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Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2005 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 10 Nothing Would Ever be the Same Again

Aww! finally the Spuffyness! I totally lovedc these last bunch of chapters! I'm sorry that I couldn't read or veiew them bevfore, but I was internet-less and suffering from a horrible weekend! From now on, though I'll be able to read and review lots! Please update soon, because I can hardly wait for more!

Reviewer: lindsay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2005 - 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 10 Nothing Would Ever be the Same Again

wow more please, soon lol.This is great!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2005 - 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 10 Nothing Would Ever be the Same Again

great updates

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2005 - 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 8 Jealousy?

great updates

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2005 - 03:39 am Title: Chapter 8 Jealousy?

Can't wait for the other chapters, lol :)

Reviewer: Ebontier Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2005 - 12:56 am Title: Prologue

I like your story, you have a really good, original idea going here. However, I was really distraced by your grammar. You use a lot of the wrong tenses, like " Will knew they were getting nowhere with this, plus he would like to know just how many girls will be interested in him." The poor sentence construction throws people off. A beta would really help with this, and you would get a lot more hit and readers. Don't get me wrong, you have a GREAT story idea. You just need to clean the chapter up a little so people can get *really* trapped in your stories instead of stumbling over mismatched verbs and the like.

Author's Response: You know...I've been getting that a lot but since this is an old fic, I can't really change much. And i'll try to scamper off a beta somewhere... a proper one but some take so long delays the story and it takes me long to write a chap as it is. But don't worry a part of this story was beta-ed by alison but sadly she became busy with work so she could only do part of it. I'm sure in the later chapters the grammer would get better.

Reviewer: lindsay Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2005 - 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 8 Jealousy?

please keep it coming

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2005 - 04:33 am Title: Chapter 7 Buffy night

So Riley is in the game now, and Spike and Harm are fighting ... Looking forward to more, I know it is getting better (I took a quick look at the other chapters that are online and I'm so looking forward to read the other ones) *smile*

Author's Response: Cheating aren't we... tsktsk... *grins*

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2005 - 04:27 am Title: Chapter 6 The whole night…?

I love the spuffyness, but I'm not really looking forward to the S/H and B/R part..... *sigh* next chapter now.

Reviewer: lindsay Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2005 - 01:41 am Title: Chapter 7 Buffy night

wow please ipdate soon. It's killing me to see what happens!!!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2005 - 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 5 Harmony is in the Air

I've seen this fic before but I wasn't able to read it... I'll try to do it here!

Reviewer: lindsay Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2005 - 03:16 am Title: Chapter 5 Harmony is in the Air

God i ahte harmony but i trust in your love for spuffy! it sucked me in please keep writing!!!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 5 Harmony is in the Air

great update i am glad that harmony told him the truth instead of hiding it

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 5 Harmony is in the Air

Wow! I can't believe that noone noticed that you'd skipped chapter 2, how funny! lol! I really like this fic, so please update soon! I can hardly wait for more!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2005 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 4 The scar... cute?

loving it so far

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2005 - 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 4 The scar... cute?

Awww! Theswe last two chapters hav been so sweeet! And two chapters, since I last checked! I was so excited! Ican hardly wait for more, so please update soon!

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2005 - 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1 How it all started

Wow! Great beginning for a fic! I can't wait for more, so pretty please, update soon!

Reviewer: Laine Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2005 - 07:35 am Title: Chapter 1 How it all started

really intrigued by where you're going with this... hope you update...

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