Date: 06/11/2005 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great update :) I won't miss the update of the next chapters now. Poor Buffy - going throuhg the sewers without shoes... Mmm - Spike is going to buy shoes. i wonder if Buffy will complain aobut them. ;-)
Date: 06/09/2005 - 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
This buffy is so interesting in a "me Slayer" "you Vampire" sort of way (No ice cream? - that's just SCARY). Love it, want more please.
Date: 06/09/2005 - 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
ooh ooh! please update! i crave this story now like Spike craves blood... and Buffy... and violence... and... to hell with it. I need it! heh. love it a whole bunch, thanx for getting me hooked ;)
Date: 06/09/2005 - 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
{chuckles} Loved the whole ice cream bit. That was so cute. This all by the book Slayer is an interesting angle to follow. You are doing the strictness well, but underneath it all is still that Buffy that likes to break the rules. She just needs more convincing, like Spike being a total ass to goad her into it. LOL. Look forward to the next update.
Date: 06/09/2005 - 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter. I loved the "She'd probably bite it off" line. I like how you got Buffy truly in character with the Wishverse. She's almost acting like Kendra but there's still the Buffy we all know and love trying to break free from the Watcher training that she's been brainwashed with. And who doesn't love a naked Spike and chocolate icecream combo? Plz update soon.
Date: 06/09/2005 - 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 5
luved the update huni :D :D ooo i want choc ice cream now.. i have ben & jerrys so it'll have to do :P LOL :D more soon huni *shares my ice cream* thanx for the chapter huni xx
Date: 06/07/2005 - 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 4
I like that chapter and Buffy holding on to him like a preschooler. ;)
Date: 06/07/2005 - 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
Lovin' it so far. I just love rebel Spike - the master isn't going to tell him what to do and what to drink (but I'm thinking a little blonde girl might get away with it soon). This is an interesting Buffy one that is a true Slayer with no friends. Can't wait for more.
Date: 06/07/2005 - 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
interesting story i can't wait to see how it goes. please update soon and often. great start.
Date: 06/07/2005 - 04:44 am Title: Chapter 4
:D more soon huni-- yay! LOL luved the update. heheehe she has big feet for someone so small LOL :P
Date: 06/06/2005 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
great update
Date: 06/06/2005 - 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love how he carried her through the sewers and how he felt a little guilty for what she had been through. Plz update soon. I'm really lovin' this fic.
Date: 06/06/2005 - 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
{chuckles} She's all Sacred Duty Slayer Barbie. {giggles} Good update. Look forward to seeing where this goes next
Date: 06/06/2005 - 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
Another great chapter. I love road trip stories, especially when Spike is only thinking about a nano-second ahead. Your slayer is very interesting, as we learn bits of her personality. Neither of them is acting as they should. I like his reluctance to let her use Dru's things, while at the same time flipping immediately into caretaker role. The shadow of the watchers filtering through is very well down. Looking forward to more. Thanks!
Date: 06/06/2005 - 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter - lots of important stuff: Spike's impulsiveness which pretty much burns his bridges with the clan; the slayer's snakiness and comments about his height; her fear and of course, music 101.
Date: 06/06/2005 - 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
Excellent job of portraying Spike's fascination with the slayer and the challenge of the death dance. He comes across as being intelligent, analytical, and drawn to the challenge, with the risk of death being the biggest attraction. Great chapter!
Date: 06/06/2005 - 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love the twists and think this is a very interesting version of Spike. And not Angeles/Angel - a big plus! I'm looking forward to more. Thanks!
Date: 06/06/2005 - 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
Good update. Look forward to the next one. {Smiles}
Date: 06/04/2005 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
Road-trip! Fun with Spike and Buffy. I am interested to see what the reaction of the Master and Dru will be. Also I wonder what they will do in LA. Good chapter.
Date: 06/04/2005 - 06:41 am Title: Chapter 3
Loved the update! Looking forward to see how they'll do on the run - if they drive one annother crazy, lol!
Date: 06/04/2005 - 05:52 am Title: Chapter 2
:-D Clever Spike - he found her! AND decided to free her... so the fun can began now, huh?
Date: 06/04/2005 - 05:06 am Title: Chapter 1
At last I start reading now! I have no problem with a darker more vampiric Spike - I just don't like to read other pairings than Spuffy - so bring it on :))
Date: 06/04/2005 - 03:01 am Title: Chapter 3
great update
Date: 06/03/2005 - 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
please, please! up-date!!!
Date: 06/03/2005 - 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
Luving it huni :D :D Go Spike-- haha now ur stuck with her! GOOD! lol :D :D more soon cya xx
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