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Reviewer: Addie Logan Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2004 - 12:04 pm Title: Ask me no Questions

Still really enjoying it. I like that you don't have Buffy and Spike giving into their bond completely immediately, but making them fight the emotional implications a bit instead. I think it makes it more true to Spike and Buffy. One more little nit-picky thing. Spike keeps calling himself a "nonce." "Nonce" is a derogatory term, but it means basically "pedophile." Do you mean "ponce" by chance? That's a term Spike uses a lot...

Reviewer: Addie Logan Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2004 - 11:21 am Title: Pools Of Desire

I'm really enjoying this story. There's a lot of stories out there about Spike and Buffy being "mated," but you seem to be doing it in a new and interesting way. One little nit-picky thing, and this is just the Brit Lit major in me... In 1880--when Spike was turned--most of England was NOT Catholic, but Anglican. As a matter of fact, the Catholics were a marginalized group, with laws put in place to keep them out of government, etc. Also, you had to swear to being a member of the Church of England in order to go to university, which William most likely did. While it's possible that he could've been Catholic, it would have been more likely that he would've been Anglican. Anyway, I doubt you care, I just wanted to point that out. And great story. I'm really enjoying the read!

Reviewer: Kari Mouke Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2004 - 11:19 am Title: The Plot Thickens

Okay, bad Spike for making sexy tongue/teeth face at Faith. He needs to be punished. A spanking might be in order. I loved the update - especially Spike's protectiveness of Buffy in the hospital. More! Please.

Reviewer: English_Chocolate Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2004 - 11:07 am Title: The Plot Thickens

Well i don't like Faith anyways so i'm glad you didn't do the body switching thing. Still liking the story though liked the ending well much. More please

Reviewer: Burnz Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2004 - 07:57 am Title: The Plot Thickens

And so it does. Faith waking up from the coma ready to make amends, Glory kicking butt and taking names and the Dawn epiphany. Whoa, that's quite a bit of thickening. :)

Reviewer: English_Chocolate Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2004 - 06:23 am Title: Escalation

Hey again it's me just finished the next one and i gotta say good stuff again. Domesticated Spike is so funny, thought he has lost a bit of that cockyness from the very first chapter and i am missing that. But still i am lovin it.

Reviewer: English_Chocolate Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2004 - 05:40 am Title: Busted

Finally i can review again, well i just red this yesterday still lovin it. Joyce is always a cool lady. And i like that she likes Spike even after knowing he's a vam n all that. So god job. Off to read the next one now

Reviewer: Burnz Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2004 - 08:43 pm Title: Escalation

Good stuff. You have got quite a bit on your plate. with all the different threats and situations but you are doing a good job of moving your story forward. I like your Spuffy interactions they feel natural and are understandable.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2004 - 04:46 pm Title: Escalation

i definitely loved this chapter so keep up the good work

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2004 - 04:04 pm Title: Escalation

*smile* Thank God for the bond, that they get the others feelings. It's easier this way and more complicated to misunderstood something. And Giles, I think Buffy but be better if she had someone for backup against a hellgod! Cordykitten

Reviewer: ACE Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2004 - 02:04 pm Title: Enemy Mine

Love the story. Your weaving of seasons 4 and 5 are done well. My one complaint. Constructive criticism. Your use of THAN when it should be THEN. This is very distracting to the reader when it's not correct. Otherwise, your grammar is fine.

Reviewer: Ebontier Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2004 - 01:26 pm Title: Enemy Mine

Great story line. However, you use "thAn" instead of "thEn" all the time...why is this? because if you used spell check with word, that chould come up as a grammatical error. You might want to be aware of this, not just in this story, but in whatever you write for school or work...

Reviewer: Bernardette Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2004 - 12:49 pm Title: Escalation

Great Chapter. That about sums it up. Best one yet. Update soon looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Kari Mouke Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2004 - 12:45 pm Title: Escalation

You know, that was your best chapter yet, and that's saying something 'cause they're all pretty darn good. This was so well written, and you could feel as Buffy and Spike's emotions started to take a genuine, un-boundy type of a turn. It was nicely done. The sex made me wince - I loved it. Thanks for this sweet little update. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Kari Mouke Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2004 - 08:25 am Title: Busted

Glad that Joyce is being so understanding. I like the way you played out the quick peek at Dawn and Spike on the couch. Very well done. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: crackers4jenn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2004 - 06:35 am Title: Busted

I love this story. The early season stuff is so one of my kinks. I especially like how you write Spike - like the chemistry you build up between him and Buffy. Very nice, and great writing.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2004 - 05:25 am Title: Busted

Oh busted - Joyce found them. Seems somebody has lost track of time *smile* [Cute they help dresses each other. Just like an old coulple (in the sense of being together long)] Oh - spewing his hot coco - wishi I could have seen it - but the poor one is banned to the basement :-( Ah, you brought the key in! And Glory. Glad too that Spike wont stay in the basement :) I don't care so much for the canon of the BVerse, as long as the characters are acting right when it does the story good. Cordykitten all

Reviewer: Bernardette Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2004 - 02:35 am Title: Busted

Great story. Can feel the emotion in your writing. Please continue to update and soon

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2004 - 08:06 pm Title: Busted

very good update i am still hooked on this story

Reviewer: tayhaangel Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2004 - 08:06 pm Title: Busted

god joyce is understanding. i am 22 and my mum would kill me and me beau if she even caught us kissing. great work

Reviewer: Bloodshedbaby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2004 - 01:31 am Title: Enemy Mine

Dang! check it out! It's my girls! (or guys, if you are of that gender) We have Burnz, Scherezade, Kari, Cordy and if I missed anyone, sorry!! I'm feeling a whole lotta love in this review box. Yep. Sure do. Love this story! KariMouke will tell you that I bullied her into beta'ing her fics. i'm a ruthless cow., you know. So if you need any help in that area, let me know!!

Reviewer: Bloodshedbaby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2004 - 01:29 am Title: Enemy Mine

Dang! check it out! It's my girls! (or guys, if you are of that gender) We have Burnz, Scherezade, Kari, Cordy and if I missed anyone, sorry!! I'm feeling a whole lotta love in this review box. Yep. Sure do. Love this story! KariMouke will tell you that I bullied her into beta'ing her fics. i'm a ruthless cow., you know. So if you need any help in that area, let me know!!

Reviewer: English_Chocolate Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2004 - 07:41 am Title: Interlude

Well i haven't reviewed for a while so it's my turn now, been away for a couple of days so its nice to come home to a good story. Great chapter as ever. Interludes are always nice :) hehe loved the ending... i just they way u end the chapters. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2004 - 05:35 pm Title: Interlude

thank you for this incredible update i loved it and i hope that buffy decides to stay with spike

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2004 - 04:51 pm Title: Interlude

A big thanks for the update - if it was only a interlude or not. So Riley starts to get into play? Hope he want interfere and Buffy and Spike have a chance to talk. Cordykitten

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