Date: 10/22/2013 - 03:37 pm Title: ...Shall Set You Free
Really lame reason why she takes the beatings. He does it over and over and she stooped reporting him cause it was easier? I don't like this part I think it's weak but I do like everything g else so far and I'll keep reading.
[Report This]Date: 07/03/2012 - 03:23 am Title: Surprises
Pretty good story! Has some need for editing to be truly great. I do like that Buffy defended herself, but the domestic violence/rape/Spike's retaliation seemed rushed overall. But I understand it's hard to get through so much heavy subject matter and keep the story a romance... I think I'd have toned down the abuse/rape stuff and left Riley's big villainy to be what he did to Angel. That way, one doesn't question why Buffy, if she's so strong-willed, would let Riley get away withall that (the explanation in the story was a little thin). But overall, good story.
[Report This]Date: 07/07/2010 - 06:06 pm Title: Surprises
Oh, I absolutely loved the ending. What a good story. It had me worried here and there but ending perfectly.
[Report This]Date: 01/07/2009 - 11:33 pm Title: Surprises
oh..what a lovely ending!
[Report This]Date: 09/11/2008 - 01:00 am Title: Surprises
Another great story from Ashlee :) What I liked the most is that Buffy wasn't a damsel in distress but rather gave Riley everything she got, without Spike's help.
Date: 03/09/2008 - 09:54 pm Title: Surprises
I'm glad you decided to post it, it was a lovley story. Thanks for sharing!
[Report This]Date: 06/02/2007 - 01:02 am Title: Fighting Back
I agree, it was right for her to save herself
[Report This]Date: 12/28/2006 - 02:23 pm Title: Surprises
This story is fabolous
[Report This]Date: 12/09/2005 - 11:06 am Title: Surprises
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! *sniffle-sniffle! wow awesome story!!
[Report This]Date: 10/31/2005 - 02:42 pm Title: Surprises
LOVE THIS STORY! Great job Ashlee!
Date: 02/06/2005 - 03:10 am Title: Surprises
Thanks Ashlee for another great story! :D
Date: 01/04/2005 - 04:14 pm Title: Surprises
I don't know. It was good, but kind of too corny to have the Riley beating Buffy scenes in and I guess the writing could have abeen a bit stronger along with the plot. I guess the story just didn't do it for me. I'm more into the melodramatic, drug-addict, depressing stories with the dramtic writing like what Mrs. Muir writes. But, I suppose anybody who's into the happy-happy-joy-joy type would really like this story. But, I was pleased to see good grammar. I'm a grammar addict! Bad quotations, spelling, ect. just drives me up the wall.
Date: 12/18/2004 - 04:29 am Title: Surprises
*tear & a big smile* I love happy endings!!
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2004 - 03:03 am Title: Surprises
loved it....will there be a sequel?
Author's Response: Sorry, no plans for a sequel. I think the story has run its course, but I'm happy you like it!
[Report This]Date: 10/01/2004 - 04:58 pm Title: Surprises
aww, that was so sweet. great story, loved how it ended
[Report This]Date: 09/30/2004 - 05:08 pm Title: Surprises
awwwwwwwwww I loved it. *sighs happily* nothing better than sweet spuffyness.
[Report This]Date: 09/30/2004 - 04:50 pm Title: Surprises
That was a really sweet ending. :)
[Report This]Date: 09/30/2004 - 04:22 pm Title: Surprises
Such a sweet ending. Your fics ( and there seems to be lots on the go - dont know how you do it) are a enjoy pleasure to read! Thanks
[Report This]Date: 09/30/2004 - 04:02 pm Title: Surprises
Well, that was a beautiful end, to a wonderful stor. Thank you for sharing it.
[Report This]Date: 09/30/2004 - 03:09 pm Title: Surprises
Oh, another lovely fic comming to an end. I loved reading it. And loved the end. Going to read the other fic of yours now. Cordykitten
[Report This]Date: 09/29/2004 - 07:57 pm Title: Making Up
awwwwwwwww...that was sweet. *sighs happily* spuffy goodness for all.
[Report This]Date: 09/28/2004 - 03:04 pm Title: It's Raining, It's Pouring
I'm glad that they are good again! Cordykitten
[Report This]Date: 09/27/2004 - 04:23 pm Title: Oh Bollocks
OHHHHHHHH you are CRUEL!!! and i bet you're sitting there rubbing your hands together and giggling aren't you? YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOOOOOON!!!! Please? I'll send sexy spike pics to you if you do. Great chapters by the way, and i'm loving this story.
[Report This]Date: 09/27/2004 - 03:10 pm Title: Oh Bollocks
Yes, he bollocksed this up. I really hope it isn't as it looks.