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Reviewer: cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 06:43 pm Title: Nine

Quite a few typos in this chapter... I realize that you are trying to get the chapters out fast, but a simple read-over would have caught most of them... That said, fantastic chapter content-wise. So, Spike's secret is that he's been in love with Buffy...let's hope these two crazy kids talk to each other soon and get this straightened out!!

Reviewer: beasleysmom Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 06:05 pm Title: Nine

Holy Crap! Man you know just how to have us beggin' for more don't ya. Okay don't make me beg, but damn it I will. Please post soon, cause I don't think I can stand the suspence. Kuddos!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 05:50 pm Title: Nine

good chappie and loved the kiss

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 05:16 pm Title: Nine

Oh no, the kiss of Angsty goodness......and you've better be posting where very soon......LOL

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 04:39 pm Title: Nine

Wonderful that what a first kiss is.

Reviewer: Tuesday! Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 04:12 pm Title: Nine

More soon! I must know what happens!

Reviewer: Michele Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 03:26 pm Title: Nine

so cruel to leave it there! great chapter. i'm really enjoying the story! more please!

Reviewer: Martine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 03:15 pm Title: Nine

Last time I reviewed one of your storys I recommended ways I thought you could improve it. Sometimes I have more balls than brains, but that's not the case this time around. I absolutely love this fic. Wouldn't change a thing except to perhaps make the chapters longer, but then I'm a glutton. You're doing a great job and thanks for the quick updates.-Martine

Reviewer: UncagedMuse/Rae Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 01:42 pm Title: Nine

MORE! I love this so much. Darn Spike for running after the kiss. I can't wait for him to find out Buffy's wants him too darn it. Ok being patient, I'm being patient. Yep gonna wait patiently for the next chp.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 01:22 pm Title: Nine

Wow - that was a quick update! But Buffy didn't do what Doyle told her - to frightning for her? But it least Spike did tell the truth. Now it's on Buffy to hunt him down and tell him :)) We wouldn't love to see Doyle fail, or? :)

Reviewer: Caitie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 01:21 pm Title: Nine

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one as soon as you're able to update. Take care, C ; )

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 01:07 pm Title: Nine

Ohhhhhh... I cannot wait for the Spuffy! (Oh and Xander's just being a butthole. He wants Buffy for himself so he's culling the herd of Spike! I just know it!) spuf

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 12:34 pm Title: Eight

Bill Clinton did say the same thing - no, I didn't have sex with her ... she just did suck my dick. Is this lying to Buffy what Spike does then? ;-) Well... his opinion. I have my own. :) Loved Doyles talk with Spike. Doyle plays matchmaker again :) I hope he'll be succesful *grins*

Reviewer: Caitie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 11:18 am Title: Eight

Great chapter - can't wait for more as soon as you're able to update. Take care, C ; )

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 09:30 am Title: Eight

love doyle in thio story!!!! and cant wait for what's gonna haeppen next.

Reviewer: beasleysmom Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 08:57 am Title: Eight

You have to post like right now! Oh is she gonna tell him? Is he gonna swoop in, take Buffy in his arms and.... okay sorry got a bit carried away there, LOL! I can't wait to see what happens. Great job, Kuddos!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 07:15 am Title: Eight

Color me confused, I thought he came saying Buffy's name while Harmony was.....ewww her lips on his hard member? and if so is he pretending like some famous person that oral suction to the male organ is not considered sex.....or did he call out Buffy's name while Harmony was in the middle of giving him oral pleasure but never completed the deed? I still think Doyle is really a grown man pretending to be a teenaged college student. He's already had his degree in psychology, LOL. I love Doyle in this......

Author's Response: He never completed the deed, and he's hoping that buffy never finds out about it....

Reviewer: Caatje Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 05:46 am Title: Eight

Love this story so much. Can't wait to read how it continues!! Please update soon!

Reviewer: Tasha Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 04:03 am Title: Eight

Oooo ... getting closer to her telling him, and hopefully him telling her. Look forward to the next update.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 04:01 am Title: Eight

I love a good Harmony bashing, she's sooo easy! brillant chapter brat

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Date: 08/30/2005 - 03:32 am Title: Eight

good chappie

Reviewer: Smitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 02:47 am Title: Eight

Awesome Awesome story!! Can't wait for more

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 12:38 am Title: Eight

is she going to tell him!! WOOHOO! cannot wait!!!

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 12:17 am Title: Eight

Doyle is darn cute, hope it makes time with Xander. As for our heros they are so painfully shy about each other. Let's get their future started. Loved this chapter.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2005 - 12:11 am Title: Eight

I don't think I can say it enough, but I love Doyle! He's fabulous and funny, not to mention sweet and dearing. I also love the extreme UST between Buffy and Spike, you have made it perfect. It's definitely enough to keep me coming back for more.

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