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Reviewer: Whitelighter354 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2005 - 01:12 pm Title: Three

Ohh! I love this fic! Im thinkning that Lindsay isnt Angel's. ;) I hope we get to the spuffyness soon! I love the chapter! This is an awesome fic! Please update soon! :) Lighter

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2005 - 01:10 pm Title: Three

"You know why" cryptic much? :) So this is either Spike and Buffy's love child or there is another secret somewhere in there.. aside from the affair. I can't imagine Spike not demanding to be part of his child's life.. so I don't know if it's that. Good chapter. Got the suspense kicked up to a respecctable level.

Reviewer: Suzee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2005 - 01:05 pm Title: Three

I'm glad I could help, this is really a great story so far...and yay for the update :-)

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Date: 10/05/2005 - 12:46 pm Title: Three

I like the set up in this story already, and I enjoy getting the back story in bits and pieces. When did Fred and Angel meet? Had they been having an affair? This is a good premise to get Spike and Buffy back in each other's lives, and the addition of Lindsey makes everything more complicated. Good dialogue and tight chapters are moving this forward quickly.

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2005 - 08:09 pm Title: Chapter Two

I'm liking this so far and I just added it to my favorites so update soon.

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2005 - 08:08 am Title: Prologue - Chapter One

Keep in mind, brown eyes dominate....I have a site I have marked that goes over eye colors of mother and father and the odds of how many kids will have what color eyes......had to go and change one of Giles and Jenny's kids eye color, for he and Jenny would never have a blue eyed child....by genetics.....there is a good chance she'd look like Buffy, but have brown eyes. http://www.athro.com/evo/inherit.html check it out I had such fun with it.....even if you do if fun against the guy you'd want to father your children, LOL.......

Reviewer: jennybean Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2005 - 07:13 am Title: Chapter Two

Great start. You're definitely doing well with the twists. I'm sure all of these people have a past together. It should be interesting to find out what it its.

Reviewer: Flibble Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2005 - 06:11 am Title: Chapter Two

Great start. I like how it moved straight into the main crux of the story really quickly. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2005 - 03:43 am Title: Chapter Two

Gladness that you got rid of Angel so quick, but what a prick!! Great start, cant wait for

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2005 - 03:21 am Title: Prologue - Chapter One

Great a new story, sounds like a great plot as usual, looking forwrd to reading more.

Reviewer: Whitelighter354 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2005 - 01:49 am Title: Chapter Two

OOOHHH!!! I love this fic! It is one of my favorites! You are an awesome writer! Your fics rock!!! I cant wait to see them carry on without them! Please update soon! :) Lighter

Reviewer: spikesbabi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter Two

more!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 10:10 pm Title: Chapter Two

Okay, still beyond confused here. You definitely have me guessing. I can't believe that prick just leaves his family for some chick he just met, I'm assuming that's the case. I never thought I could actually hate Fred, but right now she's a homewrecking bitch. Damn, never thought I would call her that, but that's what I'm seeing. I wanna know more about the past with Buffy and Spike. She probably should have never married Angel in the first place. Still interested to find out more.

Reviewer: lacey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 05:42 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

loved this chapter although im wondering if Linds is Spike's or Angel's either way its great i just hope shes spikes even though that might cause alot of drama but who dosent need alittle drama in there life...lol....Great chapter update soon!!!!!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 05:14 pm Title: Chapter Two

Oh you have me guessing alright.....but I think they'd known if Linds was Angel's vs Spike.....for she would have brown eyes if she was Captain Foreheads........it's going to be interesting with the little things you have dropped who cheated on who or is Spike/William and old family friend who was Buff'y's teenage first love.......the bad boy daddy didn't approve of.......

Author's Response: but she does look just like Buffy . . . Not saying yes, not saying no!

Reviewer: MarstersGirl13 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 05:04 pm Title: Chapter Two

MORE I REALLY LOVE IT

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 04:48 pm Title: Chapter Two

Well, with Angel gone I won't bothering to much about it. When I do - please ignore me. see if I can do twists and make you guess what's really happening.. Yep, you did succeed. :) Looking forward to read more!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 04:34 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

I'll try not to complain that Buffy is with Angel and Spike is with Fred - but its possible that I'll do it. Oh my.. they (Buffy and Spike) were together when 16 but had to part. Wonder what happened in between now and then. And what about Angel leaving with Fred? - on to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Meagan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 03:25 pm Title: Chapter Two

this is the most original story I've read in a long time in the "Buffyverse". Alot of angst from the past and present. I like it alot. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: Confused Muse Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 02:43 pm Title: Chapter Two

The angst hit me in the gut immediately....along with the glimmer of hope that Spike and Buffy will have to work this out together... I love it :)

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 02:35 pm Title: Chapter Two

Sounds like something Angel the jerk would do. Just wanted an easy out. Leaving Buffy and their daughter is unforgiveable. Great story! It makes me feel.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 02:02 pm Title: Chapter Two

good so far

Reviewer: spuffette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 01:49 pm Title: Chapter Two

Someone just shoot Angel, what an ass! Can't say much for Fred either, but i doubt this is something sudden,eh? Anyway, I'm truly gld Spike's hanging around and picking up the pieces!!! spuf

Reviewer: caatje Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 01:30 pm Title: Chapter Two

ah, fabulous, fabulous. This is a great story :-)

Reviewer: prophecygirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2005 - 01:08 pm Title: Chapter Two

Holy crap, I don't think you can write this fast enough for me. Wonderful!

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