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Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2007 - 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh I still love it the second time around.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2006 - 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh I just love this fic! From just one altered decision everything changes... with Faith giving up evil the whole emphasis of the end of season 3 is completely different. I love the fact that Buffy realises straight away that she can be independent and puts Angel behind her, and then meets Spike and the magic is there! I love that Buffy finally helps Angel resolve his Angelus issues and that Xander accepts the Spuffy. I'm glad you made a point of including Willow's selfish controlling nature... but I want to know what she's done to Buffy and how Spike and Angel and the rest of the Phoenix Investigations team can help her!
SEQUEL PLEASE!!!!

Reviewer: Jenx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2006 - 09:25 am Title: Chapter 1

I like your story,. but it could be better if u'd paragraphed better. The sentences are all cluttered up together and its tiring.

You could have wrote something like:

"Buffy Anne Summers!" Joyce chastisized.

"You are one of the most capable people I have ever met, " Joyce smiled adoringly, "But that doesn't mean you can't let people help you along the way." etc etc...

Just my 2 pence... I feel that paragraphing and adding a little more scenes in between mini-speeches will loosen clutters and make things more interesting.

Good job though, thanks for sharing :)

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2006 - 02:03 am Title: Chapter 1

So pleased you updated, love this fic.

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2006 - 01:23 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow you have been busy. Terrific update.

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2006 - 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love it more.

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2006 - 02:04 am Title: Chapter 1

Curiously I was only checkng your site the other day looking for an update. Hope to read more soon.

Reviewer: Megan/Peta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 05:36 am Title: Chapter 1

Whoa. Very different concept. I am huge with the admiration of Buffy seeing Angel for what he really was. Going away after the mayor is something she really needed to do. Xander left. Why couldn't Buffy? Okay, rambling. Onto chapter two.

Reviewer: Chelsea Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2005 - 10:06 am Title: Chapter 1

Hey. Great story! I absolutely love it! I can't wait 2 see how they defeat Glory, what happens with Buffy and the scooby's, and what Angel is plotting. This story is excellent and I can' t wait for more!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2005 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

wanted to wait to read this until it got further along. loved it. great start.

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2005 - 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, great starting chapter!!! I love that you're gonna do a twist on the end of S3 with Buffy leaving, and being immortal. Haven't read a story like that, so I'm very curious and anxious to see the progression. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2005 - 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Another new WIP near Dance of Death ? Wow. Oh - another immortal Buffy, but different this time. I wish Buffy good luck. Under this circumstances it seems to be the best that she'll can do - leaving.

Author's Response: My Spuffy muses have return and are much with the singing! :) As for Buffy being an immortal....well that tends to happen one reason or another in most of my fics. If she's paired with a vamp, I want them to have the eternal love thing...But like you pointed out this isn't a cross, just those funny PTB giving the goodies....suspious....what could they be planning?? I'm glad you agree with me about her leaving. Yuo need to get away to get some perspective sometimes and when your heart is ripped out and squished, distance is always very appealing :)

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2005 - 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

A great begining. Please continue with this story. Can't wait to see how it progresses. Update soon and often Please

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2005 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

good so far and i cant wait for buffy to run into spike again

Reviewer: Shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2005 - 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

What an interesting concept. I got totally hooked right away. I don't think I have seen this done. Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

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