

Date: 10/22/2004 - 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Recording Part 1
I'll stay tuned ;-) Evil cliffhanger :) Have a nice vacation! Cordykitten

Date: 10/16/2004 - 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Getting To Know You
i absolutly love it i need more its soooooo good!!!!

Date: 10/16/2004 - 01:08 am Title: Prologue - Deadline
wow.... here i am pointing fault at your writing and i can't even spell my own message right! sorry about all the mistakes in my previous post!!! :S
Author's Response: I am trying to work on that. Unfortunately most of my past writing has been for business where contractions are evil. Thanks for reading!

Date: 10/16/2004 - 01:07 am Title: Prologue - Deadline
fantabulous story- absolutely loving it! just one thing, and please don't take offense, but the dialogue is seeming too structures- it doent read as though people are speaking it. for example "oh, it is ok. i had not really thought......" instead, maybe something like 'oh that's ok, i haven't thought...." or soemthing along those lines. I think abbreviation is the key- I'm not I am, don't instead of do not, that's not that is.... you get the drift. But apart from that, this is an incredibly captivatign story!!!

Date: 10/15/2004 - 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Getting To Know You
incredible update

Date: 10/15/2004 - 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Getting To Know You
Thanks for updating! I really like the way you're biulding up the tension between the two. Keep going!

Date: 10/15/2004 - 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Getting To Know You
I know what you mean about the smoochies sweetie....gah.........what woman wouldn't go nuts for his smoochies? :D can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your continued support. I am such a big fan of your stuff, it means a lot. BTW, you were right about the No Doubt comparison.

Date: 10/15/2004 - 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Getting To Know You
Tnx for the update! I'm looking forward to the next chapter - breakfast, mmmh. Cordykitten

Date: 10/08/2004 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The Shoot
I just read all the chapters and I'm loving it so far. (i'm slow at catching up) sounds alot like No Doubt...hmmmmm....*giggles* I love how you've worked it into this story so far. Can't wait for more!!! :D

Date: 10/08/2004 - 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The Shoot
definitely looking forward to the next update i am loving this story very much

Date: 10/08/2004 - 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The Shoot
Hey, I really like this one and hope for a quick update ;)
Date: 10/08/2004 - 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The Shoot
looking forward to it! update quicker, cause if not i have to reread the last chapter and it sucks.
Author's Response: I could not tell by the review if you like or hate it. I am hoping for the former.

Date: 10/08/2004 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The Shoot
I never thought I would say this: I'm looking forward to that sushi
;-)) Cordykitten
Author's Response: So am I, in more ways than one. Thanks for reading.

Date: 10/08/2004 - 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 4 - The Shoot
Cute chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks. Gotta build up that background before we can get to the smut : )

Date: 10/05/2004 - 02:20 am Title: Chapter 3 - Meeting
absolutely loved it
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your support. It means a lot and I promise, this story will live up to its NC-17 soon.

Date: 09/29/2004 - 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Hidden
thank god that they meet next chapter. i dont think i can stand any more sexual tension . hehehehe

Date: 09/13/2004 - 06:32 pm Title: Prologue - Deadline
Like the story and will continue to read. Would like to see " and ' used to make your fic easier to read though.

Date: 09/13/2004 - 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Slayer
still loving it keep up the good work

Date: 09/13/2004 - 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Slayer
Like it so far! Cordykitten

Date: 09/08/2004 - 04:22 am Title: Prologue - Deadline
Hey, Tara: Excellent beginning with fabulous potential. You're right about needing a beta, though. Once you get that minor detail taken care of, it's full speed ahead. I really liked it.

Date: 09/07/2004 - 09:00 pm Title: Prologue - Deadline
I like your names for things. Playing at the crypt, name of the band is Slayer. It's cute. And it looks like an interesting story. Can't wait to see where it takes you. Oh and Spikikins is priceless.

Date: 09/07/2004 - 06:53 pm Title: Prologue - Deadline
i am definitely loving this story so far so please continue!!!