

Date: 11/21/2004 - 01:39 pm Title: And in the End...
Bloody fantastic! Loved it!

Date: 11/21/2004 - 11:58 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this movie! And this a fantastic idea for a spuffy fic and iI get the feeling this gonna be a good one too!

Date: 10/25/2004 - 08:14 pm Title: And in the End...
Wow! This was great! What was the movie called that this was after? If any? Because ppl said there was but I don't know. I loved it.
Author's Response: The story was based on the movie, A Life Less Ordinary. :) It stared Ewan McGregor and Cameron Diaz.

Date: 10/25/2004 - 11:56 am Title: And in the End...
Simply fabulous! Actually I really like the movie that this story was based on by I think you did a better job of it. The writing was witty and fantastistic, plus the ending was so sweet. Love it! Sorry it is at an end.

Date: 10/25/2004 - 11:42 am Title: Chapter 1
I laughed my ass off during most of this fic and it even made me cry. (Which if you knew me was a great accomplishment). I hope that you don't stop writing and I can't wait for your next masterpiece to be written.

Date: 10/05/2004 - 03:59 am Title: Chapter 18
loved the update

Date: 09/17/2004 - 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 17
Wow! I so hope you continue. I love this story no matter what happens.

Date: 09/15/2004 - 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 17
I promised you today - and here I am! Oh - you made it right again! (I'm at hte ILY's now). And bossy Buffy! Well I wonder if Hank has still someone keep an eye on Williams appartment but I fear he will. So William won't be able to get his stuff again. So again, thanks for the big update! Looking forward to No. 18. Maybe I can read them a little sooner than I read 17, Cordykitten

Date: 09/04/2004 - 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 16
thanks for the updates and i hope that william catches up with her before she leaves again

Date: 09/04/2004 - 11:15 am Title: Chapter 16
Hi there, I didn't read this chapter on your LJ yet and now it's here. So to the review: Sorry Buffy had to run off. I sooo hope William is going for her. As I read from their POVs it seems to me that he is ready to forgive her. At last I hope so. Thanks for the update. I'll try and read sooner next time. We'll see if it works ;-)) Cordykitten

Date: 08/31/2004 - 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 14
love the story as always. pleae continue. i am so glad buffy finally said she loved william. yay! please post chapter 16 up soon.

Date: 08/31/2004 - 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 14
i absolutely loved this chapter and i am glad that she told him that she loved him but i dont want him to die please let him be okay

Date: 08/31/2004 - 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 14
To No. 14: I took my time and just read it. At last Buffy did tell him her love and now there's a bullet. Wow. To 15: Now I know why you wrote: Don't hate me. *sigh* I wonder what Buffy was thinking. What she did - did she believe William would never find out? Being the dentist the guy that he is? Did she believe it would not cost her something in her relationship? And then she wonders how Williams reacts. If that was me - William - I would be deeply wounded because of that. Did she think it were less bad what she did instead doing a full treatment? (I'll try to write here without telling to much because Ch. 15 isn't online here.) I'm not able to tell how to understand Buffy. Hoping for Ch. 16 soon! Cordykitten

Date: 08/29/2004 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 12
stupid buffy doesnt she know that he does love her and the shots at the end i t definitely has me on the edge of my seat to see what is going to happen next

Date: 08/29/2004 - 02:48 am Title: Chapter 12
what a way to leave it. i think you just love to make us all squirm- hehhe please write more soon

Date: 08/28/2004 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 12
continue continue continue. i can't wait to see what happens. i hope william is okay. please let him be.

Date: 08/28/2004 - 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 11
still loving this story

Date: 08/26/2004 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 11
i loved the story. continue please. thanx. i can't wait to see if she actually goes with her dad.

Date: 08/24/2004 - 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
still loving this story

Date: 08/15/2004 - 04:30 am Title: Chapter 8
Heya! Instead of LJ I found your update here :-) I'm eager to know if there will be an update of There's a place too, but time will tell. Loved the last one. As you wrote, I hope Buffy and Spike will work everything out. First the money, than the girl LOL. Take care, Cordykitten

Date: 08/14/2004 - 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 8
thanks for this update and just wanted to let you know that i am no longer confused and i cant wait for the next one

Date: 08/09/2004 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ok loved the chapter. Love the story just one thing about it got to me. I dunno if it was deliberate mistake or not. But the geograph thing. Scotland isn't in England. I'm from Scotland, and sometimes people just confuse it, but scotland is not in England. It's just anothe country that makes up a group that makes the United Kingdom. Maybe you knew that i don't know, as i say maybe it was a deliberate thing. But i just had to point it out. But i do love the story, i think it's fab and ure a fab writer. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Jo
Author's Response: I noticed that too but the entire Tod section is directly from the screenplay of A Life Less Ordinary (I added a few lines...) and I think it was the character proving that she could tell Tod just about anything and he'd buy it. But as a whole it was deliberate. ;)

Date: 08/09/2004 - 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just have to say that I am loving this story. It's fresh, fun, and you have me checking daily for updates! Keep up the good work!

Date: 08/09/2004 - 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 7
hey thanks for the update still a little confused but not much....cant wait for more
Author's Response: The next chapter will finally have the talk about thier drunken night of passion, but if you still find yourself confused, tell me and I'll try my best to make it better. ;)

Date: 08/08/2004 - 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 6
thanks for the update for the chapter but it really confused me while i was reading it....did they really regret sleeping with each other?
Author's Response: Let's see...you'll get to know soon but they're pretty much as confused as you are at the moment. :D That doesn't help, does it? Sorry. But you'll get more really soon. I just finished Chapter 7 and if you or anyone else wants it unbet'd just email me: JML12585@aol.com