

Date: 11/11/2012 - 11:36 am Title: Epilogue
Really enjoyed the story. I think you do a great job exploring the characters' psyches and motivation. Especially loved how insightful William was about sex and how it affected Buffy psychologically, particularly the bit about how he realized after Buffy goaded him into anger sex that Buffy's inexperience meant she didn't know all the mental games lovers can play on each other or that she'd played a dangerous one on herself. Such an accurate and well-illustrated concept, so skillfully descibed.
Plenty of grammar/word mistakes, though, that a good beta could help fix.

Date: 04/17/2009 - 06:06 am Title: Chapter Five
loving it still.....

Date: 04/16/2009 - 09:27 pm Title: Chapter Four
sooooooo sweet, love that William is shy around her :)... more!

Date: 04/16/2009 - 08:53 am Title: Chapter Three
oooo another good one :) more more...

Date: 04/16/2009 - 08:02 am Title: Chapter Two
this is a great story :) love the "gift" many great lines and images in this chapter... cant wait to read the next one.. so am off to do so
thanks :)
~Beth

Date: 04/16/2009 - 07:37 am Title: Chapter One
what a rush :) I love this so far .. cant wait to get to next chappy
thanks for writing and sharing
~Beth

Date: 08/06/2008 - 11:01 pm Title: Epilogue
What an original story! I especially liked the fact that Dru got to be one of the good guys. I always felt this character has so much potential, but she is usually portrayed as nothing nut a loony ho in fan fiction :( Oh, and naming William's penis Spike - that was absolutely hilarious =D

Date: 07/22/2008 - 08:12 pm Title: Epilogue
I absolutely loved this story! I couldn't stop until I finished and I loved all of it!

Date: 05/14/2008 - 02:14 pm Title: Epilogue
aws, i love it =D. i love the whole Buffy/Dru sister thing it was too cute =D. loved the plot of the story though i gotta say it was totally awsome, brilliant job. keep it up ;D

Date: 11/01/2007 - 02:54 am Title: Epilogue
Cute and creative story!

Date: 02/15/2007 - 08:18 pm Title: Chapter Thirty one
damn.....that's all i need to say

Date: 02/15/2007 - 08:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty nine
hooray for want take have...but all the pesky emotions that come with it? that's tough. we all wish we could shut them off but...that's what makes us human

Date: 02/15/2007 - 08:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty eight
what a wonderful way to wake up

Date: 02/15/2007 - 07:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty six
GOOD GIRL

Date: 02/15/2007 - 07:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty four
god, buffy just needs to wake up and smell the hottie. embrace the scary emotions!!

Date: 02/15/2007 - 07:30 pm Title: Chapter Twenty three
bed and breakfest, eh?

Date: 02/15/2007 - 07:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty one
very good 'witchy' ideas

Date: 02/15/2007 - 07:17 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
yay tara!! i love her, i'm glad she's in this story

Date: 02/15/2007 - 07:12 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
ok, at least we're making Spuffy headway

Date: 02/15/2007 - 06:59 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
damn...you know, i go to bookstores a lot...but that never happens to me...go fig

Date: 02/15/2007 - 06:55 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
damn...and just when it was getting all hot...you little minx

Date: 02/15/2007 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
oh, god, a buffy suicide...that just can't happen! stay buffy, staY!!

Date: 02/15/2007 - 06:43 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
brilliant about the suicide thing

Date: 02/15/2007 - 06:38 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
good dream.

Date: 02/15/2007 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter Ten
gee, maybe Dru was just playing matchmaker.