
Date: 01/13/2005 - 04:19 pm Title: Learning
I stumbled across this story today, and just wanted to let you know how mch I love it thus far! There are far too many unrealistic Spuffy fics out there in which Spuffiness ensues right of the bat, so I was glad to read one like this in which the tension between them seems to just be building up now, much as know Spuffiness will ensue.
Date: 01/13/2005 - 04:18 pm Title: Learning
I stumbled across this story today, and just wanted to let you know how mch I love it thus far! There are far too many unrealistic Spuffy fics out there in which Spuffiness ensues right of the bat, so I was glad to read one like this in which the tension between them seems to just be building up now, much as know Spuffiness will ensue.
Date: 01/13/2005 - 03:15 pm Title: Crushing
I'm waiting and waiting for a smidgen of attraction between Spike and Buffy. But nothing coming except for Anya and Spike (bad pun I know but trying to find incentive to read more...). Is this Spuffy? Don't mind me! I'll just try my luck in the next chapter!
Date: 01/13/2005 - 09:08 am Title: Introductions
Fine sex scene, just the thought of spike and anya is a little disturbing.......... keep up the good work:)
Date: 01/13/2005 - 08:04 am Title: Learning
Love the way Spike was played by Buffy. hope tat she will be impressed by his bartending skills.
Date: 01/13/2005 - 07:15 am Title: Learning
I love this story keep it coming
Date: 01/13/2005 - 04:12 am Title: Learning
I am really enjoying this story, well writen & a good plot, well paced
Date: 01/13/2005 - 01:08 am Title: Learning
love it love the spike and buffy challage you got going at the end very cool update soon will read more luvs tina
Date: 01/13/2005 - 01:01 am Title: Introductions
Hey great story so far but i don't really like that seen no you wrote it well for how you wanted to write but im not the kind for spike and other people will read on though good job so far
Date: 01/13/2005 - 12:56 am Title: Learning
The story is coming along good. Keep up the good work.
Date: 01/13/2005 - 12:03 am Title: Learning
i like this story a lot and cant wait to know more so please update soon thanx
Date: 01/12/2005 - 10:34 pm Title: Explanations
lots of prospects...didn't like spike and anya smut either...it was rather painful ;) anyhow...i bet we're looking at a long story...with lots of UST right? right? anyhow...hope you update soon thanx
Date: 01/12/2005 - 01:46 am Title: Introductions
great job on the sex scene. I'm going to say something and please don't take it as negative feedback, just something to think about. I am a beta reader and one of the things I warn my authors about is redundancy in plot. By that I mean you put Spike and Buffy in a AU situation have then have hot monkey sex and fall in love. Yes, the sex scenes are great but the plot is done Way TOO MUCH. aND IT IS GETTING OLD. Which is why I suggested the Anya thing. For a new twist. For some flavor. So this isn't a critiscism but you asked for feedback and I wanted to give you what I thought. Now that you have it maybe you can add some flavor.
Date: 01/12/2005 - 01:20 am Title: Explanations
wondering how the first meeting between those two would work out....
Date: 01/11/2005 - 09:25 pm Title: Introductions
Just ignore all the people who are yelling at your for the Spike/Anya-ness. It's part of the story, and if they want no spike/anya they can go off and write their own story. I like it so far! Keep it up.
Date: 01/11/2005 - 08:20 pm Title: Explanations
Yeah...wasn't so much into the Anya/SPike smut either...but you gotta do what you gotta do. You have a vision for the story, so you have to go with that. :) That being said,I can't wait to see where this goes...and I can't wait till the big meeting with Buffy and Spike!
Date: 01/11/2005 - 08:10 pm Title: Explanations
hi i just read it for the first time and i am loving it so far
Date: 01/11/2005 - 07:51 pm Title: Explanations
omg this story is/ going to be really good i can just tell. i realy like it and cant wait to read more please update soon
Date: 01/11/2005 - 07:40 pm Title: Explanations
I liked it. It was nicethat Anya explained about her relationship with Spike, makes the smut more bearable :)
Date: 01/11/2005 - 05:09 pm Title: Introductions
evil! I hate reading about other ppl with buffy or spike. too bad thought this would be a good spuffy.
Date: 01/11/2005 - 05:07 pm Title: Introductions
I'm liking it alot so far and cudos to your first sex scene. They're really hard to write the first time but you'll get the hang of it . :D can't wait for more!!!
Date: 01/11/2005 - 04:45 pm Title: The Hiring
Yes, please keep going with this story!
Date: 01/11/2005 - 04:34 pm Title: Introductions
Really didn't like to have to read about Spike screwing Anya. Hope this is only a one-time thing. Remember spuffy sensitive here.
Date: 01/11/2005 - 04:01 pm Title: Introductions
I DIDN'T EXSPECT THE ANYA AND SPIKE THING. NICE!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY
Date: 01/11/2005 - 01:24 pm Title: Introductions
I say keep it in- I'm assuming Anya and Spike are going to hook up whilst living with Buffy above the bar, and of course Buffy will get upset about that...sorry, I'm babbling, but great job:)