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Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2008 - 10:13 pm Title: Chapter Six

Getting more interesting.. figure it out Spike..

I like Larry... LOL head games..

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Date: 10/18/2008 - 05:21 pm Title: Chapter Five

Waiting patiently for the trials to begin. Can't wait to read more!

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Date: 10/16/2008 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter Five

Awesome story! You always come up with such cool stuff Holly!

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Date: 10/16/2008 - 06:42 pm Title: Chapter Five

The long, laborious journey was vivid and eerie. The dark silence and Spike's death grip on the rope gave me goosebumps, and they didn't subside until his feet finally hit the ground. Larry was vividly described, but his hideousness went by the wayside when he spoke. He was actually quite personable, offering his dire warnings in a pretty companionable fashion.

I'm sure these trials are going to be tough going, and youi're doing a fantastic job setting us up.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2008 - 05:25 pm Title: Chapter Five

Ah good, recited the rules. Better be save than sorry. Spike doesn't know what awaits him.
The encounter with Larry was almost fun but not for Spike. Larry knew how to play him. And now the trials. I fear that won't be easy.
Enjoyed :)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2008 - 03:33 pm Title: Chapter Five

Good chappie, I'm really enjoying this fic. Spike is so Spike in this , snarky and funny but realizes how serious it is and is willing to do anything for Buffy .
He loves her so much , it's really heartbreaking.*sighs*

Looking forward to the next chapter . I know it's going to get ugly *shudders* More soon please. :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2008 - 02:51 pm Title: Chapter Five

Seems this guardian-Larry talks more than Spike. Trying to trick him in to a mistake I assume..

Waiting to see the tricks he is going to play on Spike so he will make a mistake with one of the three...

Enjoying...

Reviewer: Braydie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2008 - 02:26 pm Title: Chapter Five

This is exciting! :) I'm loving the mythological references too. Can't wait for more. :)*

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2008 - 01:21 pm Title: Chapter Five

Intriguing... I wonder what the challenges are going to be? I hope Spike doen't have to be too patient, although he was incredibly patient with Drusilla when he needed to be so perhaps he'll manage...
More please...

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2008 - 06:45 am Title: Chapter Four

Like Spike, I'm done with teetering on the precipice: I'm gonna let myself get swallowed by the heart of your story. Anticipation becomes the great reveal.

Angst-ridden from the start, but a great chapter round the table. Old grievances aired and shredded and the vampire's guilt the main feature ......

Well done.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2008 - 05:39 pm Title: Chapter Four

Sure love the way Anya tells it like it is! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2008 - 01:34 pm Title: Chapter Four

They thought Dawn wouldn't notice what they did, huh? Dawn is clever even more if it's about something she shouldn't know. (But in this case she should know something.)
Spike is willing to risk all. The others suspected I guess, Xander is just clueless and not willing to accept Spike.
There's no turning back now; looking forward to more. Hopefully Spike will remember the rules.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2008 - 10:25 am Title: Chapter Four

You built unbelievable tension around that dinner table, and when Anya offered up her quirky idea of Buffy's nightmares and Dawn just jumped on the squirrels, the gang's breakdown was almost welcome. It painted a picture of overwhelming emotion, and led believably to Xander's ire and Anya's heart felt speech.

Spike's actually leaving comrades to rescue the woman he loves. There will be a place for him in this family when he comes home. I'm looking forward to his journey to Buffy then back to them all.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2008 - 10:09 am Title: Chapter Four

OMG , I'm so scared for them both , this fic is very exciting Holly , update again soon.

Reviewer: Braydie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2008 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter Four

Oh, you're always good with the cliff-hangers... More, please...? :)*

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2008 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter Four

Another good chappy. Liked the dinner and Spike and Anya telling Xander a few truths. Too bad he's still acting like a twit.
So Spike is off to Hell ,liked him giving his duster to Willow to give to Dawn.

Wonder what NORMAL Hell will be like.

Please more soon , can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2008 - 11:43 pm Title: Chapter Four

Wondering what the rule of three would be...

Different and I like it .. Ah, yes... Xander still a jerk.

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Date: 10/12/2008 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter Four

Can't wait for more of this...I love your stuff!

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Date: 10/12/2008 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter Three

Spike keeping quiet, not wanting to upset Dawn helped focus his feelings for both her and Buffy. Spike wants to do right by Buffy, and realizes the depth of his investment in Dawn's well being, too.

You're doing an excellent job keeping the story moving forward even thought they haven't gone off and pursued Buffy, yet. There's a lot of tension in the planning and the fable telling. The gang's reticence rings true, but I'm delighted that Spike isn't the first one to step off this plane in pursuit of Buffy. They should all be invested, andyou're giving everyone a chance to help.

Reviewer: Dorians Kitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2008 - 02:37 pm Title: Chapter Three

This is brilliant. Soo much better than season six.

I'm thinking her greatest fears: Being a vamp, being insane, being in love with Spike. Oh yeah this could be way good.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2008 - 01:16 pm Title: Chapter Three

Good Spike & Dawn scene at the begin.
I liked too when Anya could show there knowledge.
But it was been a long time ago; I just hope things will go well but I have a feeling that maybe that won't be the case. I'd be glad if Willow would be able to get to know the rule without trouble.

Reviewer: Tiane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2008 - 01:40 am Title: Chapter Three

I love the complexity of this story. I must admit, I'm pretty excited to see where it goes. :)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2008 - 12:54 am Title: Chapter Three

This was another good chappie, at least now they have something to work with . Hopefully now some things will start happening.

Liked Spike's talk with Dawn and the interaction with the Scoobies. More soon please..=)

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2008 - 12:27 am Title: Chapter Three

I can only imagine some of the fears that Buffy has. I'm sure there are so many. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: julie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2008 - 11:23 pm Title: Chapter Three

is this story going to be more about spike's journey through hell to get buffy or more about buffy's struggle when she gets back, i.e. will a significant portion of the story take place in hell?

Author's Response: Yes

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