wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!

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